[RP] Lhandria: Apocalypse

Lhandria: Apocalypse

Overview: Unlike most solar systems Lhandria sits at the center of it's universe. All the worlds revolve around this large, unique, planet, including it's 3 suns. There are a total of 11 planets in this galaxy consisting of Lhandria, Illnia (The first and largest sun), Rosta, Chrionta, Luos (The second and smallest sun), Freidnoq, Ferostia, Gnalse, Djali (The third/final mid sized sun), Pestos, and finally Zayle.

There are also two moons that revolve around Lhandria, Mordon and Ludo.
Mordon is the moon of the night, or rather, it occupies the night sky. Ludo is the morning moon, rising with the sun, but setting just before noon each day.

Here is the Lhandrian Galaxy. (http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f380/Alelluia_LOCKandLOAD/lhandria.jpg)

Thirteen races live on Lhandria each with their own pre-determined plot of land (country). Uldra Plains, Khalyp, Reid, Hyalta, Kroni, Dietes,Taiika, Khung-Laa, Gorge of Haldom, Schyka, Yuuritz, Ludonia, and Civilization XVIII (18).

Here is a Planet Map. (http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f380/Alelluia_LOCKandLOAD/lhandriaplanet.jpg)

Some live peacefully, but of course, some do not....

Uldra Plains

Species Name: Uldra

Population: 500 000

Physical characteristics: The Uldra look almost identical to your average dragon. They are an approximate 19 feet tall on average. They are well-built powerhouses and have two horns sprouting fom the back of their necks. The only difference between the Uldra and a dragon is that only the females have wings. The males stay land bound and are consequently not as strong as the women.

Mentality: They have recently proven to be extremely intelligent creatures, especially the males. They study more vigorously due to their seclusion from the sky and, essentially, adventure.

Interactions With Other Countries: They are generally secluded from all other races. However, the Econians of Reid (the Uldra Plains' neighbouring country) seem to look to the Uldra as Gods of some kind. The Uldra are unaware of the reason why the Econians believe this.

Religion: The Uldra believe that everything in existence was created not by a God, but by the will of everything that was, and everthing that was to be.

Extra Info: The Uldra did not communicate with other countries until just recently. They did not feel the need to until they began sensing some kind of evil arrising in the near future. The others were ignorant of their premonition and saw the Uldras act of kindness as a trick to gain trust and eventually attempt to take over their land. The only race that trusted them were the Econians, who already looked towards the Uldra as their Gods. Since then the Uldra have not interacted with any of the other races and, in conclusion, do not trust anyone. Sadly, they have become endangered over the past 3 centuries due to their inability to adapt to the planets ongoing changes. They have their own name for their country which is Uldriarch, but, since they did not communicate with others for so long, everyone just called it the Uldra Plains. It is located right on the equator, and seems to hang down almost directly between Kroni and Hyalta, homes to the biggest rivals of Lhandria.
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Khalyp

Species Name: Lidenn

Population: 4 000 000

Physical characteristics: The Lidenn stand at approximately six-feet tall, have a grey-black skin colour, and have white pupils. Like humans, they must work to keep their bodies the way they want them.

Mentality: They are very mysterious creatures and are always very quiet. They will never say more than what needs to be said. They have complex minds that cannot be explained by anyone of another race, and they themselves do not wish to tell anyone of their secrets.

Interactions With Other Countries: They, like previously noted, will only ever interact with other races when absolutely necessary only saying exactly what was intended and leaving. They work together with the Cienna during battle.

Religion: They believe that existence stems from darkness itself. They praise Khalypso the god of darkness and even named their country on behalf of him. Do not mistake darkness with evil, they are not in any sense of the word an evil community.

Extra Info: All that is known of the Lidenn is that they live in a northern country called Khalyp, and have some kind of 'friendship' with the Cienna of the North.
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Reid

Species Name: Econian

Population: 9 000 000

Physical characteristics: The Econians are the humans of Lhandria. They have our exact physical characteristics. They average out at 5'10". Like the Lidenn they also must work to keep their bodies in their preferred state.

Mentality: The Econians are very caring and hospitable. They will help someone/thing in need in an instant. They are not exactly geniuses, but they are not stupid either. They have an average intelligence, which, of course, varies among their race.

Interactions With Other Countries: The Econians do not hold any type of grudge against any of the other races in general. They see everyone/thing as a friend until they have reason to believe otherwise. Above all else, they worship the Uldra.

Religion: They believe exactly what the Uldra believe. "....that everything in existence was created not by a God, but by the will of everything that was, and everthing that was to be." They also believe that the Uldra were given life to protect them, or be their 'Guardians.'

Extra Info: The Econians ancestors descended from the planet Rosta, second closest to Lhandria. They were driven off of their planet by a solar eclipse between Rosta, Rosta's moon Sarta, and the first sun Illnia. Illnia was slowly moving towards Rosta over the past 70 years, and, finally, came close enough to affect Rostas climate. During the eclipse, the suns rays conflicted with the moisture in the ozone layer, evaporating much of Rostas water. The rays also reflected off of the moon, which was on the other side of Rosta, doing the same to the ozone layer on that side. The small amounts of moisture that was left was scalding hot and, when it fell to the ground, it killed plants and small animals, also evaporating most of the water mass. The Econians could not live on Rosta under these conditions, and fled to Lhandria. Upon their arrival the Econians had nowhere to go as they were denied entry to most countries because they were too 'different' and not enough was known about them. They needed a place with a lot of life flourishing around them as they are very spiritual people and love everything the earth gives them. They found these qualities in the Uldra Plains. The Uldra generally ignored the Econians, letting them live off their land freely. The Uldra would unknowingly leave unneeded food and shelter which the Econians would then take as their own. The Uldra eventually decided that they did not need as much land as they had, and they left the land that the Econians were utilizing. When the Uldra left, the Econians believed that the Uldra were placed there to lead the Econians into a suitable land and help them start a community, and, when the Econians were ready, leave. In conclusion, Reid became a country, and the Econians believe that the Uldra are their 'Spiritual Guardians' and worship them.
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Hyalta

Species Name: Eaudine

Population: 1 500 000

Physical characteristics: The Eaudine are equipped for life under the sea or other large bodies of water. On land they look like tall, muscular, humans (normally wearing shorts and a vest, and standing at 7 feet tall). When the penetrate the waters surface, they change into a fish-like figure from the waist down.

Mentality: They are a very laid back care free people. They will serve as a best friend, but a ferocious fighter aswell.

Interactions With Other Countries: They enjoy mocking those who cannot survive under water, and being carefree, they often insult the wrong person. This sometimes gets them into difficult situations. They fear the Ghox of Kroni because of their strength, attitude, and ability to breathe underwater. They have become good friends with the inhabitants Civilization XVIII, which turned out to benefit them greatly. They know that the people of Civ. XVIII could destroy them and the Ghox alike at the push of a button, which, although could harm them, also serves as a form of protection.

Religion: The Eaudine believe that all land elevated from the sea floor, and that the world was once covered in water. They worship the Goddess of water, Nylei, who they presume ordered the waters to form their world and home.

Extra Info: Eaudine waters are generally a safe and fun place to frolic most anytime, as they welcome visitors with open arms and often please others with their sense of humour. However, if you enrage an Eaudian, you may not want to ever meet one again, as they are extremely protective and supportive of each other. They mostly reside on a small string of islands called Hyalta, somewhere off the coast of the Uldra Plains. Approximately one third of Lhandria's ocean is Eaudine waters.
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Kroni

Species Name: Ghox

Population: 900 000

Physical characteristics: The Ghox are enormous grey creatures that look almost like rhinocerouses with a coat of fur around their necks. The stand on their hind legs and have large, solid, muscles throughout their body. Like the Eaudine, they are equipped for life in the water aswell. When they enter the water their bottom halves turn into a shark-like figures.

Mentality: They are an extremely stupid race. They base their decisions entirely on violence. The more the better.

Interactions With Other Countries: They hate everyone, sometimes even each other. They hate the Eaudine more than any of the others.

Religion: The Ghox believe that all land elevated from the sea floor, and that the world was once covered in water. They worship the Goddess of water, Nylei, who they presume ordered the waters to form their world and home. They believe that Nylei never intended the Eaudine to exist and because of this they feel a strong need to exterminate the Eaudine.

Extra Info: The Ghox were one of the first races to live on Lhandria. When they finally evolved from the primitive Ghox to a smaller form, closer to what they are today, a massive ice storm hit Lhandria. This caused the world to be covered in snow and frigid temperatures. This caused the Ghox to adapt to the weather and grow a fur coat. When the ice finally melted, after a number of years, parts of Lhandria were submerged in water. The Ghox managed to adapt to the circumstances for a second time, and eventually gained the ability to live under water. They strangly kept both the coat of fur and the ability to change for water life even after the climate had returned to its natural state. This shows the Ghoxs inability to revert to a less complex creature. Once the gain an attribute of any kind, they retain that exact attribute no matter what the circumstance. Most of them seem to have accumulated on a small island called Kroni. However, over half of Lhandrias oceans are still Ghox territory. Some believe that the Ghox are a type of Dermott.
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Dietes North South

Species Name: Cienna Imp Pixie

Population: 2 500 000

Physical characteristics: The Cienna stand at approximately 1'6". They have a purple-grey skin colour. The Cienna of the South have wings.

Mentality: They are cunning theives who can act their way out of any predicament.

Interactions With Other Countries: The Cienna of the North are very close to the Lidenn, and may very well be the only ones that know anything about them. they often will travel with each other working as a team. The Lidenn will do the dirty work, and the Cienna will pick up after them, taking the belongings of the deceased.
The Cienna of the South are an independant culture. They fight alongside each other, and distribute the rewards evenly.

Religion: Like the Lidenn, the Cienna of the North worship the god of darkness, Khalypso.
The Cienna of the South worship the God of Light, Lumine.

