(A) Squall

themagicroundabout · 07-09-2005, 05:47 PM

there's been a few poeple drawing on paint so i thought i'd give it a go, and this is the result. suggestions on improvement appreciated

Xander · 07-09-2005, 07:18 PM

Hey, that's pretty good..I think he needs some eyebrows though, it looks a little strange and I think that might be why. ^^ Plus his head seems perhaps a bit overly big compared to his body.

But yeah I think it's mostly the eyes..

Here, I had a little go in Photoshop just to demonstrate how I think the eyes should be. I made the first line at the top of the eye a little thicker, then drew another to represent the eyelid. Then the eyebrows above. I'm not saying it shoud be EXACTLY like that of course, but that's just to give an idea. ^_^

The nose maybe seems a little long too, normally in anime style they would use a smaller line..but that could just be the style and it really depends on your style. =) I like the shading and I look forward to seeing some more of your art!

themagicroundabout · 07-09-2005, 07:23 PM

thanks for the advice

it's the first anime/manga thingy ive tried to draw

Xander · 07-09-2005, 07:26 PM

Well, it's great for your first attempt! My first attempt was..weird. XD

themagicroundabout · 07-10-2005, 04:15 PM

i decided to finish of a whole body pic

and i gave him eyebrows :joey:

ShlupQuack · 07-10-2005, 05:32 PM

Haha, it's very cute.

Shauna · 07-10-2005, 05:59 PM

That's awesome... if I tried to draw a picture on paint... actually, if I tried to draw a picture at all, it would turn out demented.

Yea, that's cool.

My name is...something..? · 07-10-2005, 06:00 PM

I suck at paint.No matter what I do in it, it comes out horrible.
Kudos to you.

themagicroundabout :ghost: Location: I don't want to live on the moon.	#3 (permalink) thanks for the advice it's the first anime/manga thingy ive tried to draw
07-09-2005, 07:23 PM

Xander Former Staff mountain goat Location: UK	#4 (permalink) Well, it's great for your first attempt! My first attempt was..weird. XD
07-09-2005, 07:26 PM

ShlupQuack Administrator It is My Density Location: California	#6 (permalink) Haha, it's very cute.
07-10-2005, 05:32 PM

Shauna Crazy Scot. Location: In the land of Scots	#7 (permalink) That's awesome... if I tried to draw a picture on paint... actually, if I tried to draw a picture at all, it would turn out demented. Yea, that's cool.
07-10-2005, 05:59 PM

My name is...something..? It might have one too Location: I'm still in your bed.	#8 (permalink) I suck at paint.No matter what I do in it, it comes out horrible. Kudos to you.
07-10-2005, 06:00 PM