[A] Suggestive Artwork

Agent Proto · 04-06-2005, 12:57 AM

Yea, it's quite suggestive, but it's nothing too vulgar. This is the first time I penned a drawing before scanning, and I actually like the turnout.

Any comments and critiques are welcomed.

TasteyPies · 01:17 AM

I like her gazongas.

*ahem*

It looks great, I love her jacket, lips, eyes and hair. They all look very well done.

My advice is to take your time. It looks like by the time you got to her legs and the lower right..uh...pubus region you wanted it finished and rushed a little bit.

Yu-Yevon · 04-06-2005, 01:11 AM

........................................ ........................................ .....um it looks good.

nik0tine · 04-06-2005, 01:19 AM

Originally Posted by Proto

FightClubFan#47 · 04-06-2005, 02:06 AM

Agent Proto, that image is quite nice. I am slightly worried that you have the power to picture what I'm thinking.

fire_of_avalon · 04-06-2005, 06:28 AM

You cross hatch, it makes me love you.

But her left leg (and by left I mean HER left, and my right) seems kind of off. The calf is too short or the ankle is too long. That, and I agree with Pies, it does look a little rushed at the bottom, because there's so much detail in the top, and not much texture or dimension... below the waist.

Yay!

Agent Proto · 04-06-2005, 06:35 AM

I don't cross hatch very often, but I felt it was appropriate here. And I agree about that I kind of rushed with the legs and bottom. xP Though, she does have leather panties, so I think I did that fine. xD

Takkun · 04-06-2005, 06:43 AM

Excellent, Sexy Schoolgirl Jeff. Excellent indeed. It does seem like you rushed the lower body, but the upper body looks just great. And nice suggestive picture. It goes well with the pink layout and your sexy schoolgirl-ness.

Agent Proto Former Staff Location: Root Beer Forum	#1 [A] Suggestive Artwork Yea, it's quite suggestive, but it's nothing too vulgar. This is the first time I penned a drawing before scanning, and I actually like the turnout. Any comments and critiques are welcomed.
04-06-2005, 12:57 AM

TasteyPies	#2 (permalink) I like her gazongas. ahem It looks great, I love her jacket, lips, eyes and hair. They all look very well done. My advice is to take your time. It looks like by the time you got to her legs and the lower right..uh...pubus region you wanted it finished and rushed a little bit. Last edited by TasteyPies; 04-06-2005 at 01:17 AM..
04-06-2005, 01:05 AM

Yu-Yevon Fight to live Location: in a house	#3 (permalink) ........................................ ........................................ .....um it looks good.
04-06-2005, 01:11 AM

nik0tine All about looking. Location: Dalmasca!	#4 (permalink) Originally Posted by Proto
04-06-2005, 01:19 AM

FightClubFan#47 Arrrrrrrrrrrr! Location: The Cold North	#5 (permalink) Agent Proto, that image is quite nice. I am slightly worried that you have the power to picture what I'm thinking.
04-06-2005, 02:06 AM

fire_of_avalon Cid's Knight Same Bat Time .... Location: Same Bat Channel	#6 (permalink) You cross hatch, it makes me love you. But her left leg (and by left I mean HER left, and my right) seems kind of off. The calf is too short or the ankle is too long. That, and I agree with Pies, it does look a little rushed at the bottom, because there's so much detail in the top, and not much texture or dimension... below the waist. Yay!
04-06-2005, 06:28 AM

Agent Proto Former Staff Location: Root Beer Forum	#7 (permalink) I don't cross hatch very often, but I felt it was appropriate here. And I agree about that I kind of rushed with the legs and bottom. xP Though, she does have leather panties, so I think I did that fine. xD
04-06-2005, 06:35 AM

Takkun Superstar Location: Here. There. Everywhere.	#8 (permalink) Excellent, Sexy Schoolgirl Jeff. Excellent indeed. It does seem like you rushed the lower body, but the upper body looks just great. And nice suggestive picture. It goes well with the pink layout and your sexy schoolgirl-ness.
04-06-2005, 06:43 AM