Extra Info: Every Cienna have their own unique belongings because everything they own is stolen. They are mages and tend to pick staff like weapons (A spoon, stick, paintbrush, etc.). The Cienna of the North are very skilled with dark magic (demi, fire, and poison elements).
The Cienna of the South are equally as skilled as their Northern counterparts, except in light magic (heal, lightning, and water elements).
The battles of magic that have waged between the Cienna of the North and Cienna of the South over the years have begun to tear away at the country in its center. Evetually, it seems, that the country will split in two and the Cienna will live in peace with their own kind and no need for battle.
When a Cienna is born it is either born as an Imp (no wings), who is skilled in dark magic, or a Pixie (winged), who is skilled in light magic. As infants they are sent to their respective halves of the country. Imps are sent North, Pixies are sent South. Of course, if they are born already in their own territory, they remain there.

The Cienna of the North and the Cienna of the South have their own individual Government/Army.
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Taiika

Species Name: Rynne & Dermott

Population: 7 000 000

Physical characteristics: The Rynne float above the surface of the ground like ghosts. However, you can physically touch them. They wear cloaks and hats (much like mages). They are about 3 feet tall & elevate 3 feet from the ground. Therefore their heads sit at about 6 feet high.
The Dermott are a type of animal. There are 3 types which reside in Taiika, Lessa, Berla, and Tyne. The Lessa are a kind of alligator, looking creature. They are very agile in water, and have extremely strong jaws. The Berla are bear-like creatures. They can run up to 60 mph and are extremely strong. The Tyne look like eagles. They can fly and have extremely keen eyesight.

Mentality: The Rynne are extremely smart, and can speak to the Dermott through telekenisis.
The Dermott only trust the Rynne.

Interactions With Other Countries: Taiika is in a feud with Khung-Laa. They have never even acknowledged the existence of any other countries.

Religion: Like the Cienna of the South, the Rynne worship the god of light, Lumine.
The Dermott believe the Rynne are their masters.

Extra Info: A Rynne can genetically combine him/herself with a Dermott. It will appear as if the Rynne is riding the Dermott, but, in actuality, they are attached. They will often use this technique for transport, but have recently needed to use it to wage war against Khung-Laa. No one knows why the Rynne and the Dermott have this spiritual bond.
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Khung-Laa

Species Name: Lupinne

Population: 5 750 000

Physical characteristics: The Lupinne are Rynne permanently combined with the extinct Dermott race, Lupere. They are approximately 7 feet tall, and look somewhat like werewolves with torn Rynne clothing (cloaks and sometimes hats).

Mentality: They are an extremely smart and cunning race.

Interactions With Other Countries: Khung-Laa is in a feud with Taiika. They have never even acknowledged the existence of any other countries.

Religion: They believe that the night moon, Mordon, is their God, watching over them from the skies.

Extra Info: There once was a fourth Dermott race called the Lupere. They looked much like your average wolf. They were having a difficult time competing with the rest of the Dermott races who were much larger and more capable of hunting. The Lupere's strengths were speed and agility, which, although useful attributes, did not match up to the abilities of the other 3 Dermott. However, one extraordinary thing about them was their intelligence. One night they came up with a plan, they would infiltrate the capital of Taiika, Khung-Laa. The city was mainly used for political matters which generally only concerned the Rynne, and, consequently, there were not very many Dermott. They were successful in their intrusion and soon took control of the city. The Rynne feared their power causing them to flee from the city of Khung-Laa. This was not the end of the Lupere's plan, they needed the help of the Rynne. They convinced some of the Rynne that they were not a threat and would protect them. Most of the Rynne did not believe them and abandoned the city, but, some, agreed to live with the Lupere. The plan was going exactly as intended. Late one night, a small group of Lupere were sent out to attack a small village, without telling the Rynne. The next day the people of the village retaliated. The Lupere told the Rynne that they did not know why they were being assaulted and needed their help to fend off the attackers. The Rynne agreed to combine with the Lupere for the battle. This is exactly what the Lupere needed to finish off their plan. As soon as they were combined the Lupere used the Rynne's psychic powers to keep them permanently combined. From that point on, the Lupere were no more. They were now Lupinne, a breed of Dermott genetically enhanced by the powers of the Rynne. The Lupinne were now equal in strength to the rest of the Dermott. The city of Khung-Laa was thenceforth secluded from the rest of Taiika, becoming its own country. They slowly expanded their territory into Taiika through war, enlarging Khung-Laa. The Rynne and Dermott of Taiika will never forgive the Lupinne for their tricks, and the war will only end when one of the two countries are destroyed.
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Gorge of Haldom

Species Name: Minions of the Abyss

Population: ???

Physical characteristics: The Minions of the Abyss have the physical characteristics of any of the other 12 races except for the fact that they look zombified. They are tinted darker than they normally would be, and have empty eye sockets. The Uldra of the Gorge's wings have deteriorated and have holes in them. Sometimes they even lose their wings altogether. The Reij of the Gorge have no armor as they were extracted from it before being condemned to the Gorge. this causes them to endure extreme suffering for all of eternity.

Mentality: Their mental capacity varies according to they race of which they came from.

Interactions With Other Countries: They were secluded from their respective countries and hate the country of which they came.

Religion: They believe in no God.

Extra Info: The residents of the Gorge of Haldom were damned to the Gorge for treasonous acts against their country. The Gorge of Haldom was agreed upon by the other 12 countries to be the 'prison' in which any criminal sent from their countries would spend the rest of eternity. There was a magic seal placed over the Gorge to prevent anyone inside from dying. A gift? Not at all... Non-stop fighting raged in the depths of the Gorge because any rivalry that went on between races outside the Gorge still was in affect beneath the surface. However just recently, some kind of order has been set in the Gorge by a 'presidential' figure who seems to have gained the respect of the others (probably through power and violence). He has convinced the others to unite into an enormous army, and they are planning a revolt to unleash their revenge upon the rest of the world.
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Schyka

Species Name: Kyrt

Population: 7 000 000

Physical characteristics: The Kyrt are short beetle-like creatures. They have two strong wings on their back that look and act as a shell or a form of protection. They are approximately 4 feet tall.

Mentality: The Kyrt are not very smart, but they are a very caring race that values life to an extreme.

Interactions With Other Countries: The Kyrt are a very timid people. They are somewhat afraid of other races, and try to avoid most anybody. However, they do have a friendship with the Econians of Reid, who love all of nature.

Religion: They do not have much of a religion. They believe that the rulers are whoever is strongest to lead.

Extra Info: They are able to control the actions of large swarms of insects for whatever reason they may have. It is believed that they originated from the planet Forestia, it is said a large egg was sent out by the Forestians, so that they could fertilize the rest of the galaxy with their kin. Some believe a meteor that hit Lhandria thousands of years ago was actually that exact egg, but no one, not even the Kyrt themselves, are sure. They generally avoid conflict, but if and when they need to engage an enemy, they tend to fight from afar with their swarm battalions.
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Yuuritz

Species Name: Szapielle

Population: 625 000

Physical characteristics: They are an extremely scrawny race. They stand at about 5 feet tall. Their numbers are few because they live in the North and are not properly outfitted physically for the climate. They wear enormous parka's and look like little Eskimos.

Mentality: They are a race of average mentality. Some think they are stupid for not leaving Yuuritz with the condition they are in, but they have a reason.

Interactions With Other Countries: Some believe that they must have some kind of relationship with the Myrlle of Ludonia because the most southern part of their continent almost touches it. However, they do not even know that the Myrlle exist.

Religion: They believe that the spirit of a White Lupere is their guardian.

Extra Info: As small and harmless as they may look, the Szapielle are a savage race. They have to acquire that kind of 'do-or-die' mentality so that they could survive in their climate. they have a small army, which, in actuality, is made up mostly of hunters that are skilled with the harpoon.
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Ludonia

Species Name: Myrlle

Population: 925 000

Physical characteristics: The Myrlle are small, white, bird-like creatures. They stand at an exact 3'6" no matter who they are, and wear cloaks of varying colour.

Mentality: They are quite possibly the smartest race on Lhandria. They all descended from scientists that came from the morning moon, Ludo.

Interactions With Other Countries: Everyone half-decent enjoys the company of the Myrlle, as they are quite enjoyable, funny little fellows that supply Lhandria with great knowledge.

Religion: Being scientists, they believe that everything stems from evolution.

Extra Info: The Myrlle are the only ones that understand why Ludo is only out in the morning. It actually has to do with a kind of black hole. Ludo orbits Lhandria twice as fast as Mordon, causing it to rise and set faster than Mordon. This should mean that Ludo alternates between being in the sky during morning and during the afternoon. However, a small area of clouded space that sits in the orbit of Ludo freezes it in place until it is time for it to rise during the morning again. This does not pose any extreme threat to Lhandria, but it is very dangerous for those that live on the moon.
While in the 'void' (we'll call it) severely dangerous storms terrorize Ludo. Lightning touches down all across the planet, killing hundreds of people every day. That is why the people of Ludo sent all their vessels could carry of their smartest citizens down to live on Lhandria. During battle, they normally will use enormous gun-like weapons that are very high-tech. (Think the weapons that the Covenant uses in Halo.)
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Civilization XVIII (18)

Species Name: Reij

Population: 2 000 000

Physical characteristics: The Reij are very weak and frail creatures that reside in the body of a robot. They have harnessed the ability of electricity and use it greatly to their advantage. If it was not for this than they would not survive.

Mentality: They are very intelligent creatures. They know how to operate heavy machinery or any type of computerized programming device.

Interactions With Other Countries: They are very kind creatures, but their ability to use electrical devices frightens most of the other races. However, The Eaudine of Hyalta, and Myrlle of Ludonia, understand how electricity works (the Hyalta, out of fear, became friends with the Reij and the Myrlle are scientists) so they are not as afraid.

Religion: They have no need for Religion as they are sure that, through technology, they will find a cure for death.

