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[ShunNakamura]

Originally Posted by Owen Macwere

Yes, it is nice I like the colouring and the place you put the render in. nice work, Shun.

Thanks ,

And here is my newest... I didn't spend as much time as I liked... plus I lost a bit when the power died here... but I think I managed to redo everything that had been changed since the last save... thank goodness I save often.

[Owen Macwere]

erm, I don't love it. but I like it, I guess what I don't love is the pics they are not that visible, duh, you know me :I I love visible things. but over all it is nice, yes I like it. good work.

[ShunNakamura]

Originally Posted by Owen Macwere

erm, I don't love it. but I like it, I guess what I don't love is the pics they are not that visible, duh, you know me :I I love visible things. but over all it is nice, yes I like it. good work.

Hmm.. the image visibilty was bugging me at the time of posting. However, maintaining both the misty/shadowy feel and sharpening the image escaped me at the time.

Though I went back and played with it a bit. I also shrunk it a tad so I could save it as a png(png's colors are better then jpgs....). The jpg colors are a tad duller than the original file. though maybe that is just me(either way I like it better smaller anyways).


new

jpg of new

old

This wasn't anything much, all I did was use an individual highpass overlay on the three images, however, they are a bit more lively in this version. Why I didn't think of doing that originally is beyond me.

[Owen Macwere]

yeah, I guess the .png is alot better, but you can still play around with it, go one boy. :P

[ShunNakamura]

I tried to darken it a bit. A bit too.... pale and colorless I thought. The first one I think I got it too dark... the third I am liking, it is stronger without being too strong. The second is only the old one for comparison sake.

[ShunNakamura]

Sorry for the double post.... However, I got a new one, even if it is lacking in several areas(hey I am tired, been out in the sun working too long... but can't sleep yet, had to do something so sig making I a go!).

[Owen Macwere]

the pink one is nice... the render matchs with the background. and everything is good. hmmm... you need new fonts man.

[ShunNakamura]

Originally Posted by Owen Macwere

the pink one is nice... the render matchs with the background. and everything is good. hmmm... you need new fonts man.

Heh, I really stink at finding fonts. How did someone put it? I have a natural talent at selecting the worst ones :P. or something along those lines.

Anyways I got myself some new ones(two of which are present in the sig I will be showing now).



Not done yet. No border(wonder if it even needs one?) and the edges are somewhat rough. However, my hands aren't steady today, so I can't go out and manually smooth them up like I normally due(also cause of that the renders may be rougher then usual).

Once I get a bit more steady I will try the Sig with brown and white colors in the background(the only reason I used the pastels color is cause my freinds shirt that inspired this is a pastel pink).

I am really feeling out of it