our new fantasy

Story
the story starts out with yuki and natie fighting off fiends like mercenaries do. when they get paid they find that they have another mission waiting. so when they get there they see that they are making a time gate and need extra security and that more people are there so when they start the mission they each meet a magical beast(yuki and natie) that grants them a power. Now they go on regular missions for a while until they go on a special mission and after they had beat the monster both natie and yuki hover and glow blue and make themselves a spiritual beasts and before you go anyfurther you go to spiritual council and meet gaia the earth's lifeforce and she tells them of their journey to over throw the magicians that own the world. now they go to a resistence and meet marquis and he helps them. so they overthrow one of the magicians liberating a country. when they try to defeat a next they meet gibraltor and he is defeated so when they destroy the magicians they he decides to travel with you and see if he can be come stronger. they go through the world and meet larca who helps them get transportation to the next magician and when they destroy him the last 2 magicians show up and send them to the end of time. Father tells them that the world plummeted into choas eventually with the nagicians fighting for power and destroying many lands with their power so he sends them back to their time and promises that if they ever call for him he will answer now he see's that the last two magicians are far too strong for the group he sends them into their respective time periods where their style of fighting began and tells them to train and become stronger so they can end the tyrany. they train and when they are done they each have to fight a sorcerer so you can get used to fighting different with them. when they all regroup they go to another magician and wih him down aesma starts doomsday so he will rein for the rest of eternity. this is when the team goes for the kill and when they enter the whole world warps they are beyond reality and they kill aesma and go on a mission and find out the magicians where being controlled by akira and when they destroy akira all things go back to before the mission and noone remembers anything
Playable Characters

Yuki-Leader of the group.Funny,caring and sometimes hot-tempered.She specializes in physical attacks
Weapons:Swords
class ninja

Natie-Sweet,soft-voice and sometimes shy.She specializes in white magic & summons
Weapons:gauntlets
Class martial artist

heliono-Loud,wild and never backs down from a challenge.He specializes in black magic
Weapons:Scythes
Class

Quismar-Smart,bookish and sarcastic.He specializes in brute strength
Weapons:Spears
Class Dragoon

Larca-Clueless(clumsy),peppy and sometimes over confident.He specializes in stealing and time magic
Weapons: Daggers
Class assasin


Spiritual Beasts
Earth Aeon-Gaia:A fanciful woman in elaborate green robes that seem to just flow out of herOverdrive:Tremor
she is your guide as she is your first aeon you get after the "incident"

Fire Aeon-Flamberge:A knight in red armour with a large sword made of fire
Overdrive:Ignition Inferno
you fight flamberge as a boss and when you use aries purifier (thats her special power oh and near the end we worry that shes got evil in here cuz shes sucked a lot out of bad guys ) he turns to flamberge because of leena power to bestow summon power

Water Aeon-Sobek:An olive skinned man in gold robes with a crocodile headress
Overdrive:Innundation
sobek is found when you go to niala on a quest searching where all the pyreflies went(remember the enemy is trying to make a monster to by turning themself into an aeon)he is found defeated outside the temple of a boss

Ice Aeon-Wendigo:A hairy ape like aeon adorned with lots of shiny golden jewelery Overdrive:Heart of Ice
wendigo is found when you defeat him by removing his choker mind control thingy and again purify sumon power

Thunder Aeon-Raiku:A wolf made of lightning Overdrive:Booming Thunder
raiku is found as natie pet and protects the girls by carrying them all to safety and they change him to an aeon cuz he acts like he wanted it to happen(first spiritual beast)

Wind Aeon-Kukulkan:A long green snake with six golden wings Overdrive:Gnashing Gale
kukulcan is found in luca attcking ppl at night and when natie is bitten he is beaten senseless by the other two then she sees his true self and changes him into the aeon and everyone is healed

Gravity Aeon-Orion:A tall man in a long blue cloak with a silver bow Overdrive:Crushing Compression
orion is found when they travel to space and the main baddie his name should be zera and he vrings those stars to life and when you defeat him boom summon

Time Aeon-Father Time:A bearded man in a maroon cloak holding an hourglass Overdrive:Eon Breaker
father time is when you are sent in to the end of time and yeah were into a whole new tech spira and anyway he finds you after you walk through the dark for a while and he says he'll help you cuz if he doesnt then all hope is lost for spira

Dark Aeon-Chernabog:Tall black gargoyle with massive wings and three eyes Overdrive:Shadow Eclipse
chernabog is a badguy you fight him 3 times then he puts you throught tests and when you pass them you get his respect and he alllows you to make him a summon

Holy Aeon-Metatron:A beautiful woman in a revealing outfit (like Shiva)with a golden halberd Overdrive:Judgment of the Living
metatron is found as a woman that is going crazy and cant stand it she tries to blow up bevelle an dthe girls take the mission and when they get to her make her a suommon

Non-Elemental non elemental is falconion a huge flame bird with blue and gold armor
the monster you fight at a time father time sends you to on accident when you finish him off you are sent back to your time to see where his body is buried and sees he is trapped and about to die you make a contract with him and he gets summon power and bust both walls that were closing in on him

Supreme Aeon-Isis:Gorgeous olive skinned woman in a beautiful,flowing gown and seven rotating swords above her head and a grimoire(spellbook) in her arms Overdrive:Supreme Light of Justice
isis is found when you go to aeon council and it is asked why there is an extra seat they say becuz youve given out almost all the summon power and that all that is left is the one power and that only one is worthy but she is too proud to take it and yall make her take the power when her mother is going to be destroyed by aesma and when she taks the power she ages to her 20's

Main Characters Special Powers

leena summon power gives summons their abilities

natie sacrifice can give up her power to make alot of damage but is only used twice and once she only survived cuz she had a friend with one of the few isisflicker left and it healed her(this turns out to be the big bad guy and she has mixed feelings when she has to confront him
larca power purify takes the evil out of something
gibraltor power to locate any huge mass of isisflickers and this only works in his general area
marquis his power gives summons the needed isisflickers to hold a physical form
Story

the team was on a mission in space they were yuki and natie it was a big mission so they had also hired other people to help with security and while they were there yuki met a wolf that seemes unreal then it jumped at her and she was absorbed into yuki the rest o the team met an animal that also absorbed into them that's how they all got their powers their beast that they get corresponds that's why the wolf proud and strong grants power and such

Bad Guys
the bad guys are a group of people that feel the world is in chaos and that they have been wronged enough to where they deserve to own it i'll ediit their seperate back stories later

Faadrir-One of the magicians.First one you encounter.None of the other magicians take him that seriously but he turns out to be good and when he joins you they see him as a great threat and kill him and yes he can be revived

Firenze-One of the magicians.Very cocky.Second you encounter.He always tries to flirt with Somihar

Somihar-One of the magicians.She has a gentle facade but is really very sick and twisted.Third you encounter.