Extra Info: Without their suits of robotic armor, the Reij would not be able to communicate with the other races. They have no mouths and use their minds to speak through the suit. They do not have names as they feel they have no need for them. Instead, they are organized into colour-coded 'rankings.' The common civilian wears Grey armor. There is nothing special about them. A low class foot-soldier wears Blue armor. It is equipped with a sword on it's arm. A low-class ranged soldier wears Yellow armour. It has a gun for an arm. A higher form of experienced soldier wears large Green armor. They have large cannons attached to their backs and are sometimes referred to as 'tanks.' Highlight the following where it seems there is no text to read. Another form of experienced soldiers are dressed in Black armor. Both of their arms are swords and they are very light and stealthy. They are occasionally referred to as 'assasins.' Commanders are dressed in White. They have gained the respect to be referred to as 'Commander' White. They have the attributes of both the 'tanks' and the 'assasins.' The General is dressed in Red armor. He is referred to as Mr. Red, and has a completely custom weapon.
The President is dressed in full body, Gold-plated armor. He too has a custom weapon and is named President Gold. Each and every member of the army's suit also can revert to a model that is exact in shape and maneuverability to the Grey's. They retain their colour, however.
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Character Application Sheet and other important rules and regulations

You will choose a race/country you wish to control, and you will make character descriptions for a President, a General, and 3 Commanders. Presidents control political issues, meeting with government officials and making important decisions as to the movements of the country. Generals control warfare. They are skilled fighters and basically the leader of your countries army. Commanders are a step below Generals and each control their own squadron who can be assigned to a job by either the President or the General.

Name:
Age:
Sex:
Weight:
Height:
Position (President/General/Commander, etc.):
Country/Race:
Physical Characteristics:
Mental Capacity:
Religious Beliefs:
Interaction with Others:
History:
Weapon of Choice:
Extra Info:

I will expect extreme care and detail to be put into your description. As a kind of example, look at the amount of detail I put into the race descriptions. I will expect no less from you. I would like the History to be very descriptive. As for Extra Info, Religious Beliefs, and Interaction with others, I would like them to be approximately the length that they are in the race descriptions. A perfect example of an extremely rushed poorly done character description, was the skyline character that was posted during the beginnig of this thread. You can tell that very little thought was put into the description.

---IMPORTANT---

Please keep your characters attributes generally within the boundaries of its race. There is obviously little tweaks to the system that are acceptable, but nothing too extreme.

Ex.
Acceptable- "He was probably one of the smartest of the Ghox, being raised in such an information riich area."

Unacceptable-"This Ghox was so smart that he was smarter than the most intelligent Myrlle."

^Not Cool^

---ALSO---

Please, save me the trouble and do not join if you do not have at least a mediocre understanding of proper English. It causes far too much confusion, and there is much too much writing involved in this TBRPG for someone who cannot use proper spelling and grammar. Basically, if you understand my vocabulary you should be fine.

Thank you and have fun.

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The race descriptions have all been posted. We may begin.

Role-playing games go in the Writer's Forum.

yeah, this sounds pretty cool :D

-Gull-

It seems I'll be looking at posting 2 races a night. If I can get any more in I will try. I will post a general outline of how this project will be laid out after I am done posting race descriptions so you all can get started preparing for the game.

yeah, as sooon as you get the character descriptions sorted then i'll join :)

-Gull-

The Cienna of Dietes are posted! This race was a tough one but I am very pleased with the result! Stick around and the rest will be done shortly.

Be sure to look at the Galaxy Map and World Map I Edited in at the top of my first post. It can help you to gain more of a visual understanding of my descriptions.

Please excuse the blurriness of the Galaxy Map.

name: skyline
wepons: cerberus(vincents hand gun from ffVII advent children), the brotherhood blade(tidus' sword)
age:17
height:6foot 10
weight: 13 stone
history: once warrior disgraced and banished from Reid, i have returned to reclain my position as general, along with my honor.
race:Econian

skyline here again, would like to join rpg

hey Skyline, just click the edit/delete button on the corner of your post if you want to change or add something. i don't mind so much but it may anger the CKs *bows* if you double post to much.

-Gull-

I will explain playing style and character requirements once I have finished the character descriptions.

okay, can't wait :)

Race number eight is complete. I'll let you all in on a hint. You will be able to choose which race you want your character to be (I know, not much of a hint, I just figured I should clarify). I will need the following for each country.
-A President: handles political matters and important decisions.
-A General: has control of the countries army and makes war-based decisions.
-3 Commanders: One-step down from the general. They each have control over their own squadron.
-You may request other optional positions (bodyguards, soldiers, wanderers, political advisors (political advisors are automatically controlled by the president if one is not assigned to the job), etc.)

So, you can begin to brainstorm some ideas AMONGST YOURSELVES do not post any characters yet, as I have not yet posted my requirements.

Coolness. :D I'm gonna delete my posts since they are only taking up room.

I'll need to see the play description before I decide.
Looks interesting.

No Problem. That should be up tonight as there are only 2 races left and I know EXACTLY how they are going to be laid out. Plus, I'm off work!

sounds awsome, I'm in!

It doesn't seem to be a current problem with any of our members, but I would like to stress the fact that I would like each and every applicant to have an avatar when we begin the game. This is just to avoid confusion (so we all can associate a picture with a name, It's easier to remember than a name and a game name. We don't want to keep going back and forth to see who everyone is. When I begin the competition, I would request that every message posted does not have a sig attached. This just takes up room, and we already have enough to scroll through while reading the story, Thanks.

We may begin.

Civilization XVIII's whole arsenault will be controlled by Mr. Red as he is a close friend of mine and will serve as a 'second-in-command' for the RPG.
I am going to control all of Khalyp. That includes, President, General, and all 3 Commanders. Any other optional spot may be requested by anyone, and I will consider it. I am thinking on lowering the number of Commanders to 1 if the amount of members who join are in short supply. If you post your character before I post mine (I will post my first character, both as an example, and as my own President) I will still accept it if the requirements are met. I will tell you if I need more information.

Anyway, here it is:

Name:
Age:
Sex:
Height:
Weight:
Birthdate:
Position (President/General/Commander, etc.):
Country/Race:
Physical Characteristics:
Mental Capacity:
Religious Beliefs:
Interaction with Others:
History:
Weapon of Choice:
Extra Info:

I will expect extreme care and detail to be put into your description. As a kind of example, look at the amount of detail I put into the race descriptions. I will expect no less from you. I would like the History to be very descriptive. As for Extra Info, Religious Beliefs, and Interaction with others, I would like them to be approximately the length that they are in the race descriptions. A perfect example of an extremely rushed poorly done character description, was the skyline character that was posted during the beginnig of this thread. You can tell that very little thought was put into the description.

---IMPORTANT---

Please keep your characters attributes generally within the boundaries of its race. There is obviously little tweaks to the system that are acceptable, but nothing too extreme.

Ex.
Acceptable- "He was probably one of the smartest of the Ghox, being raised in such an information rich area."

Unacceptable-"This Ghox was so smart that he was smarter than the most intelligent Myrlle."

^Not Cool^

---ALSO---

Please, save me the trouble and do not join if you do not have at least a mediocre understanding of proper English. It causes far too much confusion, and there is much too much writing involved in this TBRPG for someone who cannot use proper spelling and grammar. Basically, if you understand the vocabulary I use you should be fine.

Thank you and have fun.

You don't want the name of our character? or the age?

I am accepting applications.

Name: Kraan Dhurre

Age:57

Birthdate: March 12

Position (President/General/Commander, etc.): General

Country/Race: Dietes / Cienna of the North

Physical Characteristics: Mostly Stolen Clothing, A Black/Greyish Wizard Hat, A Brown peice of Fabric Around the Neck worn as a cape, And Fitting Pants tied around the waist by a peice of Rope.

Mental Capacity: A wise Imp, comitted to the life of stealing and fighting.

Religious Beliefs: Kraan worships the god of darkness, Khalypso.

Interaction with Others: Being a team with the Lidenn makes the Imp's maybe the only other race that knows anything about the Lidenn, that makes the two a very strong alliance.

History: Both of Kraan's parents were Pixies (Cienna of the South). His birth was a severe disappointment and he was sent to the North to live with other Imps. There he met up with his cousin who was also abandoned by his parents. They joined the army and began to help in the fight against the South. Becoming General was not an easy task for Kraan, with his many years of training he rose through the ranks of the Army and is now proud to lead the army into battle and the many battles that are to come.

Weapon of Choice: A small stick about the same size as him, with a sharp metal point at the tip, probably the remains of a Reij.

Extra Info:Very skilled in the arts of Dark Magic, and theft.

Well done. You pass.

Name: Nakoda Raphoku

Age: 46

Birthdate: April 25

Position (President/General/Commander, etc.): General

Country/Race: Gorge of Haldom/ Lupinne (Minions of the Abyss)

Physical Characteristics: He is a few inches taller then the average Lupinne which made him lose some agility but gain some strength. He has a large scar on his right arm and has a cloak that was already very tattered before being banished but once in the gorge, got worse. He always has a right sleeve to cover his scar which holds many horrifying memories for him, and if he doesn't have that sleeve he will get one by any means necessary. His hat has been through all of his battles and is very torn and ripped and is dirty as all hell due to him never washing it. He believes there is some luck in it and has not removed it from the day he got it.

Mental Capacity: He isn't the smartest Lupinne but he has got enough sense to keep him high ranking in the Gorge.

Religious Beliefs: Like all Minions he believes in no god but only in his lucky hat.

Interaction with Others: Due to the circumstances that he is in the Abyss, Nakoda has developed an intense hate of the Lupinne, Dermott, and Rynne beings.

History: Nakoda Raphoku grew up like many average Lupinne until he started to be schooled. While in the school he was teased and made fun of for his extreme height. This caused him to drop out of school and live on the streets where he learned to fight and survive on his own. He lived this harsh lifestyle until he saw some people joining the military and getting a full meal. He was starving so he signed up. After he realized what he had done he actually began enjoying the battles and was able to release his anger on the battle field. He quickly rose through the ranks becoming a head officer in a few years. But one mission while he was out with his troop they were ambushed and all were killed except Nakoda who got only a few small cuts and a large gash to his arm. After the heads of the Lupinne people heard of this they believed Nakoda had betrayed his country. He pleaded and pleaded but no one would believe his story and was ultimately banished to the Gorge of Haldom. While suffering in the pit of hell that is the Gorge he contemplated how he could get revenge on the nation that betrayed him. He was known throughout the gorge for his anger and when an army arose he was suggested as an officer. While the army was being constructed he was doing so well that he became a general.

