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[Shimeng]

Kawaiileena, great manga!
The picture flow is constant and the characters seam well composed and natural. I love it lots!
After reading the third page I just wanned more. Keep up the good work.

[ShlupQuack]

I like the story so far. Looks more like a pre-sketch than a manga though. You should clean it up in Photoshop, make it look all official, get a manga font, and make a website for it. I'd read.

[kawaiileena]

Originally Posted by Shimeng

Kawaiileena, great manga!
The picture flow is constant and the characters seam well composed and natural. I love it lots!
After reading the third page I just wanned more. Keep up the good work.

Thank you!! Wai!! I'll get the fourth page soon... my friend just borrowed it and still not giving it back to me! Oh well, I'll wait. Thank you!

Originally Posted by ShlupQuack

I like the story so far. Looks more like a pre-sketch than a manga though. You should clean it up in Photoshop, make it look all official, get a manga font, and make a website for it. I'd read.

Thank you for liking it, though I also don't say it is a manga, too, just a sketch which I grew fond of... heheh..

Photoshop? Clean it up? Yeah, that would be a good idea, if I only knew how... ^.^;; And about the website... I already have a website of it, but it sucks... -.- It doesn't show the comic... too bad, though...

Originally Posted by Rengori

I've never met someone who uses 'believe in yourself and keep trying.'

o.o Really?? You've never met someone before... weird, but thanks.. !!

[Laugh at face of Danger]

wheres page four?!

[Rengori]

I can't believe I'm saying this... but I actually don't have a problem with emo manga now.

[Crystal Tears]

Rengori, I'm glad you could come to accept that! ^_^;; Your drawings are very good, and the concept is very nice. Continue to post your work, it's fabulous!

~*Crystal

[Kamiko]

It's very good, but is Takeru's sudden forgetfulness caused by growing up or... something else?? :fpexdee:
Get more soon, it's very good!

[kawaiileena]

Originally Posted by Kamiko

It's very good, but is Takeru's sudden forgetfulness caused by growing up or... something else?? :fpexdee:
Get more soon, it's very good!

Thank you, but to answer your question, no, it's not the growing up development. He still remembers Aya and Kairi, it's just that, he is already too engrossed of hanging with the popular kids that he is trying to ignore them (Aya and Kairi) to be more popular and have a better reputation.

Thank you! Though I'm not sure that answers your question, though! ^.^

Originally Posted by Crystal Tears

Rengori, I'm glad you could come to accept that! ^_^;; Your drawings are very good, and the concept is very nice. Continue to post your work, it's fabulous!

Thank you! I will continue on, if my friend will just give it back to me!! It's been a week and she is still borrowing it!

Originally Posted by Laugh at face of Danger

wheres page four?!

The page four will come on soon... my friend is still not giving it back to me, so I can't finish it. It's halfway finished, but if she gives it back to me this week, I can post it next week or sooner (or later)... ^.^