Raziel-One of the magicians.The most kindly and gentle.He almost regrets becoming evil.Fourth you encounter

Samson-One of the magicians.He is VERY strong and VERY dumb.It's kind of a mystery why the magicians even keep him around.Fifth you encounter. he may be the strongest magician but his iq is too low to tap into the power

Ketrol-One of the magicians.He likes to appear and dissappear at different times, usually to taunt our heroes.Encountered many times but is the sixth you kill

Aesma-The final magician.He is quiet and only speaks quick,witty insults and such.Has the most powerful magic.Encountered as the last boss


final boss splits so you fight 3 diff versions that larca and natie fight one gibraltor and marquis fight anothr and yuki fights one all by herself
and then assembles to make a great monster

oh yeah all main characters can control isisflickers but not as good as the bad guys

Sin can't be remade anyway, he's gone for good..unless..you are thinking of bringing him back, for what reason? I don't get a lot of what this says. Aeons? Is this a story based on FFX or something?

~Setzer Gabianni

nope that's why its our new fantasy cuz it has no ties to old games

He is using the word aeon until we find a better,more original name for them

aens will change to spiritual beasts

ok

So is Yuki the main character

its hard to say cuz its her or natie cuz natie is friends and now foe with the final bad guy

really! so Natie transitions from good guy to bad guy when the bad guy uses an isisflicker to heal her

no no when she was young she almost died and the main bad guy healed her and he sees the pain of the world and thinks that making the isisflickers combine will be a great healing and doesnt believe what others say and he is being controlled and he later regains his self and destroys his master and continues his master work so that all can feel his pain

Oh I see what you mean but you called Natie a he and used the word his alot...does that mean Natie is a guy?

or are you talking 'bout the guy with the master?

all the he's refer to the bad GUY you should add anything you want remember this is our story

ok

-So they all live on this world
-And in this world there are Isisflickers,small floating lights with magic abilities
-If several Isisflickers morph together,they become a fiend,and the more Isisflickers the stronger the fiend
-There is a group of evil magicians that are using the Isisflickers to form a giant monster that they will control for their own evil purposes
-Yuki and co. are a group of mercenaries that haven't been receiving much business lately* and initially planned to roam the world,being mercenaries yada yada.Anyway,they get dragged into this conflict and they are trying to stop these evil magicians

*The reason they haven't been receiving many missions to destroy fiends is because all of the Isisflickers(which form fiends)are being formed into this giant beast!

thx well make it hard for gamers no equipment to break damage limit cuz that makes it a blow off

cool optional characters

many optional bosses and they give you experience according to lvl the higher the level the less experience

and time travel will be in there

many optional bosses and they give you experience according to lvl the higher the level the less experience


You know, that is a very good idea and I would have never came up with that

Would the battle system be class/job-based or would it real-time or turn-based?

But we should make the characters first before we go into stuff like that.So far we have:
Yuki
Natie
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thanks but we want a trial everytime you get to a level multiple of ten and if you pass you get the help of on optional sb and the tests ae setup for you being five levels stronger like at level ten your trial is fit most if you were at level 15 and each girl has a seperate trial a we need some guys in this game

Playable Characters:

Yuki-Leader of the group.Funny,caring and sometimes hot-tempered.She specializes in physical attacks
Weapons:Swords

Natie-Sweet,soft-voice and sometimes shy.She specializes in white magic & summons
Weapons:Staffs and staves

Gibraltar-Loud,wild and never backs down from a challenge.He specializes in black magic
Weapons:Scythes

Marquis-Smart,bookish and sarcastic.He specializes in status effects
Weapons:Spears

Larca-Clueless(clumsy),peppy and sometimes over confident.She specializes in stealing and time magic
Weapons: Daggers

change larca to a super peppy thief thats kinda clumsy

Villians:

Faadrir-One of the magicians.First one you encounter.None of the other magicians take him that seriously

Firenze-One of the magicians.Very cocky.Second you encounter.He always tries to flirt with Somihar

Somihar-One of the magicians.She has a gentle facade but is really very sick and twisted.Third you encounter.

Raziel-One of the magicians.The most kindly and gentle.He almost regrets becoming evil.Fourth you encounter

Samson-One of the magicians.He is VERY strong and VERY dumb.It's kind of a mystery why the magicians even keep him around.Fifth you encounter

Ketrol-One of the magicians.He likes to appear and dissappear at different times, usually to taunt our heroes.Encountered many times but is the sixth you kill

Aesma-The final magician.She is quiet and only speaks quick,witty insults and such.Has the most powerful magic.Encountered as the last boss

you know how sephiroth and cloud worked together so did natie and aesma thats why she holds back when they first fight her but later she goes all out after seeing all the damage done

ok

so, do you like the characters so far?

i love them espcially gibraltor he should be the first blackmage with good attack

Yeah and I think that Natie should have high HP (unlike all the other FF white mages)

ok thats enough for tonight ill talk bout it more in the morning

Ok

BTW where do you live because I live in Tennessee and it's almost 3:30 here!

God i'm tired *yawn*

i live in texas and im fully awake oh yeah that talk about texas cowboys is crap i never sound country so so what to add we should do equipment and leveling like final fantasy IX

anything else we need a battle and equipment system then i'll start mapping out the attacks

Sin can't be remade anyway, he's gone for good..unless..you are thinking of bringing him back, for what reason? I don't get a lot of what this says. Aeons? Is this a story based on FFX or something?