Weapon of Choice: His weapon of choice is a double sided battle axe

Extra Info: His fighting style is very dangerous but sloppy due to a lot of it being picked up on the street.

Good Job. *pass*

Here is my General...

Name: Waarne Gharough (Pronounced: Wharn Garo)
Age: 36
Sex: Male
Height: 6'11
Weight: 293 lbs
Birthdate: Unknown
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: General
Country / Race: Khalyp / Lidenn

Physical Characteristics: Body- Massively Built, blue skin, claws for fingernails on five fingers. He wears large brown worker boots, a black vest over his bear chest, and torn jeans.

Face- Wide Jaw, Tall Nose with large bridge, underbite with 3 huge pointed teeth pointing up.

Hair- Bandanna just above the eyes at the hairline (separates hair from face). Long dark blue hair that goes down his back to his shoulderblades that is so dark it just has a blue tint in the light.

Mental Capacity: He seems to be a very intellectually advanced person, but he hardly speaks so it is very hard to tell. He hates conversation.

Religious Beliefs: He isn't big on his countries whole 'everything stems from darkness' thing. Other than that he doesn't really mention religion.

Interaction with Others: He is very quiet and to-the-point and for these reasons not very many people can read his feelings towards them. The only person he trusts entirely is Gourd, his political advisor and Commander.

History: The only thing fully understood about him is that the only person to ever beat him in a fight was his father. He was trying to protect his younger brother from his raging lunatic of a father, but was unsuccessful. Since that moment he has wandered in search of an undetermined goal. Maybe he will tell you parts from his past throughout your journey?

Weapon: Dual Claws. His right hand as a small claw with two blades, attached to a metal wristband that goes on his "wrist". His left hand claw is a massive three blade claw attached to a huge metal ARMband attached to his "arm".

Extra Info: A feirce fighter who makes up for what he lacks in speed with massive amounts of strength and vitality, He simply does not stay down whenever he is knocked over no matter what stands in his way. Doesn't speak often (probably because he has never stayed around another living creature for longer than a fight), his past is known only to him and he never shows any sign of emotion. His lust for battle sometimes gets him into tough situations during a fight, because of how he storms right into a fight (possibly trying to end it quick).

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Name: Heero Yuy
Age: 19
Sex: Male
Height: 6'2"
Weight: 158 lbs.
Birthdate: June 27th
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: El Presidente
Country/Race: Reid/Econian
Physical Characteristics: Silvery white hair, average muscles, blood red eyes
Mental Capacity: Little bit above average intelligence.
Religious Beliefs: I wish I could say that mine believed in God but no race does. Believes that everything in existence was not created by a God, but by the will of everything that was, and everything that will be.
Interaction with Others: See everyone as a friend, and practically worhsip the Uldra.
History: Life was good for him. Lead an average life, had an average family. Everything was great...except for one thing. He was never happy. He knew that something was missing in his life, but what. What was it that would fill his empty heart. Would it be love? Would it be truth? Would it be complete understanding? Could it be all of those? That is what he is searching to find.
Weapon of Choice: Katana


Extra Info: Kind in the most sense, he is never happy. He may try to cheer ppl up in a happy manner, but it is only a mask. Knowing no joy in his life he does not feel for many, but is eager to help in any case. Almost never has a smile on his face.

If you don't mind my asking, what does Heero yuy mean? Anyway, I made no race believe in God because, quite frankly, Lhandria is not Earth, so I tried to make it as least like the human world as possible. I was looking more for a Month-Day date of birth as opposed to a year based date of birth. The year doesn't really matter. I'm a little skeptical as to how the Traveller position will suit the game. They should probably have a more political placement, so they can contribute to the happenings within the country. You could even take being the President into consideration. The Presidents handle a lot of the travelling situations (going to meet others to talk over certain matters, or investigate a situation). The General and Commanders also can travel to the battlefield or to sneak up and assasinate someone. It al depends on the situation at hand. Everyone in actuality must travel at times, so you should pick a position that is a little more 'specialized.' Just a thought. I am very lenient and, if you can give me a legitimate reason to stick with the position you are in; while still contributing to the story, I would be glad to consider it.

Other than that, you pass.

Heero Yuy is a Japanese name and the whole name translates to this: "The one and only." So all of yall bakc off! It's my name! Grr. Lol, anyways. I am a bit uncomfortable with the religion thing cuz I'm chrisitna and I have some strong beliefes but oh well. It's your game. Ok, month and day coming up. As for the position, he's trying to fill his heart. He can't stay in one place knowing he'll never be happy. So he goes across Lhandria trying to seek what he is looking for. Personally, I hate politics. 90% of it is lies anyways so I tend to stay out of that. And I lean more towards pacifism so a militaristic position wouldn't be suited for me either. I'm just the odd man out. Besides, I could be an advisor to those who seek it. I just travel a bunch. I could stop by at military camps and suggest tactics. I could give the president a little confidence. I'm just your average guy that does great things, you know?

Okay, not a terrible idea, but, playing as a wanderer will not contribute to the story very much. Being a president most suits your needs. It isn't politics like real world politics, it's more of watching out for your country and making important decisions as to when and where battle goes on. If someone was to attack Reid than you would make the decision whether or not to retaliate. You travel to talk to other presidents whether to make a truce, a trade, anything really. My only concern is that as a wanderer you probably won't contribute much to the story.You could call yourself a president who likes to handle his concerns personally.

By the way I was just curious about the name. I got no problems with it.

Yeah, it was no problem with the name. Doesn't bother me. Alright, I guess I'll be the president. I don't care.

Cool, you're in.

Nice. :up:

Anyone else interested?

Name: -unknown- (Mr. Red)

Age: 17

Sex: Male

Height: 6'2

Weight: 170 lbs

Birth date: November 5th

positron: General

Country/Race: Civilization XVIII

Physical Characteristics: He like many others has a fragile body which is almost always protected by his custom made suit of armour. His Armour is the colour Red and is strong; it has a few nicks and scratches here and there from past wars or fights Mr. Red has gone through. His right arm has a sword attached to it, and his left has a metal fist he can switch between which hand has what on it but he prefers this setup. Underneath his armour Mr. Red usually wears a black and red cloak with the hood covering his head.

Mental Capacity: out of all Civilization XVIII Mr. Red isn't exactly the smartest, he is lazy, and doesn't care to know too much. He believes if he knows the basics of life there isn't much more he has to learn and so he spends more of his time with swords and weaponry instead of learning.

Religious Beliefs: He believes there was no God and spends his life trying to have fun with it, leading a carefree life like the rest of Civilization XVIII

Interaction with Others: anyone Mr. Red meets can easily become a friend, but if you get off on the wrong foot with him he can hold a grudge for quite awhile. The Eaudine of Hyalta, and Myrlle of Ludonia are also close friends much like the rest of Civ. XVIII he knows of the Hyalta's fear of their race and one day wants to show them that they should not be frightened by Civ XVIII.

History: as a child (Mr.Red) had somewhat of a harsh life. His father was sent out to join the army, and his Mother died of a disease when he was 4 this forced him to survive on his own. Except the president came to his rescue and raised him as if he was his son. Having the president as his Guardian Mr. Red got to see allot of the army and the soldiers and immediately became interested by the age of 9 he was wielding a sword, by the age of 14 he could handle almost any weapon and take down many opponents. by age 16 the President decided to make him General and by age 17 he was out to join the army. while in battle he carries a Topaz close to him which reminds him of his parents who he will always be fighting for.

Weapon of Choice: Ragnorak-a weapon created by himself, with the help of talented craftsmen it's a medium sized sword that’s very sleek and swift. it looks as though it is a light sabre and can singe through the flesh of someone with enough power. he has this sword connected to his right arm and his left arm has a metal fist.

Extra Info: Mr.Red is a generous and highly respected general he controls his squadron with care and does not use them as tools. he is skilled at fighting but wonders if this violence will ever end, he wants there to be no more wars or fighting but to do this he will have to fight, his closes friends are people from his squadron, the President, and other races he may meet on his journey.

Perfect layout, and excellent story. Read through your writing again, though. Small grammatical and spelling errors need to be fixed. Otherwise, you're in.

tomorrow

Good, glad to know you're joining. I'd just like to remind everyone to tell every good writer/friend you know about Lhandria: Apocalypse so that we can get this show on the road.

Here is an update:

Uldra Plains
Uldra
President:
General:
Commander:

Khalyp
Lidenn
President: Slim
General: Waarne Gharough Slim
Commander: Slim

Reid
Econian
President: Heero Yuy Heero Yuy NWZC
General:
Commander:

Hyalta
Eaudine
President:
General:
Commander:

Kroni
Ghox
President:
General:
Commander:

Dietes
Cienna of the North
President:
General: Kraan Dhurre Mister.Blonde
Commander:

Cienna of the South
President:
General:
Commander:

Taiika
Rynne & Dermott
President:
General:
Commander:

Khung-Laa
Lupinne
President:
General:
Commander:

Gorge of Haldom
Minions of the Abyss
President:
General: Lupinne Nakoda Raphoku Mister White
Commander:

Schyka
Kyrt
President:
General:
Commander:

Yuuritz
Szapielle
President:
General:
Commander:

Ludonia
Myrlle
President:
General:
Commander:

Civilization XVIII (18)
Reij
President: President Gold Mr.Red
General: Mister Red Mr.Red
Commander: Commander White Mr.Red

NOTE: I have decided to remove two Commander positions. There is just not enough people interested to fill 5 spaces in 13 races. I would appreciate it if you 'tried' to choose a position that is already posted, but, like I mentioned before, I don't mind requests.

I plan to be VP/Advisor of Reid. I need to get H.Y.'s opinion on something.

