Eyes on Final Fantasy Forums > General > Artist's Forum > My first AMV, what do you guys think?

[pspkilla]

YouTube - Final Fantasy X
This was the first video I ever made. lol What do ya think??

[Proxy]

I think this is in the wrong forum =)
Next time, I do believe AMV's are to be put in Art

[ShlupQuack]

Originally Posted by Proxy ^

I think this is in the wrong forum =)
Next time, I do believe AMV's are to be put in Art

That's funny, I don't see a reported post in my inbox or a "Cid's Knight" title under your name, smarty. *kick*

But m'kay I'll most it to Art. Why not?

[pspkilla]

Sorry, next time I'll post there!

[ShlupQuack]

It's fine.

I just finished watching the video. I thought it was very good for a first try. I enjoyed it and I don't even like FFX.

[stalpho slayer]

pretty cool

[starseeker]

Here comes my opinion as an AMV editor.

Intro: Needs more changes. The long cut got on my nerves. Plus when you did change, it was rather jumpy, no connection really.
Guitar comes in: Nicely done, the synch was very nice.
Singer starts: Where is the change? Something should have changed there.
Rest of the song: The clips used where too long, a lot of good oppotunities for clip changes were missed.
Guitar solo: The pacing was completely off. Slow, emotional scenes with fast guitar riffs just didn't fit.
When the opening riff returns: The synch here was nice, it worked. It was nice up until near the end until it got a bit incoherent

Overall: No techincal issues I can see, bar what looks like downloaded footage, but that could just be Youtube. But I really couldn't see the overall point to this video, it seemed jumpy and incoherent at times; there was no connection between the sections of clips you used, no message.

[Tsukasa]

Originally Posted by starseeker ^

Here comes my opinion as an AMV editor.

Intro: Needs more changes. The long cut got on my nerves. Plus when you did change, it was rather jumpy, no connection really.
Guitar comes in: Nicely done, the synch was very nice.
Singer starts: Where is the change? Something should have changed there.
Rest of the song: The clips used where too long, a lot of good oppotunities for clip changes were missed.
Guitar solo: The pacing was completely off. Slow, emotional scenes with fast guitar riffs just didn't fit.
When the opening riff returns: The synch here was nice, it worked. It was nice up until near the end until it got a bit incoherent

Overall: No techincal issues I can see, bar what looks like downloaded footage, but that could just be Youtube. But I really couldn't see the overall point to this video, it seemed jumpy and incoherent at times; there was no connection between the sections of clips you used, no message.

This is the best critique of this kind of area, She's a master of AMVs... if you intend on making more definetly work off of these outcomes and become superfly~