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[IBCrayZ]

First, I take that crack about my animation personally insulting.
Second of all, thank you for your critisism Master Quan. you have brought some major errors to my attention. it never even occured to me that the horns were to far apart, thank you.
I have an explaination for the coloring, im not very good with sharpies. I should have used colored pencils for the color.
The lack of colors was intentional, being as it was meant to be a RED dragon.
I tried to take my time on the scales. the scales alone took me a good 45 minutes. I have to say, I did take my time on this drawing.


EDIT: oops, I missed you Vyk. yeah there is a way to control the frame delays, but I decided against it. it is my first animation using that program and I wasnt too sure what I was doing at the time.

[Kami]

I thought it was alright. I don't understand how you guys can just beat him down with those mean comments and not say anything to the other people who are just as worse as him (no offense ibcrayz). it saddens me a bit.

[IBCrayZ]

its alright, I know I suck, why do you think I asked for the critisism.

[black orb]

>>> That dragon is bad-ass, I think it would look great printed in a black t-shirt.

[FallenSilence]

Ignore the overly harsh comments, dude. I like your stuff. The dragon's really cool. Like Vyk said, if you slowed the animation down, it may improve it.

[Master Quan]

Originally Posted by IBCrayZ

The lack of colors was intentional, being as it was meant to be a RED dragon.

This is what I'm saying...ok, alright. Look at it this way.

When you see a RED Ball, is it all one colour? Doesn't it have toning, shadowing, shine? That's the point I'm trying to make.

[IBCrayZ]

I was actually thinking of getting it on a black hoodie. that would be cool, evem though I rarely ever wear black.
Yeah, im gonna work on the animation a bit maybe. I dunno, maybe I will make a new one, with better art.
I'll start practicing with tone and shadowing some. Now that you explain what you meant, I can see what you meant. That didnt really make any sense but I hope you know what I meant.

[ShunNakamura]

Just cause he didn't tone it doesn't mean he didn't spend time.. I know .. I got the same problem.. ain't good at toning very much..


Anyways I got one carp on the dragon I think none have yet mentioned. It looks like a statue that has no emotion... or that it is braindead :P. I hate emotion.. I never get. I hope you have better luck then I do.