You know my opinion now Mercen. :D

Name: Janus
Age: 16
Birthdate: January 12th
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: Vice President/Advisor
Country/Race: Reid/Econian
Stats: A boy standing at 5'7" and weighing 130 lbs, he has sapphire-blue hair and ice-blue eyes. He isn't very muscled.
Mental Capacity: Possesses a high intellect which is suspiciously uncharacteristic of Econians.
Religious Beliefs: Pretty much the only Econian dismissive of the Guardian/Gods Uldra. In fact, he outright denies this religion. It is his belief that the universe and all that dwell within was created by a solitary being which is omnipresent and all-powerful. The memory of the unusual events surrounding his birth is what strengthens his beliefs.
History: Orphaned while still a baby when his mother died of a mysterious illness, Janus has been in the care of many strange and at times deranged individuals. Janus has learned a lot about faith, philosophy, politics, power, and war from his many foster homes. He is a master strategist and hopes to change the views of his people. In fact, his advice to the President include his personal beliefs.
Weapon of Choice: none . . . that is, he doesn't have a favorite, but he can fight with pretty much any weapon.
Extra Info: Cold and calculating, Janus doesn't have time for relationships or fun. He never smiles, and never laughs (except in insult of someone/thing). He isn't friendly, but respects the President. This makes their relationship the closest to a friendship Janus has ever had. He finds himself to be less rigid in his presence. He also believes that he is affecting the President's own beliefs.

I LOVE it! I would suggest that you take a Vice President/ General role, due to your characters skill with weapons. Also, I need all the spots filled...haha....

:twak:

Here is an update:

Uldra Plains
Uldra
President:
General:
Commander:

Khalyp
Lidenn
President: Slim
General: Waarne Gharough Slim
Commander: Slim

Reid
Econian
President: Heero Yuy Heero Yuy NWZC
General / Vice President: Janus ???? Mercen-X
Commander:

Hyalta
Eaudine
President:
General:
Commander:

Kroni
Ghox
President:
General:
Commander:

Dietes
Cienna of the North
President:
General: Kraan Dhurre Mister.Blonde
Commander:

Cienna of the South
President:
General:
Commander:

Taiika
Rynne & Dermott
President:
General:
Commander:

Khung-Laa
Lupinne
President:
General:
Commander:

Gorge of Haldom
Minions of the Abyss
President:
General: Lupinne Nakoda Raphoku Mister White
Commander:

Schyka
Kyrt
President:
General:
Commander:

Yuuritz
Szapielle
President:
General:
Commander:

Ludonia
Myrlle
President:
General:
Commander:

Civilization XVIII (18)
Reij
President: President Gold Mr.Red
General: Mister Red Mr.Red
Commander: Commander White Mr.Red

NOTE: I have decided to remove two Commander positions. There is just not enough people interested to fill 5 spaces in 13 races. I would appreciate it if you 'tried' to choose a position that is already posted, but, like I mentioned before, I don't mind requests.

ANNOUNCEMENT!!!!!

Sorry guys but I've decided to make yet another change. Each member will control one country. That way I only need 14 people to play in stead of like 42 or however many I was going to have. Sorry Heero Yuy and Mercen-X, but one of you will have to pick a new race.

Umm, I think I'll stick with mine. I did register earlier. :D Sorry Mercen, guess things won't go as planned.

Can I create another character, then? Janus only works as an Econian. I can still operate Janus if allowed or Heero can use him. I don't really want Janus to vanish.

Name: Dygrid Aziiuol
Age: 400
Birthdate: June 18th
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: Grand Ra'arch
Country/Race: Uldriarch/Uldra
Stats: 22'5" and 1000lbs. Dygrid has glowing blue-green eyes and shimmering violet-blue scales that shine a near unseen green in proper lighting. Where normal Uldra have two horns on the back of their neck, Dygrid has five: two normal horns, two smaller horns rowed behind the orginals, and one large horn in the middle facing the opposite direction.
Mental Capacity: Dygrid's intelligence is that which would be expected of a male Uldra his age.
Religious Beliefs: Though his intelligence is unquestionable, his beliefs are somewhat naive. He is not convinced that any religion is right yet doesn't know how to explain existence.
History: Dygrid has always been special in some way ever since he was a young pup. Though he has learned much over the centuries, he has always feared that without unity among the nations, the planet would fall to a pressing evil. His life has not been easy, yet it has not been a burden. One would say, his life was not too horrible.
Weapon of Choice: n/a
Extra Info: Dygrid seeks to open communications to the countries yet is uncertain whether his people are ready for this action.

Perfectly done, I like him even more than your previous character. As for him, I'll leave it up to Heero Yuy as to whether or not he wants to use the character. Just so everyone knows, I am going to need a Character description for each of your characters (General, President, 3 Commanders).

It would be nice to have Janus around. I'll need help with my country. :D A president can't do it on his own you know.

Here is an update:

Uldra Plains
Uldra
Mercen-X
President: Dygrid Aziiuol
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Khalyp
Lidenn
Slim
President: Hewitt Xander >Description yet to be posted
General: Waarne Gharough
Commander 1: Gourd Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 2: Sheed Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 3: Cordienne Groulx >Description yet to be posted

Reid
Econian
Heero Yuy NWZC
President: Heero Yuy
General: Janus ????? >Description yet to be posted
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Hyalta
Eaudine
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Kroni
Ghox
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Dietes
Cienna of the North
Mister.Blonde
President:
General: Kraan Dhurre
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Cienna of the South
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Taiika
Rynne & Dermott
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Khung-Laa
Lupinne
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Gorge of Haldom
Minions of the Abyss
Mr. White
President:
General: Lupinne Nakoda Raphoku
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Schyka
Kyrt
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Yuuritz
Szapielle
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Ludonia
Myrlle
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Civilization XVIII (18)
Reij
Mr.Red
President: President Gold >Description yet to be posted
General: Mister Red
Commander 1: Commander White 1 >Description yet to be posted
Commander 2: Commander White 2 >Description yet to be posted
Commander 3: Commander White 3 >Description yet to be posted

NOTE: I have decided to revert to three Commander positions. Considering we now only need one person per race.

Looks huge! anyways, here's my info:

Name:Reil Atama
Age: Undefined (has been dead for centuries)
Sex: Undead Male
Height: 6'8"
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: Dark Knight, Leader of the Einherjar. (Commander 1)
Country/Race: The Abyss, Dark Minions
Physical Characteristics: A tall and moderately built undead 'human'. Wears dark armour, skulls etc.
Mental Capacity: For an undead, very inteliigent and intellectual.
Religious Beliefs: Worships the Norse Warlord Odin. He believes that he is a decendant of Odin and was sent to protect Odin's Army, the Einherjar.
Interaction with Others: Only interacts with other minions and evil demons. Keeps in almost constant contact with his 'boss'
History: A once proud Paladin whom fell to his death, and was ressurected by a soul. The price for his ressurection was his faith in the unholy and loyalty to the Darkside.
Weapons of Choice: One 'DeathScythe' for collecting souls of the living to be ressurected for his Army. 2 long Wakazashi's for field battles.

This character was developed quite well. I would like to ask for a couple certain details however. They are small but significant.

1) He should probablt be Econian as an Econian has the exact characteristics as a human. Except they are called Econians.

2) What crime did he commit to be exiled to the Gorge of Haldom?


NOTE: You get to control the whole race, so the game seems much larger than it is.

Thanks Slim, but Reil ikes to keep it to his own smaller 'Army'. Remember i mentioned he believes he was sent as Odin's decendant to lead his Army. Reil cares little more for others.
As for original race, i would say yes to Econian, but he has been dead for centuries, so he is somewhat different to the Econcians of today....(apart from being dead).

Reil Atama
Extra Info:
Reil was executed by his own king. Idols of Dark Worship were found in his room at the old kingdom's barracks. Since he was a holy Paladin, this behaviour was most inappropriate, and was so regarded as treason againt his own King. Ergo, Reil was hung and burnt for his sins.

I want to be the Uldra general,please.I'll post my profile later because I need to go through post#1.

Through post #1? Why? Other than your name having Draco in it, I'm not sure why you want to be an Uldra General anyway. I don't really consider them to be a violent people. Meh. The problem is that Slim wants all of the races to at least have a president and that can't happen if so many people file into the same race . . . but if you think you can do both . . . be my guest.

i just found a pic on google which shows a better description of Reil

Reil Atama (http://shuppo.free.fr/drawings/dark-knight.jpg)

Sorry guys, I think many of you may misunderstand. Each member controls their own race. Therefore Shadow Bahamut controls all of the Minions of the Abyss and must create a character description for a President, a General, and 3 Commanders. Mercen-X is already in control of the Uldra, so Omnislasher would need to pick another race (sorry). I might recommend being the Ghox or Lupinne, as they are both animal powerhouses. Of course, they are much more violent than the Uldra.

here's my 're-description' as someone already 'took' may race:

Name: Reil Atama
Age: Unknown
Sex: Male
Height: 6'8"
positron: Dark Knight, Leader of the Einherjar. (Commander 1)
Country/Race: Hyalta/Eaudine
Physical Characteristics: A tall and moderately built Eaudian. Wears dark armour, skulls etc.
Mental Capacity: For an Eaudian, very inteliigent and intellectual.
Religious Beliefs: Worships the Norse Warlord Odin. He believes that he is a decendant of Odin and was sent to protect Odin's Army, the Einherjar. The worship of Nylei by the rest of his race doesn't concern him.
Interaction with Others: Only interacts with other Eaudians & seemingly himself at times. Keeps in almost constant contact with his 'boss.'
History: Born an Econian, Reil has now adapted to sea life. A once proud Paladin who was in possesion of Idols of dark worship and was sentenced to death by his king for treason against his country. He was pushed to his 'obvious' death, but was rescued by an Eaudian. The price for his rescue was his faith in the Eaudian God Nylei and loyalty to the people of Hyalta, this meant that he had to live off his debt in Hyalta. He never did acquire a liking for Nylei, and is said to still worship the dark lord. However, he pledges allegiance to the King of Hyalta for his hospitality.
Weapons of Choice: One 'Death Scythe' which is said to collect souls for his dark rituals. 2 long Wakazashi's for field battles.
Extra Info: Reil was sentenced to death by his own king. Idols of Dark Worship were found in his room at the old kingdom's barracks. Since he was a holy Paladin, this behaviour was most inappropriate, and was so regarded as treason againt his own King. Ergo, Reil was pushed into the sea for his sins.