~Setzer Gabianni
says you

Explanation of the battle system:

1.)It's turn-based.Turns are determined by a character's Agility-stat.Turn-Augmenting spells like Haste,double a character's turns,while Slow only decreases the speed an enemy attacks,casts spells etc.(Enemies don't have turns,they attack throughout the battle.)Order of turns is displayed at the bottom of the screen.

2.)Characters are directly controlled by the player,while the other party members(3 in a party) are AI controlled.The player has a limited time to control the movements of their character before they are forced to switch characters.

3.)All spells have a casting time.The stronger the spell,the higher the casting time.

4.)As stated above,characters are directly-controlled so you could run away from the enemy and cast black magic on 'em or get up close and personal with physical attacks.

5.)Spiritual Beasts,when summoned,move around the field attacking enemies, casting spells etc.After a spiritual beast defeats a certain amount of enemies they can perform their special move.Spiritual Beasts fight alongdide the party, and cannot be controlled.

Example Battle Gibraltar and NatieParty:Yuki,
-Yuki has the highest agility so she's up first.She runs up there and starts slicing up the enemy.Turns Over.Yuki is now controlled by the AI.

-Gibraltar has the next highest agility and is next.He runs from the enemy and pummels 'em with a couple Firaga spells.Turns Over.Gibraltar is now AI controlled.

-Natie has the lowest agility and goes last.She runs in there and casts Curaga on herself and the others.With only a few moments to spare, she runs over and gives the enemy a good whack.

The battle would go on like that until a)Haste or Slow was used on any or all of the party ,b)A character is KO'd and cannot be used until they are revived or c)The enemy is killed.

i have a plan for this to be a time fantasy like chrono cross and trigger it will be the first (ff8 doesnt count they only went one place)

i don't understand.Do you mean like they travel through time?

P.S.I haven't played the Chrono Series,in fact,I haven't played most of the FFs!

yeah we need something that makes it possible not a necklace or ring oooh do you watch xiaolin showdown we can make yuki's sword slice the air making a rift in time but it only works at a time gate

i've seen that show a couple of times it's pretty good.
So what purpose do they have for traveling through time?

they find out they are not strong enough and so they travel through time and search for a person to train you and they all have different levels of reining but yuki get's the highest level

So they find out that they aren't strong enough to defeat the magicians so they travel through time trying to find someone to train them.So each character gets their own level of training.Yuki's being the highest.So could you explian the story so far to me?

okay the three friends yuki and natie and co try to fight a magician and get creamed so they find a mythical sword that opens time portals so they travel through time and find the original does of their craft swordplay thievery yada yada so when they are done evryone's clothes change to their dojo uniforms so they seem more official and near the end they change back to show how they have surpassed their master and no longer needs their clothes

So Yuki and co. are mercenaries who are losing business so they go around the world wondering why.On one of their missions in space they gain summoning powers.They're then ready to fight one of the magicians,or so they think.They get humiliated trying to fight a magician and find a mystic sword which can transport people through time.They then journey through time trying to find someone to train with.They then find this dojo where they train with this master until they are ready to fight the magicians.

it sounds crazy when you put it all together but yeah

just a tad :)

ok dude,i'm really tired so i'm going to bed seeya later.

well anyway
we have to label their respective martial arts skills
yuki is a ninjaesque character
natie is a white mage pin point specialists she uses her fists
larca is a dragoon type character
gibraltor and marquis ill have to think up and their training will be minigames that fit like for larca he will haul a boulder up and down a hill strengthening his body

Wait a sec...
Yuki is the ninjaesque character?I think that Larca should be the ninja because she is the thief.Shouldn't Marquis be the dragoon because he is the one who uses a spear.

ok you made the characters so sure

ok.i was just a little confused.

nice work guys

well thank you sir helix!:)

so what will yuki be shes not going to be just a swordsman cuz that's boring

she should be like a samurai

check my first post i think that's great she'll be samurai and the thief is a ninja so what mini challenge will used for their classes the dragoon will be lugging a huge rock over a hill until he can run with it and the ninja will be pushing back on a strong but narrow waterfall the goal in that training will be to push the water back up easily i havent thought about the rest that much

Samurai-Slicing sharp disks that are flying towards her/Sword training
Ninja-Pushing water back up a waterfall/Dagger Training
Dragoon-Running up a hill with boulders/Spear Training
Black Mage/Scythe Guy-Breaking through wooden blocks with his bare hands/Scythe Training
White Mage-Balancing on poles in the middle of a lake/Staff Training

white mage drops the staff and picks up martial arts she has a great toned body

ok

check my original post ive edited a lot into it. oh and what will we do for abilities and equipment

we should come up with something like the sphere grid and that can be how they learn abilities

I think you should make another male person and then at one part in the game you could have three girls in one team three boys in the other team

like some sort of competition?like a huge gladiator battle!That would be cool

yeah that would be sooooooo cool and you have to get both teams to the final then you decide which team you want to win and you play as them and have to fight the other people on the other team

that's cool a battle arena type thing we need to think of something new instead of a spheregrid

ok i'll try to come up with something

yeah me too ummmm damn it think graaaghh i'm angry

i love grandia battle system maybe we could lose that

there is a circle gauge and all enemies and characters were on the gauge if youre suprised you start out going slow and the enemies get a quick hit in and at the start of the gauge is wait then there is an act line where when an enemy or character hits that line they decide what they are going to doand then you go all the way around and repeat

yeah grandia is a wicked game but i have only ever played the first one but i like that battle system

I've never played grandia

oh man it is such a great game or at least the first one is that is the only one ihave played

this is how the battle system lookshttp://i74.photobucket.com/albums/i246/quickydu/245209181.jpg

GameArts will spice Grandia Xtreme's battle mechanics up via a few interesting features. Firstly, by using what's being called the Synchronize Flash System, players can preform three-character combo attacks. A more pristine feature is the cancel system, wherein an enemy's attack can be prevented if said foe is attacked first. Although a similar attack is present in past Grandia games, this iteration seems to be a chance affair, most likely based on an individual statistic, such as speed or dexterity. This, however, works both ways, as enemies can also cancel player attacks in the same fashion.

