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Pink Grin something nice for my GF.

well anyways its 1337 here i forgot what hotmail account i used for that account. also forgot the password anyways im wanting an honest opion on something.

Well anyways i just heard a song that i felt related to me and my girlfriend, well anyways i re-worded the song, i felt that it would be something nice i could do for her when i next see her making it more of mine and her song if ya get me, anyways i know some of you will think i have just wrecked the song sort of thing but i fell as if it is something nice i could do for her. well anyways i just want you all to tell me what you think.

this is the orginal
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZKGQs...e=channel_page


and this is how i reworded it

We were both young, when I first meet you.
I closed my eyes and the flashback starts
I'm standing there, on a street in spring air.

I See the lights, see the Crowds and the drunken clowns.
I See you make your way through the crowd
You say hello, little did I know...

That you were Dannii, you were just walking
And my mind said "stay away from Dannii"
And I was crying on the staircase
begging you please don't go...
And I said...

Luke take me somewhere we can be alone.
I'll be waiting; all there's left to do is run.
You be the princess and I'll be the prince,
It's a love story,
baby, just say yes.

So I sneak out of work to see you.
We kept quiet, cause you we're sleeping
So close your eyes...
escape this town for a little while.
Oh, Oh.

Cause you were Dannii- I was the broken one,
And my mind said "stay away from Dannii"
but you were everything to me-
I was begging you, please don't go
And I said...

Luke take me somewhere we can be alone.
I'll be waiting; all there's left to do is run.
i'll be the prince and you'll be the princess.
It's a love story,
baby, just say yes-

Luke please save me, they're trying to tell me how to feel.
This love is difficult, but it's real to me and you.
Don't be afraid, we'll make it out of all of this.
It's a love story,
baby, just say yes.

Oh, Oh.

But I got tired of waiting,
Wondering if you were ever coming around.
My faith in you was fading
When I met you on the outskirts of college.
And I said...

Dannii please take me, I've been feeling so alone.
I keep waiting, for you but you never come.
Is this in my head, I don't know what to think
You turned to me,
and said

Luke go back out with me, you'll never have to be alone.
I love you, and that's all I really know.
i'll be the princess and i'll be the prince.
It's a love story, baby just say... yes.
Oh, Oh,
Oh, Oh, Oh.
Old 07-05-2009, 02:36 AM
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That's cute! I think any girl would like that. I know I like when I feel like a princess.
Old 07-05-2009, 02:39 AM
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Thank you very much ^_^ im just hoping she likes it too when i get to see her next ^_^
Old 07-05-2009, 02:43 AM
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Well there are a few ladies around impervious to the serenade (even maybe just makes things worse) but good on you anyway, fine sir
Old 07-05-2009, 03:26 AM
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well i hope she likes it thats why im asking you lot if you think she will :P
Old 07-05-2009, 03:30 AM
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I know I like feeling like a princess... too! much
Old 07-05-2009, 11:28 AM
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Something nice for your GF, eh? How about a nice HP-J Scroll?

Well, it would make a nice addition to the song.
Old 07-05-2009, 02:07 PM
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