Name: Fareth Erakm
Age: 370
Birthdate: July 4th
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: Gren'archael
Country/Race: Uldriarch/Uldra
Stats: 16'5" and 610lbs. Fareth has orange eyes and bronzed-gold scales that shine only in sunlight. Where normal Uldra have two horns, Fareth has one large horn in the middle of the back of her neck facing the opposite direction of what would be normal horns. Her wingspan is 47' feet in length.
Mental Capacity: Fareth's intelligence is well above average for a female of her species.
Religious Beliefs: Believes as all Uldra commonly believe. However, unlike the peace-loving inhabitants of her country, she believes that is the destiny of the Uldra to conquer and rule all.
History: The general of the Uldra armies, Gren'archael Fareth has always been different from other Uldra (especially females) ever since she was a young pup. Though she was raised in the company of extremely adventurous Uldra, she was always more interested in learning. Her life has been free of burden and it is uncertain where she obtained her belief that the Uldra are Desh Su (ordained supreme: fated conquerers). Her unusual horn and slightly diminutive size had served as a detriment to her political climb. It is a wonder she became the Gren'archael at all.
Weapon of Choice: Her armies . . .
Extra Info: Fareth is very interested in a rising warrior (term used lightly) named zJa'tal, whom she recently promoted to Kron'archael f'Rin Dima (commander of the 3rd army).

You mention that Fareth is 21'5" AND you say that she is small. I metioned that the average Uldra height is 19 feet. That would make her just over average. Other than that it is an excellent character description. I like how you are making up a language for your culture. Good work!

Fixed it.

Name: zJa'tal Uun'diel
Age: 250
Birthdate: January 13th
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: Kron'archael f'Rin Dima
Country/Race: Uldriarch/Uldra
Stats: 21'5" and 908lbs. zJa'tal has shimmering blue-red eyes and chrome-silver scales that shine even in the least available light.
Mental Capacity: zJa'tal's not altogether bright when compared to most males his age. He is, however, a marvel tactician.
Religious Beliefs: Believes as all Uldra commonly believe.
History: The commander of the 3rd army of Uldriarch, Kron'archael zJa'tal has lead a relatively normal life. Aside from an emphasized attachment to others and an oversized vigor in battle, his personality is pretty average. zJa'tal was raised as many in his bloodline have been: trained, taught, and shaped into a warrior. Although it is the desire of all Uldra to remain isolated and live peacefully in their quiet and tragedy-free country, it is still required that certain bloodlines retain their battle-edge. There are many reasons for this and zJa'tal knows them all and questions none.
Weapon of Choice: Tooth-to-Claw melee
Extra Info: zJa'tal secretly likes to make others laugh. This is a most unusual personality trait for a warrior.

Name: Jagend Dein'rael
Age: 380
Birthdate: December 31st
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: Kron'archael f'Raidt Dima
Country/Race: Uldriarch/Uldra
Stats: 22'5" and 980lbs. Jagend has glowing red eyes and black scales that never shine in any light.
Mental Capacity: Jagend's intelligence surpasses that of the oldest known Ra'sirfen, the wizard Uldima.
Religious Beliefs: Believes as all Uldra commonly believe.
History: The commander of the 2nd army of Uldriarch, Jagend has lead a privileged life. His intellect has long since corrupted him and now he seeks to conquer his people.
Weapon of Choice: Tooth-to-Claw melee

Name: Ma'katar Dein
Age: 270
Birthdate: March 14th
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: Kron'archael f'Anden Dima
Country/Race: Uldriarch/Uldra
Stats: 21'5" and 908lbs. Ma'katar has blue-green eyes and emerald-green scales that shine in sufficient light.
Mental Capacity: Ma'katar is pretty smart for his age. He knows more than he should.
Religious Beliefs: Believes as all Uldra commonly believe.
History: The commander of the 1st army of Uldriarch, Ma'katar's life is nothing of particular interest. He rushed the ranks of the army to become sup'rima kron'archael. He was the previous Gren'archael before some unknown incident resulted in him being demoted and replaced by Fareth Erakm.
Weapon of Choice: Tooth-to-Claw melee
Extra Info: Ma'katar is close friends with the new Kron'archael, young zJa'tal Uun'diel. He is suspicious of both the Gren'archael and Jagend Dein'rael.

Here is an update:

Uldra Plains
Uldra
Mercen-X
President: Dygrid Aziiuol
General: Fareth Erakm
Commander 1: Ma'katar Dein
Commander 2: Jagend Dein'rael
Commander 3: zJa'tal Uun'diel

Khalyp
Lidenn
Slim
President: Hewitt Xander >Description yet to be posted
General: Waarne Gharough
Commander 1: Gourd Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 2: Sheed Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 3: Cordienne Groulx

Reid
Econian
Heero Yuy NWZC
President: Heero Yuy
General: Janus ????? >Description yet to be posted
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Hyalta
Eaudine
Shadow Bahamut
President:
General:
Commander 1: Reil Atama
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Kroni
Ghox
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Dietes
Cienna of the North
Mister.Blonde
President:
General: Kraan Dhurre
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Cienna of the South
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Taiika
Rynne & Dermott
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Khung-Laa
Lupinne
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Gorge of Haldom
Minions of the Abyss
Mr. White
President:
General: Lupinne Nakoda Raphoku
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Schyka
Kyrt
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Yuuritz
Szapielle
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Ludonia
Myrlle
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Civilization XVIII (18)
Reij
Mr.Red
President: President Gold >Description yet to be posted
General: Mister Red
Commander 1: Commander White 1 >Description yet to be posted
Commander 2: Commander White 2 >Description yet to be posted
Commander 3: Commander White 3 >Description yet to be posted

Here is my 3rd Commander.....

Name: Cordienne Groulx
Age: 21
Sex: Male
Weight: 170 lbs
Height: 5’5”
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: 3rd Commander
Country/Race: Khalyp/Lidenn
Physical Characteristics: Dark brown hair & ice blue eyes. Moderately Built, blue skin, claws for fingernails on five fingers. Cordienne is a short man with a strong build. He wields a large scimitar and wears a red bandanna on his forehead, shrouding his eyes in shadow beneath it. His eyes have a near white glow in faint light. He wears metal guards over his wide shoulders and Greaves over his legs. He wears long brown shorts that hang over the tops of his greaves and a black muscle shirt over his torso.
Mental Capacity: He is quite a smart man though he hides it somewhat. He is mischievous and cunning, and he knows how to twist things for his benefit.
Religious Beliefs: He believes religion to be a joke. After all, no intervening force has ever helped him through his difficult life.
Interaction with Others: Oddly enough, the only emotion he has ever shown is happiness: loving every minute of life outside of battle. Telling jokes and goofing around; everyone around him loves his personable nature.
History: When Cordienne was thirteen years old, he woke to find his abusive father and his older brother, Waarne were gone. His father had brutalized their youngest brother, Heddem, ten years old, to death. This drove him into a rampage killing hundreds of people with his father's steel scimitar until he was eventually banished from Khalyp. In a desperate attempt to find a home he began to scale the country. He found more than he'd hoped for. News had spread of his power: he was almost unstoppable. He was immediately enlisted in the army at Northern Dietes which at the time was ruled by a power-hungry King. At age seventeen, he finished his training and developed a strong bond with the current general. Three years past and he had gained much respect from the people of his new home, when the previous general passed away. Cordienne rose in his place. He served as general for but nearly a year before he finally met again with Waarne. The two brawled and Waarne beat some sense into him. He had become nothing but a bringer of death and destruction. Waarne, who had since been promoted to general, was able to pull some strings to allow Cordienne back into the country as long as he worked to improve his behavior. Waarne made him a Commander as he had none currently; he was understandably getting tired from all the work and it was convenient to keep an eye on Cordienne. He is developing fast and travels with Waarne to keep from losing his grip. They are both looking for their bastard father, and hope, together, to overpower and destroy him in vengeance.
Weapon of Choice: A steel Scimitar he stole from his father. His father had preferred axes, but he kept the Scimitar because it had been passed down through the family. The handle had been ordained with the blood-red scales of the Gythmar, a giant snake, said to be a beast of myth, which has long been extinct. He wants to kill his father with the family sword to sever its ties to him.
Extra Info: He goes by the moniker, "Beast," for two reasons. He is physically much smaller than an average person and likes the pun the name attributes to him. He also hates the female sounding name given to him.
Unlike his brother Waarne, Cordienne is not at all concerned with stalling the violence. He behaves as though war and death were a game. His fighting style infuriates Waarne, but he understands Cordienne. He is not to blame. He was trained for years into the killer he is, however, he has made incredible progress, and becomes more compassionate, if not merciful, with each passing day.
Waarne and Cordienne were not of the same mothers.
Waarne was born of a woman named Rhet Urylle, who was killed by his father when Waarne was only 7 years old. He was unable to do anything about it at the time, and he feared his father, so he lived with him.
Cordienne's mother was named Sanna Groulx. He despised his father and decided to take his mothers name.
Sometimes he is sent to cover for Waarne, as he too is a skilled warrior.

Name: Shun Epee “President Gold”

Age: 52
Sex: Male
Height: 7'1
Weight: 220 lbs
Birth date: March 17th
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: President
Country/Race: Civilization XVIII

PC: He is one of the more elderly of the Civ XVIII. He has more of a fragile body but is a great and experienced fighter. When he was younger, he was fit with big muscles due to strenuous training. He’s still bulky but as he grows older he seems to be more brittle and weak. Don't let his behavior fool you. He has spiky grey hair and usually resides in a red-striped gold jumpsuit. His robotic armor consists of gold plating with one oversized arm. Guess what it’s used for. His has a storm cannon where the other arm should be that can convert into an energy sword when needed.

MC: Shun is of average intelligence but on the battle field is possibly one of the smartest.

RBs: No God ever existed and life is full of unexpected surprises.

Interaction with Others: The President is a really nice guy but is always ready to lash out at someone and is always cautious of new people. He is very protective of his race and always wants what’s best for them even if it means having to fight friends.

History: Growing up, Shun was always interested in becoming President. He successfully gained that rank in his first electoral run due to years of study and practice. The other contenders were close friends of his and still respected him even when he became President. Although a few people would rather have a different President, no one can resist liking Shun, ever since he proved himself by climbing the great mountain of Reij; it was a long trek but he wanted to prove himself by climbing this mountain with nothing but his jumpsuit. It took him 11 days but he made it up the mountain where a flag is now hoisted high for all to see. After that he needed to be hospitalized in critical care for the next week but he got the respect he deserved. He also found Mr. Red one day when he was a kid and raised him the way he always wanted to raise a child: teaching them to fight wars and making a general of them when they became old enough.