During battles it is also possible to gain an advantage over foes on occasion, and during these junctures two additional commands, "combo" and "critical," become available. Both are self-explanatory, as the former allows the player to attack multiple times in a single turn, while "critical" affords players the opportunity to wallop opponents nice and proper.

yeah i have played on the first on and it is almost exactly the same and on the first on you can select move so your players move to more strategic locations

read the first post and tell me what ya'll think

I think we should work on the story and how they earn spiritual beasts more

Yeah how do the spiritual beasts work is it like numberX or is it different could someone tell me.

I think that it should be like this:
In ancient times,the spiritual beasts were revered as deities,protectors of the land.Though,gradually with the increase of technology and knowledge of machines,spiritual beasts weren't as highly valued.So,Yuki and her friends are going around the world visiting the temples of the spiritual beasts.They have to fight the spiritual beasts to get them on their side('cause that would make a good boss fight :P)

Yeah it would make a kickass boss fight

my thoughts exactly
Now the story...

look under spiritual beasts in my first post on this topic it's all there

Yeah but it doesn't say how they fight like is it they move around the screen attacking things without you controlling them or do your characters dissappear and you control the SB

Story
the bad guys string our team from the time they witness us dispatch one of their minions the 2nd boss its a drake that was terrorising ppl on a road so when they witness yuki make a spiritual beast they decide that they could wait for her to make as many and they steal the beast from them and near the end of the gamenthey finally take them the team get's discouraged and feels like they aren't strong enough that's when they get a message from father time and he tells them that they are strong and that maybe they need more discipline toward their fighting art so he opens portals for them to go back to where and when their fighting style originated so that they could train and when they return from their training they have improved stats but the same level

Playable Characters

Yuki-Leader of the group.Funny,caring and sometimes hot-tempered.She specializes in physical attacks
Weapons:Swords
class ninja

Natie-Sweet,soft-voice and sometimes shy.She specializes in white magic & summons
Weapons:gauntlets
Class martial artist

Gibraltar-Loud,wild and never backs down from a challenge.He specializes in black magic
Weapons:Scythes
Class

Marquis-Smart,bookish and sarcastic.He specializes in broot strength
Weapons:Spears
Class Dragoon

Larca-Clueless(clumsy),peppy and sometimes over confident.She specializes in stealing and time magic
Weapons: Daggers
Class assasin


Spiritual Beasts
Earth Aeon-Gaia:A fanciful woman in elaborate green robes that seem to just flow out of herOverdrive:Tremor
she is your guide as she is your first aeon you get after the "incident"

Fire Aeon-Flamberge:A knight in red armour with a large sword made of fire
Overdrive:Ignition Inferno
you fight flamberge as a boss and when you use aries purifier (thats her special power oh and near the end we worry that shes got evil in here cuz shes sucked a lot out of bad guys ) he turns to flamberge because of leena power to bestow summon power

Water Aeon-Sobek:An olive skinned man in gold robes with a crocodile headress
Overdrive:Innundation
sobek is found when you go to niala on a quest searching where all the pyreflies went(remember the enemy is trying to make a monster to by turning themself into an aeon)he is found defeated outside the temple of a boss

Ice Aeon-Wendigo:A hairy ape like aeon adorned with lots of shiny golden jewelery Overdrive:Heart of Ice
wendigo is found when you defeat him by removing his choker mind control thingy and again purify sumon power

Thunder Aeon-Raiku:A wolf made of lightning Overdrive:Booming Thunder
raiku is found as natie pet and protects the girls by carrying them all to safety and they change him to an aeon cuz he acts like he wanted it to happen(first spiritual beast)

Wind Aeon-Kukulkan:A long green snake with six golden wings Overdrive:Gnashing Gale
kukulcan is found in luca attcking ppl at night and when natie is bitten he is beaten senseless by the other two then she sees his true self and changes him into the aeon and everyone is healed

Gravity Aeon-Orion:A tall man in a long blue cloak with a silver bow Overdrive:Crushing Compression
orion is found when they travel to space and the main baddie his name should be zera and he vrings those stars to life and when you defeat him boom summon

Time Aeon-Father Time:A bearded man in a maroon cloak holding an hourglass Overdrive:Eon Breaker
father time is when you are sent in to the end of time and yeah were into a whole new tech spira and anyway he finds you after you walk through the dark for a while and he says he'll help you cuz if he doesnt then all hope is lost for spira

Dark Aeon-Chernabog:Tall black gargoyle with massive wings and three eyes Overdrive:Shadow Eclipse
chernabog is a badguy you fight him 3 times then he puts you throught tests and when you pass them you get his respect and he alllows you to make him a summon

Holy Aeon-Metatron:A beautiful woman in a revealing outfit (like Shiva)with a golden halberd Overdrive:Judgment of the Living
metatron is found as a woman that is going crazy and cant stand it she tries to blow up bevelle an dthe girls take the mission and when they get to her make her a suommon

Non-Elemental non elemental is falconion a huge flame bird with blue and gold armor
the monster you fight at a time father time sends you to on accident when you finish him off you are sent back to your time to see where his body is buried and sees he is trapped and about to die you make a contract with him and he gets summon power and bust both walls that were closing in on him

Supreme Aeon-Isis:Gorgeous olive skinned woman in a beautiful,flowing gown and seven rotating swords above her head and a grimoire(spellbook) in her arms Overdrive:Supreme Light of Justice
isis is found when you go to aeon council and it is asked why there is an extra seat they say becuz youve given out almost all the summon power and that all that is left is the one power and that only one is worthy but she is too proud to take it and yall make her take the power when her mother is going to be destroyed by aesma and when she taks the power she ages to her 20's

Main Characters Special Powers

leena summon power gives summons their abilities

natie sacrifice can give up her power to make alot of damage but is only used twice and once she only survived cuz she had a friend with one of the few isisflicker left and it healed her(this turns out to be the big bad guy and she has mixed feelings when she has to confront him
larca power purify takes the evil out of something
gibraltor power to locate any huge mass of isisflickers and this only works in his general area
marquis his power gives summons the needed isisflickers to hold a physical form
Story

the team was on a mission in space they were yuki and natie it was a big mission so they had also hired other people to help with security and while they were there yuki met a wolf that seemes unreal then it jumped at her and she was absorbed into yuki the rest o the team met an animal that also absorbed into them that's how they all got their powers their beast that they get corresponds that's why the wolf proud and strong grants power and such

Bad Guys
the bad guys are a group of people that feel the world is in chaos and that they have been wronged enough to where they deserve to own it i'll ediit their seperate back stories later

Faadrir-One of the magicians.First one you encounter.None of the other magicians take him that seriously but he turns out to be good and when he joins you they see him as a great threat and kill him and yes he can be revived

Firenze-One of the magicians.Very cocky.Second you encounter.He always tries to flirt with Somihar

Somihar-One of the magicians.She has a gentle facade but is really very sick and twisted.Third you encounter.

