Critique this sig in progress. - Page 22

ShunNakamura · 09-04-2006, 03:04 AM

On another forum I offered to make some banners for a group. They liked my current one(in my sig) so I decided to take this chance to go back and modify that one.

One of the changes they wanted was another character(well ok I guess you could call it another form of the same character) put in where the man on the right was at.

And I got three of them.

Just a straight change.

Spiced up.

Borderfied.

Owen Macwere · 09-04-2006, 01:29 PM

The first version with that monster is really cool!. I like the other too but they don't seem so visible. about the border, it is nice, but your first ones were better. :P

ShunNakamura · 09-05-2006, 01:01 AM

Working on a new idea tell me what you think. Just remember this is definately a work in progress, and is also my first attempt at such a ... theme?

Need to smooth it out and clean it up a bit.... plus I plan to backgroundify the white tag. In addition there are plenty of finishing touches that can be added to it.

I think in order to get the engraving feel on it I need to do some further blending on the pictures. The currently stand out too much, yes? I also plan to find one more picture to put on the spare chip, but I am out of them for now.

Owen Macwere · 09-05-2006, 02:15 PM

Cool style!.

I want to review it fully when it done, so hurry up.

ShunNakamura · 09-06-2006, 06:09 AM

Well now that I finally finished cutting that final image for it here is what I got further along.
Concept v2 of the Memory sig.

I am still looking for places of improvement. Also I am worried I may have made the images a bit too blended. Plus I am not sure if I should have textured the slot like I did.

ShunNakamura · 03:33 AM

LOOONG time no sig. Made two more while on break at the college. All in GIMP. My old laptop can't handle much else(actually it barely handles gimp.... talk about slow). But anyways cause of the crappyness of this comp I just can do basic stuff, no ultrafancy filters or script-fu for me.

edit
This was the last one I did while at college on my laptop.

and of course as usual my text is bad(not that I got many fonts to choose from on this thing.... that and win98 is being a real pain on that issue for some reason).

Torak · 09-20-2006, 07:20 AM

1st and 2nd are quite nice, the 3rd seems a bit pixely to me.

ShunNakamura · 09-20-2006, 06:34 PM

Yeah I have been using real low quality images for all but the first of those. So I have tried some ways of covering it up/blending it in. Probably pixelated the whole one trying it in the last one.

Anyways a new one, done on campus computer so I have a lack of brushes and text big time.

Owen Macwere MacWerewolf Location: With the angel that saved my world!	#170 (permalink) The first version with that monster is really cool!. I like the other too but they don't seem so visible. about the border, it is nice, but your first ones were better. :P
09-04-2006, 01:29 PM

Owen Macwere MacWerewolf Location: With the angel that saved my world!	#172 (permalink) Cool style!. I want to review it fully when it done, so hurry up.
09-05-2006, 02:15 PM

ShunNakamura Grimoire of the Sages Location: Northwest Ohio	#173 (permalink) Well now that I finally finished cutting that final image for it here is what I got further along. Concept v2 of the Memory sig. I am still looking for places of improvement. Also I am worried I may have made the images a bit too blended. Plus I am not sure if I should have textured the slot like I did.
09-06-2006, 06:09 AM

Torak Banned Location: Australia	#175 (permalink) 1st and 2nd are quite nice, the 3rd seems a bit pixely to me.
09-20-2006, 07:20 AM

ShunNakamura Grimoire of the Sages Location: Northwest Ohio	#176 (permalink) Yeah I have been using real low quality images for all but the first of those. So I have tried some ways of covering it up/blending it in. Probably pixelated the whole one trying it in the last one. Anyways a new one, done on campus computer so I have a lack of brushes and text big time.
09-20-2006, 06:34 PM