Weapon of Choice: Although his spiky oversized arm is useful, it isn't half as good as his storm cannon/sword. It comes in handy in battles of close range and long range for it is interchangeable. The cannon part fires powerful plasma lasers while his sword can cut through enemies like a knife through butter.

Extra Info: He really enjoys being president and wants to remain a leader until his death. His swift movement and great strength make him a great asset to any battalion team. He does not wish to be protected or to sacrifice any one of his men but to treat them as individuals and go into war together

Like you say yourself there are small things that need to be changed. I can help you out with that as soon as you would like, or you can feel free to edit it yourself. You call, make it a good one. Haha....... Otherwise APPROVED!

EDITED

okay now for my commanders

Name: Stath Regora
Age:40
Sex:Male
Height:6'6
Weight:280
Birthdate:August 15th
Postion:Commander
Country/Race: Civ. XVII

PC:Stath is built. although many Civ XVII people are fragile he spent his life training so that he could be irregular and now he is. his White suit of armor is meant for defensive purposes and is by far the strongest armour of all Civ.XVII. he resides in a bulky armour.

MC:let's face is, Stath is pretty much dumb, he spent too much of his life working out and training for heavy wepons in combat to have gone to school or learn. he knows most basics of life and the battlefront, but isn't exactly the brightest of the bunch.

Rbs: although no God exists Statha believes ancient Historians of war will give luck in battle to those who do their best and are deserving.

Interaction with others: Stath is generally friendly and loving but can be a real brute if things arn't going great for him.

History:Stath grew up in a small family he was an only child and often spent his time on his own. His Parents useually respected everything he did even not attending school. after they died Stath dedicated his life to being strong, he wanted to join the army because he thought he might be needed and he became a great asset to the team. he fights for his parents everyday.

Weapon of choice: AXE-this axe was carved by his parents and passed down to him before they passed away. hes used it in war and still uses it today. it has a few nicks here and there but other then that it is in good condition for swinging and choping.

Extra info: Stath is the basic friendly giant. realy strong and somewhat dumb.







Name: Mai Yari
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Height: 5'4
Weight: 110
Birthdate: May 3rd
Postion:Commander
Country/Race: Civ. XVII

PC: Mai is slim and flexible, she is a great assasin, and likes to reside in a thin armour making her able to move around alot more but also making her receive damage.

MC:she is average

Rbs:she believes what Reji believe in.

Interaction with others: she's kinda and friendly and can easily attract pepople with her good looks and great personality. but she does not let love get in the way of the war.

History:as a child Mai was rambunctious and loved to run around. growing up she became more serious about hertalents of felxibility and energy and joined the army tp fight for her country.

Weapon of choice: duel daggers-two sleak medium sized daggers meant for slicing rather then stabbing they are very light and easy to use.

Extra info: Mai is loved greatly by her companions but she is serious about battle and does not let people get in the way of it.







Name: Marcus o'chiden
Age: 57
Sex: male
Height: 5'1
Weight: 130
Birthdate: --- ( I'll get back to ya'll on this one )
Postion:Commander
Country/Race: Civ. XVII

PC: Marcus if pretty fragile as he is very old, he stays hunched most of the time with a metal custom made cane to help him walk better. he ussually resides in his body of armor unless indoors because he finds his skills on the battlefield to be mediocore when out of his armor.

MC:Marcus is by far smartest of all Reij people.

Rbs: Marcu believes in many things since he knows alot, he believes what Reij belive in but he also has some faith in the gods of battle but still religion is one thing that Marcus is slightly confused about.

Interaction with others: spending most of his life reading he avoided society entirly but when he finished he presented himself and everyone respected him because of his inteligence. he get's along well with Reij. people from other continents he is open minded and will not object to their beliefs or what they have to say.

History: As Marcus was growing up he was always a boy with many questions, he stayed inside most of his life, was well manord and well respected, he diodn't bother going to schol but instead read books and taught himself, he did I fine job too, spending omost of his life rejecting people and avoiding society might not have been too good but he learned alot and became the smartest Reij to live, when he turned 40 the army wanted to have him join because he could be a great asset with intelligence on the battlefield, he accepted and since thewn has been practicing with weapons ( not really expecting to use them much ) and being a tactition for the Reij Army

Weapon of choice: Cane Staff- a custom made metal cane used for blunt attacks, and a sleak steel edge for slicing style combat, at the tip of the cane is an insignia with an orb inside the orb is used to created shots of energy meant for pushing away enemies, this weapon can be charged and different beams of energy can be shot from the staff.

Extra info:Marcus is the smartest Reij, well respected, old and fragile,...but that's pretty much all you'd need to know about him

after they died Brudda dedicated his life to being strong, he wanted to join the army because he thought he might be needed and he became a great asset to the team.

You might want to edit that....


Rbs:she believes what Reji believe in.


I noticed this a couple times and wanted to mention that it is Reij not Reji, anyway, yeah, she could be a bit longer, otherwise, good character development. *APPROVED*

Can i still enter?there are 4 races left right...

Is this ever going to start? Or was it cancelled?

If the last four races are filled out by a few more players, then the RP will start.

By the way, Slim
Reid
Econian
Heero Yuy NWZC
General: Janus ????? >Description yet to be posted

I think H-boy Yuy is going with the description I wrote which means it has been posted and Janus has no last name (migrant orphan).

I´ll choose a race then.

Sorry, I have been slighly inactive. Yeah, feel free to join. ok, thanks Mercen-X. i'll leave the last name out.

Book me in for Rhyne and Dermott then please.

Rynne.

You should probably keep in mind that Slim won't accept the misspellings of proper names like those of his planets or even your own characters. From the time you input the spelling in your profile, you'd better spell those names the same from that time on.

Good call. Mercen-X is right. The first few times I'll correct you, after that I'd expect you to know it. Anyway, no problem, Rynne & Dermott it is.

Now, if we could only get that profile. :)

Indeed, that would be very highly appreciated.

Can i still join as a kroni?

Name: Kuroshima Yukosa
Age: 18
Sex: male
Height: "7'5 on hind legs.
Weight: 450 lbs.
Birthdate: november 12th.
Position (President/General/Commander, etc.): General
Country/Race: Kroni/Ghox
Physical Characteristics: Looks at lot bigger then most Kronis. Not very agile or fast but is very strong.
Mental Capacity: Not very intelligent but still has some smarts.
Religious Beliefs: None. Belives if your dead you just die nothing else.
Interaction with Others: Doesn't like to talk to others but will fight alongside them.
History: No-one knows except him and he won't tell anyone.
Weapon of Choice: A Spear. The pole of the spear is made form the bones of his ancestors.
Extra Info: Goes by Tank.

Ok by the end of the day i´ll create a profile...

Can i still join as a kroni?

Name: Kuroshima Yukosa
Age: 18
Sex: male
Height: "7'5 on hind legs.
Weight: 450 lbs.
Birthdate: november 12th.
Position (President/General/Commander, etc.): General
Country/Race: Kroni/Ghox
Physical Characteristics: Looks at lot bigger then most Kronis. Not very agile or fast but is very strong.
Mental Capacity: Not very intelligent but still has some smarts.
Religious Beliefs: None. Belives if your dead you just die nothing else.
Interaction with Others: Doesn't like to talk to others but will fight alongside them.
History: No-one knows except him and he won't tell anyone.
Weapon of Choice: A Spear. The pole of the spear is made form the bones of his ancestors.
Extra Info: Goes by Tank.

Excellent profile. I just need you to give me a history of his through PM. I will keep it discreet, except it is information that I personally require.

Indeed, otherwise yours would be classified as a "mysterious character" which is "illegal" according to EOFF standards. Mysterious characters allow for too much modification and thus you can make up any amount of crap you want to make your character perfect for any situation which is why it isn't allowed.

This has been yet another annoying lecture from the merciless Mercen-X.

Name: Hyoda Raku
Age: 23
Sex: Male
Height: 6"0
Weight: 63kg
Birthdate: November 26th
Position (President/General/Commander, etc.): Commander
Country/Race: Khung-Laa/ Lupinne
Physical Characteristics: He's tall with a well-built body, he has good uper-body strengh but his powerful hind legs give him an edge when it comes to speed.
Mental Capacity: He is intelligent compared to some of the other races as is all of his species but compared to others of his kind he rank's as an average in mental capacity.
Religious Beliefs: He belives that aslong as Mordon watched over you, you will never die.
Interaction with Others: Will fight along side with his comrades and will protect them to the best of his ability. He would rather die than fight along any other race.
History: Born and raised in the normal fashion of his kind he always acceled at combat. His speed singeled him out however and he was looked up to be an exellent warrior among his class-men.
Weapon of Choice: Spear
Extra Info: None

Excellent entry. *Accepted* But what of Jimmy Dark Aeons Slayer? Sorry, not a personal question Advent....

Sorry for taking so long...i´ll create both the president and the general

Name: Platos Tundra
Age: 285 (40 in human years)
Sex: Male
Weight:130 pounds
Height: 5 foot 11 (counting with head)
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: President
Country/Race:Taiika/Rynne
Physical Characteristics: His eye orbs are completely black,his skin is very pale, he doens´t have any hair, wears a grey robe with silver stripes that cover his entire body, just like any normal Rynne he appears like a ghost.
Mental Capacity: Extremely intelligent
Religious Beliefs:He believes only in the peoples voice
Interaction with Others: Sociable, although he is very suspicious about other races intentions
History: Platos was born in an aristocratic familie, he was raised to be a diplomat and helped the Rynne to increase their bond with the Dermott, he was one of the first ambassadors to travel to Dermott territory, being extremely popular amongst them, this is the reason why he achieved the rank of president at only the age of 274.
Weapon of Choice: His weapon is his brain and his telephatic powers
Extra Info: He likes to drink tea

Name: Marr Blez
Age: 31( same as humans)
Sex: Male
Weight: 346 pounds
Height: 6 foot 8 tall
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: General
Country/Race: Taiika/Dermott(Tyne)
Physical Characteristics: Just like any other Tyne, Marr looks like a giant eagle, his eyes are red and his body is covered with brown feathers.
Mental capacity: His the only Dermott who can rival the Rynne in terms of intelligence.
Religious beliefs: He beliefs in himself
Intereaction with others: Trusts very few people, but as a lot of respect and admiration to Platos Tundra.
History: He was an opposer to the Rynne domination and thought that they were destroying the fighting spirit of the Dermott, when we was 21 he met with Platos Tundra who made him realize that the Rynne and Dermott should work togther for the future of Taiika, he was later nominated general by Platos a few months after he acheived presidence. The Rynne respect him and look at him as an equal.
Weapon of Choice: Crystal Claws
Extra info: He posseses extreme accuracy in battle

Excellent characters. Just for the other players sake, (please don't take this offensively), could you first write this in word to correct spelling errors? I can see that you are a very good writer, the only problem is the spelling. Thanks.