Raziel-One of the magicians.The most kindly and gentle.He almost regrets becoming evil.Fourth you encounter

Samson-One of the magicians.He is VERY strong and VERY dumb.It's kind of a mystery why the magicians even keep him around.Fifth you encounter. he may be the strongest magician but his iq is too low to tap into the power

Ketrol-One of the magicians.He likes to appear and dissappear at different times, usually to taunt our heroes.Encountered many times but is the sixth you kill

Aesma-The final magician.He is quiet and only speaks quick,witty insults and such.Has the most powerful magic.Encountered as the last boss


final boss splits so you fight 3 diff versions that larca and natie fight one gibraltor and marquis fight anothr and yuki fights one all by herself
and then assembles to make a great monster

oh yeah all main characters can control isisflickers but not as good as the bad guys

These are the things I don't understand:
-The whole first section of the post titled STORY
-Under the Spiritual Beast Gaia it mentions the "incident" what is that?
-Under the Spiritual Beast Sobek it talks about a place called Niala,is that like a city?
-Is Raiku the first Spiritual Beast or is Gaia?
-Why do they travel to space in the first place?
-Why are they sent to the end of time?
-Isn't that too much work to gain the Chernabog summon?
-Is Metatron a human or a Spiritual Beast,or does the team make her into a Spiritual Beast?If they do,how?
-Why does Father Time keep transporting them through time?
-Ummh...The whole Isis Spiritual Beast section doesn't make much sense.
-In what ways do the team use their special powers?How are they significant?
-What is the big mission in space and why is there a big mystical wolf there?
-Faadrir joins Yuki and the rest of the team?Why?
-Aesma was supposed to be a girl.
You also need to edit alot of the references to aries,aeons etc.(things not relevant to the current story)Also consult to me and ff freak on some of the stuff you make.I might sound a little harsh but this project is going pretty much nowhere.We start new things without finishing others.Also are you guys completely ignoring the battle system I made?

Please answer these questions eiko guy

Yeah also there should be another male character we should start with the characters we each take 2 of them and make them how we think they should be but if the others don't like it we do them again if you don't understand say and I'll try to word it better

Ok,i'll take Larca and Gibraltar(they are my favorite)

ff freak,why don't you make up the last character

Yeah okay i will make up a Man so which girl should I take I want either Natie or Yuki

also we make up everything about the character apart from their name which we have alredy decided on apart from the man I am going to create.

for the girl character you should take Natie

okay Natie it is. I will post in a few.

ok Here are Larca and Gibraltar's bios:
Larca
Starting Class:Theif
Age:14
Height:5'5"
Weight:123 lbs
Appearance:
Eyes-Light Green
Hair-Long light brown hair with a white bandana wrapped around her head
Clothes:White tube top with a grey hoodie over it.Black jeans with white trim.White sneakers.Large hoop earrings.
Bio:Larca was born in a small mining town called Medras,where she lived with her aunt,uncle and older brother.She was always fascinated with magic and how the mages that lived in Medras used it to mine.She soon started visiting the town's shaman to learn magic.The shaman sensed something great in Larca and taught her an advanced school of magic,Time Magic.Stopping time,speeding up time all were taught to Larca.She soon surpassed the shaman and he told her to go and travel the world making good use of her magic gifts.Saying goodbye to her anut,uncle and brother,she packed her belongings and started on a journey.
Gibraltar
Starting Class:Black Mage
Age:17
Height:5'9"
Weight:179 lbs
Appearance:
Eyes-Amber
Hair:Spiky blonde with dark blue head band.
Clothes:White,sleeveless/tanktop with large dark blue trenchcoat.Long,baggy,dark blue jeans.Dark blue flip-flops.
Bio:Gibraltar is from the large city of Xanadu,a technologically advanced city.His mother was a white mage and his father built airships,both jobs paid a lot of gil.He had always lived a lavish lifestyle,best clothes,best food,big house yet he longed for more.He had always been fascinated with the life of the commomnfolk,and grew tired of his sheltered lifestyle,that's when he formulated a plan.He gathered up his most valuable and important things and left his parents a teary goodbye note:
Dear Mom and Dad.
"I love you guys very much.You are wonderful parents and I will really miss you.I have left to go on my own journey,my own adventures and leave my boxed in life.I always felt cramped and smothered because of this lavish lifestyle,but now I am free to shape my own legacy.I can't wait to tell you guys all of my stories of my journeys."

Love your son,
Gibraltar

You should post their age appearance and their starting job and remember it is all up to you if we object to something then you can change it or leave it it is entirely your choice.

ok then

I don't like the idea of one of the magicians joining the team so I will make up a new character but here is Natie

Name:Natie
Starting class:Singer
Starting level:1
Age: 18
Background: She originally came from a very poor family but she was soon able to work her way up as a singer. She was the first member to join the party and is their from the beggining. Yuki is her childhood friend
Appearance: White mini skirt, blonde chest length hair, baby blue sleeveless top with her band's name on it, she ties her hair back using four white hair bands white tap shoes
Hometown:Jangeren

yeah I didn't like the idea of a magician joining the team either...

Good bio of Natie btw

Do you think singer is a good starting job?

well isn't Natie a white mage...

