New drawing - Page 2

black orb · 12-10-2006, 10:45 PM

>>> Its not a bad drawing, maybe the only problem is the head`s width and its position, it seem kind of odd..
I did a minor change so you can see what im talking about..

41-Inches-Wide · 12-11-2006, 06:10 AM

THAT LOOKS JUST ABOUT THE SADDEST GIRL EVER.

Her hair seems transparent (her ribbon at the back is showing through her hair), that's the only thing I noticed.
Beautiful work Miss Yuna.

Yunas ballad · 12-11-2006, 08:23 AM

thanks everyone. =)

fire_of_avalon · 12-11-2006, 06:05 PM

My only negative criticism about the piece is the slackness of the face. I believe that you were going for an image of sadness and tiredness at the same time, but it only looks blank to me.

However, the position of the body is absolutely wonderful. She looks very dejected, unwanted and defensive. That's pretty sad, I reckon, but you conveyed it very well.

41-Inches-Wide Special Location: Table of Elememts	#10 (permalink) THAT LOOKS JUST ABOUT THE SADDEST GIRL EVER. Her hair seems transparent (her ribbon at the back is showing through her hair), that's the only thing I noticed. Beautiful work Miss Yuna.
12-11-2006, 06:10 AM

Yunas ballad Location: In a pool of blood on the bathroom floor	#11 (permalink) thanks everyone. =)
12-11-2006, 08:23 AM

fire_of_avalon Cid's Knight Same Bat Time .... Location: Same Bat Channel	#12 (permalink) My only negative criticism about the piece is the slackness of the face. I believe that you were going for an image of sadness and tiredness at the same time, but it only looks blank to me. However, the position of the body is absolutely wonderful. She looks very dejected, unwanted and defensive. That's pretty sad, I reckon, but you conveyed it very well.
12-11-2006, 06:05 PM