Critique this sig in progress. - Page 4

ShunNakamura · 07-09-2006, 08:46 PM

Is this any better(killed the stroke, and changed up the font a bit)?

Owen Macwere · 07-09-2006, 08:48 PM

yep, the text is alot better but the render is still stolen. you got to ease off your background alittle, it is too colourful.

Genji · 07-09-2006, 09:05 PM

I don't think it looks that bad. Its a dark type of signature. How is it too colorful, Owen? Its red and black...

Anyway, I think its fine. My only suggestion would be to make it so the red parts are a little more red, they look somewhat magenta to me.

Owen Macwere · 07-09-2006, 09:22 PM

nah, I mean the render is not shown very well, so he needs to reduse the colours of the background to let it show. that's what I ment.

Genji · 07-09-2006, 09:23 PM

I think the render is fine.

ShunNakamura · 07-09-2006, 09:30 PM

Originally Posted by Genji

Anyway, I think its fine. My only suggestion would be to make it so the red parts are a little more red, they look somewhat magenta to me.

Redder... Glad I saved it with the background in three layers. I should be able to do that.

new redder

old less red

Owen Macwere · 07-09-2006, 09:32 PM

ok,ok. just thought to help. anyway I always like the render to be shown clearly.
and Shun, these are alot better, I like their soft edges.

Genji · 07-09-2006, 09:35 PM

The new one is better if you ask me. I like that signature a lot. Its bloody/dark, and its got a hooded guy with a sword. I like how he pops out from the background, because of the shadow behind his sword.

ShunNakamura Grimoire of the Sages Location: Northwest Ohio	#25 Is this any better(killed the stroke, and changed up the font a bit)?
07-09-2006, 08:46 PM

Owen Macwere MacWerewolf Location: With the angel that saved my world!	#26 (permalink) yep, the text is alot better but the render is still stolen. you got to ease off your background alittle, it is too colourful.
07-09-2006, 08:48 PM

Genji Banned Location: Ostrheinsburg Castle	#27 (permalink) I don't think it looks that bad. Its a dark type of signature. How is it too colorful, Owen? Its red and black... Anyway, I think its fine. My only suggestion would be to make it so the red parts are a little more red, they look somewhat magenta to me.
07-09-2006, 09:05 PM

Owen Macwere MacWerewolf Location: With the angel that saved my world!	#28 (permalink) nah, I mean the render is not shown very well, so he needs to reduse the colours of the background to let it show. that's what I ment.
07-09-2006, 09:22 PM

Genji Banned Location: Ostrheinsburg Castle	#29 (permalink) I think the render is fine.
07-09-2006, 09:23 PM

ShunNakamura Grimoire of the Sages Location: Northwest Ohio	#30 (permalink) Originally Posted by Genji Anyway, I think its fine. My only suggestion would be to make it so the red parts are a little more red, they look somewhat magenta to me. Redder... Glad I saved it with the background in three layers. I should be able to do that. new redder old less red
07-09-2006, 09:30 PM

Owen Macwere MacWerewolf Location: With the angel that saved my world!	#31 (permalink) ok,ok. just thought to help. anyway I always like the render to be shown clearly. and Shun, these are alot better, I like their soft edges.
07-09-2006, 09:32 PM

Genji Banned Location: Ostrheinsburg Castle	#32 (permalink) The new one is better if you ask me. I like that signature a lot. Its bloody/dark, and its got a hooded guy with a sword. I like how he pops out from the background, because of the shadow behind his sword.
07-09-2006, 09:35 PM