They all change their classes later on is what I thought would happen but they could change to whatever class they wanted to I'm not sure what to do for the man ummmm let me think.

they change classes?

Yeah I think they should anyway otherwise it wouldn't be a very good game would it.

I guess...Do you like the Spiritual Beasts?

Yeah but I still don't get how they work like do they appear do one attack(FF7,8,9) is it turn based where they stay the enemies go then the SP's go (FF10) or is it like you move around the field and you control them and do different attacks (FF12 only you don't control them in ff12)

in the battle system I created (check page 1)they ran around the battle field helping the party fight the enemies and then after they defeated a certain amount of enemies they performed a special attack

I only asked because I have ideas for more Spiritual Beasts!

Ok I like the whole run around the field but I think that you should be able to control them. Oh cool do you mind if I make some because not all of Eiko Guy's things made sense.

yeah that's why I made that huge post stating the things that DIDN'T make sense...

but yeah you can make some(this is your project too)

okay I just need to write them out (I'm very forgetful) oh and I just remembered I need to post my male character.

ok here is one of the Spiritual Beasts(he is optional like Anima from X):
Name:Jung
Element:Knowledge
Appearance:Large floating snake beast with large wings and a book in it's talons
Special Attack:Mark of Insanity-Casts Haste,Berserk and Confusion on all enemies

cool here is the male character

Name:Buice (pronounced like boyce)
Starting level:12
Starting job: Tamer
Location found: Jangeren
Background: same hometown as Natie. when they were younger he secretly had a crush on her but after meeting Yuki he has developed feelings for her. You get him when he is searching for a powerful monster to tame. He is at Jangeren
Age:19
Hometown: Jangeren

good character

I like that name...Jangeren

Yeah i sort of made that up on the spot but that is where you meet buice.

Here are all of the named locations so far:
Xanadu-Technology city
Medras-Mining city
Jangeren-???
Niala(?)

We need more locations

Jangeren- port town

oh ok here are some the places(i made some more):
Xanadu-Technology city
Medras-Mining town
Jangeren-Port town
Niala-Religious city
Vajji-Desert kingdom
Lavasria-City located in the snowy mountains
Sa'afra-City located on the island of Tavu
Rajul-Ancient city
Zagar-Largest city,Las-Vegas like w/ casinos and such
Destula-City located in the deep forest
Arca-City located on a remote island
Miasma-City located in a giant swamp
New Xanadu-City located near a volcanic mountain
Shamballa-Fabled paradise located somewhere in the snowy mountains
Ruins of Aggajji-Sister city of Rajul,both located in a barren land
Plasmia-Abandoned city inhabited b spirits
Lazuli-City located in a deep rocky valley
Tide City-City located on the ocean's coast
Fadajria-Ancient underground city


Still more to come

I love the sound of Zagar

yeah...I like that one too

how about this for a location

Ruins of Aggajji- First ruins you visit one of the SP's are found here.

yeah i'll add it

no way i was so thinking of a town called miasma but I thought it could be a ghost town.

no kidding?!?

Well,actually the word miasma means the poisonous gaseous atmosphere that rises from swamps

alot of these cities have meanings behind their name

yeah good point oooh how about plasmia as the ghost town you know ghosts leave behind ectoplasm.

clever...i'll add that one too

I think we have enough for now but we should think about where we find the SP's also I don't like the whole space and time travel thing that Eiko guy suggested

me neither...I just never said anything about it... anyway:
Gaia-Found in Medras
Flamberge-Found in New Xanadu
Sobek-Found in Sa'afra
Kukulcan-Jangeren
Raiku-Zagar
Wendigo-Lavasria
Chernabog-Plasmia
Orion-Destula
Father Time-Ragul
Metatron-Niala
Falconion-Lazuli
Isis-Vajji
Jung-Arca
Ershkigal-Ruins of Aggajji

i was gonna make up my own sp to go in the ruins i created is that ok?

sure

post it's info

okay here goes

Name: ERSHKIGAL
Type: all elemental
Attacks: Shadow flare-hits one enemy for dark damage
Sneeze- hits one enemy for wind damage. capable of blowing an enemy away
Tidal tornado- hits one enemy for water damage. capable of washing an enemy away
Flame blast - fireball hits one opponent. capable of inflicting burn status effect
Earth shatter- creates small earthquake around one enemy
Holy revival- fully heals one characters hp and mp
Ultimate attack- Ultima breath- Hits all opponents with ultima inflicting muchos non elemental damage.

i decided that the ruins will be one of the last places you visit. pretty powerful huh. do you think you could come up with a name.

of course...it's name will be Ershkigal(named after the Babylonian goddess of death)

that is so coooooooooool

well thank you

okay you guys are adding things like crack addicts let's make a story before we make all the towns,characters,etc


It starts out with two opening scenes the first is one of our heroes fighting fiends as a kid, and almost dies but is saved by a passerby. All you see is a closeup of his hand in a black glove and a sign like the symbol used to summon bahamut hen she wakes up and he is gone.

Next is one of the group Natie fighting a group of monsters and she is losing so you see yuki's mouth smile and then she jumps out and does a few combo moves then pulls out her sword that she destroys alot of moneters. She stands up and says "sorry im late". Then thats the end of the opening scenes. It goes to in game graphics and shows Natie scolding yuki for being such a showoff. Then Natie introduces herself.

hey eiko guy,could you answer my questions on page 3

Eiko Guy you need to post the two characters bios we have done ours you have to do Yuki and Marquis
we need to work on the places and characters first so we know who is where and when.

