critisism please - Page 3

Laugh at face of Danger · 08-24-2005, 07:38 PM

YAY! A DRAGON!

the cartoon is funny, i love the little *DEAD*

you've got it to a T, the simple things in life are best

Master Quan · 08-24-2005, 11:56 PM

Originally Posted by ShunNakamura

It looks like a statue that has no emotion...

IT'S A DRAGON.

IBCrayZ · 08-25-2005, 12:23 AM

If it had been anything more than a head shot their would have been some emotion. Maybe some snarling or something.

ShunNakamura · 08-25-2005, 04:25 AM

Originally Posted by Master Quan

Originally Posted by ShunNakamura

It looks like a statue that has no emotion...

IT'S A DRAGON.

Point being? it is deadpaned. The eyes could have been narrowed or whatever. Dragon's do have emotions afterall.. even if it is always anger( and I dont' believe that .. but some do).

Also remember headshots are still good ways to put in emotion.. just slight colorations in the eyes, changes in shape of eyes(slight), and the way the head is held can convay a lot. And I just wnated to let you know that while it is asthetically good looking(not great but good) it is .... well ... deadpan when emotion could have made it alot better.

Master Quan · 08-25-2005, 10:45 AM

Originally Posted by ShunNakamura

Originally Posted by Master Quan

Originally Posted by ShunNakamura

It looks like a statue that has no emotion...

IT'S A DRAGON.

Point being?......Dragon's do have emotions afterall..

Dragons don't have emotions, they're goddamn animals. (Of course this is subject to opinion, as there are no things a dragons)

Infact, I think that's the best part of the picture, the bemused look on the face of the dragon, the closest thing to an "emotion" that it could possibly have.

Tai-Ti · 08-25-2005, 12:40 PM

tis a kool dragon pic, but if wanna no how I would make it look betetr to may taste, I would make the brow lines more definate, and make the neck curve out at the head, not in, to make the neck look more conected to the head, if you get what I mean..?

Kami · 08-26-2005, 02:35 AM

Originally Posted by ShunNakamura

Originally Posted by Master Quan

Originally Posted by ShunNakamura

It looks like a statue that has no emotion...

IT'S A DRAGON.

Dragon's do have emotions afterall..

There are no such things as dragons. Of course dinosaurs but no dragons.

Tai-Ti · 08-26-2005, 10:57 AM

just cause ti s mythical creature, dosent mean you cant make it shoe emotion, its the same as sayin a cartoon character shouldn't show emotion cause they ant really real! Emotion can be the real focus of a picture.

Laugh at face of Danger Banned Location: In The Fridge	#17 YAY! A DRAGON! the cartoon is funny, i love the little DEAD you've got it to a T, the simple things in life are best
08-24-2005, 07:38 PM

Master Quan Banned Location: UK	#18 (permalink) Originally Posted by ShunNakamura It looks like a statue that has no emotion... IT'S A DRAGON.
08-24-2005, 11:56 PM

IBCrayZ Pantless Ninja! Location: Right behind you...without any pants	#19 (permalink) If it had been anything more than a head shot their would have been some emotion. Maybe some snarling or something.
08-25-2005, 12:23 AM

Tai-Ti Location: Over there points	#22 (permalink) tis a kool dragon pic, but if wanna no how I would make it look betetr to may taste, I would make the brow lines more definate, and make the neck curve out at the head, not in, to make the neck look more conected to the head, if you get what I mean..?
08-25-2005, 12:40 PM

Kami FTW Location: Cardboard box D:	#23 (permalink) Originally Posted by ShunNakamura Originally Posted by Master Quan Originally Posted by ShunNakamura It looks like a statue that has no emotion... IT'S A DRAGON. Dragon's do have emotions afterall.. There are no such things as dragons. Of course dinosaurs but no dragons.
08-26-2005, 02:35 AM

Tai-Ti Location: Over there points	#24 (permalink) just cause ti s mythical creature, dosent mean you cant make it shoe emotion, its the same as sayin a cartoon character shouldn't show emotion cause they ant really real! Emotion can be the real focus of a picture.
08-26-2005, 10:57 AM