Story
the bad guys string our team from the time they witness us dispatch one of their minions the 2nd boss its a drake that was terrorising ppl on a road so when they witness yuki make a spiritual beast they decide that they could wait for her to make as many and they steal the beast from them and near the end of the gamenthey finally take them the team get's discouraged and feels like they aren't strong enough that's when they get a message from father time and he tells them that they are strong and that maybe they need more discipline toward their fighting art so he opens portals for them to go back to where and when their fighting style originated so that they could train and when they return from their training they have improved stats but the same level

Playable Characters

Yuki-Leader of the group.Funny,caring and sometimes hot-tempered.She specializes in physical attacks
Weapons:Swords
class ninja

Natie-Sweet,soft-voice and sometimes shy.She specializes in white magic & summons
Weapons:gauntlets
Class martial artist

Gibraltar-Loud,wild and never backs down from a challenge.He specializes in black magic
Weapons:Scythes
Class

Marquis-Smart,bookish and sarcastic.He specializes in broot strength
Weapons:Spears
Class Dragoon

Larca-Clueless(clumsy),peppy and sometimes over confident.She specializes in stealing and time magic
Weapons: Daggers
Class assasin


Spiritual Beasts
Earth Aeon-Gaia:A fanciful woman in elaborate green robes that seem to just flow out of herOverdrive:Tremor
she is your guide as she is your first aeon you get after the "incident"

Fire Aeon-Flamberge:A knight in red armour with a large sword made of fire
Overdrive:Ignition Inferno
you fight flamberge as a boss and when you use aries purifier (thats her special power oh and near the end we worry that shes got evil in here cuz shes sucked a lot out of bad guys ) he turns to flamberge because of leena power to bestow summon power

Water Aeon-Sobek:An olive skinned man in gold robes with a crocodile headress
Overdrive:Innundation
sobek is found when you go to niala on a quest searching where all the pyreflies went(remember the enemy is trying to make a monster to by turning themself into an aeon)he is found defeated outside the temple of a boss

Ice Aeon-Wendigo:A hairy ape like aeon adorned with lots of shiny golden jewelery Overdrive:Heart of Ice
wendigo is found when you defeat him by removing his choker mind control thingy and again purify sumon power

Thunder Aeon-Raiku:A wolf made of lightning Overdrive:Booming Thunder
raiku is found as natie pet and protects the girls by carrying them all to safety and they change him to an aeon cuz he acts like he wanted it to happen(first spiritual beast)

Wind Aeon-Kukulkan:A long green snake with six golden wings Overdrive:Gnashing Gale
kukulcan is found in luca attcking ppl at night and when natie is bitten he is beaten senseless by the other two then she sees his true self and changes him into the aeon and everyone is healed

Gravity Aeon-Orion:A tall man in a long blue cloak with a silver bow Overdrive:Crushing Compression
orion is found when they travel to space and the main baddie his name should be zera and he vrings those stars to life and when you defeat him boom summon

Time Aeon-Father Time:A bearded man in a maroon cloak holding an hourglass Overdrive:Eon Breaker
father time is when you are sent in to the end of time and yeah were into a whole new tech spira and anyway he finds you after you walk through the dark for a while and he says he'll help you cuz if he doesnt then all hope is lost for spira

Dark Aeon-Chernabog:Tall black gargoyle with massive wings and three eyes Overdrive:Shadow Eclipse
chernabog is a badguy you fight him 3 times then he puts you throught tests and when you pass them you get his respect and he alllows you to make him a summon

Holy Aeon-Metatron:A beautiful woman in a revealing outfit (like Shiva)with a golden halberd Overdrive:Judgment of the Living
metatron is found as a woman that is going crazy and cant stand it she tries to blow up bevelle an dthe girls take the mission and when they get to her make her a suommon

Non-Elemental non elemental is falconion a huge flame bird with blue and gold armor
the monster you fight at a time father time sends you to on accident when you finish him off you are sent back to your time to see where his body is buried and sees he is trapped and about to die you make a contract with him and he gets summon power and bust both walls that were closing in on him

Supreme Aeon-Isis:Gorgeous olive skinned woman in a beautiful,flowing gown and seven rotating swords above her head and a grimoire(spellbook) in her arms Overdrive:Supreme Light of Justice
isis is found when you go to aeon council and it is asked why there is an extra seat they say becuz youve given out almost all the summon power and that all that is left is the one power and that only one is worthy but she is too proud to take it and yall make her take the power when her mother is going to be destroyed by aesma and when she taks the power she ages to her 20's

Main Characters Special Powers

leena summon power gives summons their abilities

natie sacrifice can give up her power to make alot of damage but is only used twice and once she only survived cuz she had a friend with one of the few isisflicker left and it healed her(this turns out to be the big bad guy and she has mixed feelings when she has to confront him
larca power purify takes the evil out of something
gibraltor power to locate any huge mass of isisflickers and this only works in his general area
marquis his power gives summons the needed isisflickers to hold a physical form
Story

the team was on a mission in space they were yuki and natie it was a big mission so they had also hired other people to help with security and while they were there yuki met a wolf that seemes unreal then it jumped at her and she was absorbed into yuki the rest o the team met an animal that also absorbed into them that's how they all got their powers their beast that they get corresponds that's why the wolf proud and strong grants power and such

Bad Guys
the bad guys are a group of people that feel the world is in chaos and that they have been wronged enough to where they deserve to own it i'll ediit their seperate back stories later

Faadrir-One of the magicians.First one you encounter.None of the other magicians take him that seriously but he turns out to be good and when he joins you they see him as a great threat and kill him and yes he can be revived

Firenze-One of the magicians.Very cocky.Second you encounter.He always tries to flirt with Somihar

Somihar-One of the magicians.She has a gentle facade but is really very sick and twisted.Third you encounter.

Raziel-One of the magicians.The most kindly and gentle.He almost regrets becoming evil.Fourth you encounter

Samson-One of the magicians.He is VERY strong and VERY dumb.It's kind of a mystery why the magicians even keep him around.Fifth you encounter. he may be the strongest magician but his iq is too low to tap into the power

Ketrol-One of the magicians.He likes to appear and dissappear at different times, usually to taunt our heroes.Encountered many times but is the sixth you kill

Aesma-The final magician.He is quiet and only speaks quick,witty insults and such.Has the most powerful magic.Encountered as the last boss


final boss splits so you fight 3 diff versions that larca and natie fight one gibraltor and marquis fight anothr and yuki fights one all by herself
and then assembles to make a great monster

oh yeah all main characters can control isisflickers but not as good as the bad guys

These are the things I don't understand:
-The whole first section of the post titled STORY
-Under the Spiritual Beast Gaia it mentions the "incident" what is that? the incident is when yuki get's the power to make a physical body for spiritual beasts
-Under the Spiritual Beast Sobek it talks about a place called Niala,is that like a city?yes
-Is Raiku the first Spiritual Beast or is Gaia?gaia
-Why do they travel to space in the first place?to do a mercenary job
-Why are they sent to the end of time?because the bad guys saw you as strong enough to defeat them
-Isn't that too much work to gain the Chernabog summon?you fight him 3 times through the game not three times in a row
-Is Metatron a human or a Spiritual Beast,or does the team make her into a Spiritual Beast?If they do,how?shes a human then a spiritual beast and yuki gives her the power
-Why does Father Time keep transporting them through time?because he doesnt want the world to result to chaos
-Ummh...The whole Isis Spiritual Beast section doesn't make much sense.yes there is a goddess that wanted to be normal and she gave up her powers and she is the little girl that
-In what ways do the team use their special powers?How are they significant?yuki grants spiritual beasts there power natie makes there physical form pure and the rest are changeable
-What is the big mission in space and why is there a big mystical wolf there? because it was meant for yuki to merge with it
-Faadrir joins Yuki and the rest of the team?Why?yes and because they don't treat him like he's nothing
-Aesma was supposed to be a girl.oh i changed that my bad
You also need to edit alot of the references to aries,aeons etc.(things not relevant to the current story)Also consult to me and ff freak on some of the stuff you make.I might sound a little harsh but this project is going pretty much nowhere.We start new things without finishing others.Also are you guys completely ignoring the battle system I made?
ya'll are adding a whole lot more than i have lately and have not really thought most of it through most of the characters and places can't stay why don't ya'll consult me i want to know before you add crap that makes no sense
Please answer these questions eiko guy

why don't you stop saying that stuff we have made up is crap okay you weren't online so it is a little hard to consult you isn't it also the story section doesn't say how the story begins

im sorry im not saying what you add is crappy im just saying think it all through some is a little whoo

We have though me and al bhed kid were talking about it yesterday and those are the ideas we came up with if you don't like it post what you don't like and we'll see if we can change it.

in the battle system I created (check page 1)they ran around the battle field helping the party fight the enemies and then after they defeated a certain amount of enemies they performed a special attack

I only asked because I have ideas for more Spiritual Beasts! we have more than we'll probably use

ok here is one of the Spiritual Beasts(he is optional like Anima from X):
Name:Jung
Element:Knowledge
Appearance:Large floating snake beast with large wings and a book in it's talons
Special Attack:Mark of Insanity-Casts Haste,Berserk and Confusion on all enemies
__________________
knowledge isnt an element and we don't need more

Name:Buice (pronounced like boyce)
Starting level:12
Starting job: Tamer
Location found: Jangeren
Background: same hometown as Natie. when they were younger he secretly had a crush on her but after meeting Yuki he has developed feelings for her. You get him when he is searching for a powerful monster to tame. He is at Jangeren
Age:19
Hometown: Jangeren

i just don't like the name and tamer should change to


Xanadu-Technology city
Medras-Mining city
Jangeren-???
Niala(?)
Vajji-Desert kingdom
Lavasria-City located in the snowy mountains
Sa'afra-City located on the island of Tavu
Rajul-Ancient city
Zagar-Largest city,Las-Vegas like w/ casinos and such
Destula-City located in the deep forest
Arca-City located on a remote island
Miasma-City located in a giant swamp
New Xanadu-City located near a volcanic mountain
Shamballa-Fabled paradise located somewhere in the snowy mountains
Ruins of Aggajji-Sister city of Rajul,both located in a barren land
Plasmia-Abandoned city inhabited b spirits
Lazuli-City located in a deep rocky valley
Tide City-City located on the ocean's coast
Fadajria-Ancient underground city
change their descriptive word into what it would be in india or greece


yeah good point oooh how about plasmia as the ghost town you know ghosts leave behind ectoplasm.

I think we have enough for now but we should think about where we find the SP's also I don't like the whole space and time travel thing that Eiko guy suggested
what why not they go to space and have a mission and time travel is the best



Gaia-Found in Medras
Flamberge-Found in New Xanadu
Sobek-Found in Sa'afra
Kukulcan-Jangeren
Raiku-Zagar
Wendigo-Lavasria
Chernabog-Plasmia
Orion-Destula
Father Time-Ragul
Metatron-Niala
Falconion-Lazuli
Isis-Vajji
Jung-Arca
Ershkigal-Ruins of Aggajji


cool but the places have to be renamed


Name: ERSHKIGAL
Type: all elemental
Attacks: Shadow flare-hits one enemy for dark damage
Sneeze- hits one enemy for wind damage. capable of blowing an enemy away
Tidal tornado- hits one enemy for water damage. capable of washing an enemy away
Flame blast - fireball hits one opponent. capable of inflicting burn status effect
Earth shatter- creates small earthquake around one enemy
Holy revival- fully heals one characters hp and mp
Ultimate attack- Ultima breath- Hits all opponents with ultima inflicting muchos non elemental damage.

no no no no no no

okay what is wrong with the characters name I don't like the name Yuki but there you go.

it's not that there is something wrong with it i mean but

yuna rikku paine none sound like boyce it's just weird i like yuki cuz it would work well with the oriental market

And that makes buice bad because...

it doesnt sound cool boice

neither does Yuki

my friends mindy and chau thinkk it dous and they are asian the ppl that have to like it before we get a choice in it they think boice is kinda sucky

Actually we have to like it first not your friends. If we don't like it then obviously we change it.

i know it's just that think of all the names in the past gau is weird but a weird that's cool boice could be changed to something that reflects his personality

WTF!!!!???? why was this moved to the rp forums

that's what i was wondering

How is this in any way an rp

what do you think of if we keep boice tha he's in love with yuki but she never notices. everybody else see's i but she's in love with [insert character name]

I think yuki should be in love with Gibraltor but he ends up going out with Larca.

loud and wild wouldn't work for yuki it has to be someone with a heart of gold

But there isn't anyone like that.

we could add more i mean most ff's i played had 7-8 characters

Yeah i mean ff6 had loads of characters plus sub characters that only joined you for a short while.

Closed as per request.