Here is an update:

Uldra Plains
Uldra
Mercen-X
President: Dygrid Aziiuol
General: Fareth Erakm
Commander 1: Ma'katar Dein
Commander 2: Jagend Dein'rael
Commander 3: zJa'tal Uun'diel

Khalyp
Lidenn
Slim
President: Hewitt Xander >Description yet to be posted
General: Waarne Gharough
Commander 1: Gourd Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 2: Sheed Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 3: Cordienne Groulx

Reid
Econian
Heero Yuy NWZC
President: Heero Yuy
General: Janus ????? >Description yet to be posted
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Hyalta
Eaudine
Shadow Bahamut
President:
General:
Commander 1: Reil Atama
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Kroni
Ghox
Kuroshima
President:
General: Kuroshima Yukoza
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Dietes
Cienna of the North
Mister.Blonde
President:
General: Kraan Dhurre
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Cienna of the South
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Taiika
Rynne & Dermott
Jimmy Dark Aeons Slayer
President: Platos Tundra
General: Marr Blezz
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Khung-Laa
Lupinne
AdVent
President:
General:
Commander 1: Hyoda Raku
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Gorge of Haldom
Minions of the Abyss
Mr. White
President:
General: Lupinne Nakoda Raphoku
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Schyka
Kyrt
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Yuuritz
Szapielle
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Ludonia
Myrlle
President:
General:
Commander 1:
Commander 2:
Commander 3:

Civilization XVIII (18)
Reij
Mr.Red
President: President Gold (Shun Epee)
General: Mister Red (*I would like a monicker for Mister Red aswell please)
Commander 1: Commander White 1 (Stath Regora)
Commander 2: Commander White 2 (Mai Yari)
Commander 3: Commander White 3 >Description yet to be posted

Sorry i had to hurry up i think the most important are corrected...

I added a last name for Hyoda.

K, thanks all.

So do you think we can start soon?This RP reminds me of a game called Master of Orion.

Here is an update:

Uldra Plains
Uldra
Mercen-X
President: Dygrid Aziiuol
General: Fareth Erakm
Commander 1: Ma'katar Dein
Commander 2: Jagend Dein'rael
Commander 3: zJa'tal Uun'diel

Khalyp
Lidenn
Slim
President: Hewitt Xander >Description yet to be posted:moomba:
General: Waarne Gharough
Commander 1: Gourd Garde >Description yet to be posted:moomba:
Commander 2: Sheed Garde >Description yet to be posted:moomba:
Commander 3: Cordienne Groulx

Reid
Econian
Heero Yuy NWZC
President: Heero Yuy
General: Janus
Commander 1::moomba:
Commander 2: :moomba:
Commander 3: :moomba:

Hyalta
Eaudine
Shadow Bahamut
President::moomba:
General: :moomba:
Commander 1: Reil Atama
Commander 2: :moomba:
Commander 3: :moomba:

Kroni
Ghox
Kuroshima
President: :moomba:
General: Kuroshima Yukoza
Commander 1::moomba:
Commander 2: :moomba:
Commander 3: :moomba:

Dietes
Cienna of the North
Mister.Blonde
President: :moomba:
General: Kraan Dhurre
Commander 1::moomba:
Commander 2: :moomba:
Commander 3: :moomba:

Taiika
Rynne & Dermott
Jimmy Dark Aeons Slayer
President: Platos Tundra
General: Marr Blezz
Commander 1::moomba:
Commander 2: :moomba:
Commander 3: :moomba:

Khung-Laa
Lupinne
AdVent
President: :moomba:
General::moomba:
Commander 1: Hyoda Raku
Commander 2: :moomba:
Commander 3: :moomba:

Gorge of Haldom
Minions of the Abyss
Mr. White
President: :moomba:
General: Lupinne Nakoda Raphoku
Commander 1::moomba:
Commander 2: :moomba:
Commander 3: :moomba:

Civilization XVIII (18)
Reij
Mr.Red
President: President Gold (Shun Epee)
General: Mister Red (*I would like a monicker for Mister Red as well please):moomba:
Commander 1: Commander White 1 (Stath Regora)
Commander 2: Commander White 2 (Mai Yari)
Commander 3: Commander White 3 >Description yet to be posted:moomba:


To Jimmy: There are many 'players' who still need to complete descriptions for Presidents, Generals, AND Commanders. We can't start until that is complete.

To Slim: We have Ten players. I actually think it's miraculous we have this many volunteers. I fear that if we try to fill the last roles some players may give up before the RP begins. I think that as soon as the current players finish their remaining profiles, we should get started.

I will create my commanders tomorrow...

And i think that everyone who decided to join should be PM to remind them.
Because a lot of people fill the character cheat and then never post again...

Trust me, I've sent many PMs in the past, but all I ever get is empty promises. I would ask for your help, Mercen-X, to give reminders, if the request is not too bold.....

Anyway, if we do not have filled positions by the time everyone is done their profiles, I will control the remaining races and still leave them open to new entrants. Sounds like we are almost ready to start!

So... When is this going to get going?

Well, as soon as everyone finishes posting their characters. You, for instance, have 4 more characters to create. We would all like to get those ASAP please, because we really wish to begin.

Name: Kent Orno
Age: 28
Sex: male
Height: "6'3 on hind legs.
Weight: 259 lbs.
Birthdate: October 1st
Position (President/General/Commander, etc.): President
Country/Race: Kroni/Ghox
Physical Characteristics: Looks small for a Kroni but packs a punhc in a fight.
Mental Capacity: Smarter then most of the other Kroni's but not the smartest.
Religious Beliefs: None. Belives if your dead you just die nothing else.
Interaction with Others: Doesn't like to talk to others but will fight alongside them.
History: Lived a simple life due to his Father being president before him. When his father was assainated over come by grief Kent ran for president and everyon fekt sorry for him and decided to let him win. and now looks around to expand the land of the Kroni's.
Weapon of Choice: Long Sword.
Extra Info:Goes by Rhino.

Cool, good profile.

sorry guys but i wont be able to take part, sorry....

Here is my first commander

Name: Rakk Grivos
Age: 34 ( same as humans)
Sex: Male
Weight: 516 pounds
Height: 7foot1 tall
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: 1st Commander
Country/Race: Taiika/Dermott(Berla)
Physical Characteristics: Just like any other Berla, Rakk looks like a grizzly bear, his eyes are yellow and his body is very muscular
Mental capacity: He as good senses and is considered to be a good thinker for his kind.
Religious beliefs: He sees the Taiika as his superior but doens´t believe that they are his gods.
Intereaction with others: Despite his imposing looks he is very sociable even towards other races
History: Rakk lost both of his parents at the tender age of 6 he then served as a waiter for a Taiikan lord, one day his master was atacked by a bunch of Kung-Laa and got killed, but Rakk was able to protect his new home using only his giant bear fists to destroy the intruders, it was at this moment that the Taiikan realized that he was to good to just serve as a regular waiter and made him join the army, he quickly grew in the army ranks and became the top commander of the Rynne and Dermott.
Weapon of Choice: Kaiser Knuckles
Extra info: Fights only when provoked, an extremely calm individual.

sorry guys but i wont be able to take part, sorry....
Apparently, the same is true for Shadow Bahamut.

And Heero Yuy, and Mister White, and Mister Blonde. I know the last two though , sO i will personally talk to them.

Okay, everyone who is still playing answer me right now with a reply to ensure that you are devoted. I will create a story involving only our races so we can start the RP. I'm sick and tired of waiting. It has been months. So just let me know.

Just don't expect too much. I'll be taking part in several others as well.
After all, this did take a while.

I'm in.
Edit:
Name: Amelia langcaster
Age: 18
Sex: Female
Height: "6'6 on hind legs.
Weight: 300 lbs.
Birthdate: Januray 2nd.
Position (President/General/Commander, etc.): Commander
Country/Race: Kroni/Ghox
Physical Characteristics: One of the weakest kroni's you'll evermeet.
Mental Capacity: Smarter then every other single kroni except for her sister.
Religious Beliefs: Believes that once you die you're bones go back into the sea and you become reborn as a new Kroni.
Interaction with Others: Very Social.
History: Lived most of her life studing at home with her sister. when she turned 16 she's was sent into the Kroni army. She didn't do much but had excellent aim due to mathematics.
Weapon of Choice: Bow and arrow
Extra Info: None.

Here are my last two commanders:

Name: Torax Gryso
Age: 45 (same as humans)
Sex: Male
Weight: 710 pounds
Height: 7foot 4 tall
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: 2nd Commander
Country/Race: Taiika/Dermott(Lessa)
Physical Characteristics: Torax posseses strong green skin like a crocodile, he is a giant, and can torn apart all of his opponents by using his deadly crocodile teeth or his long tail
Mental capacity: He is considered an expert fighter and moderately bright.
Religious beliefs: He believes in Guntar the Lessa god who stood alone against an entire army of Kung-Laa
Intereaction with others: He interacts mainly with other Dermott.
History: Torax was the son of the leader of the Lessa, his father king Rogax was killed during an invasion of the Kung-Laa and Torax was forced to take over at the age of 15, he soon understood that he had to ally his nation to the other Dermott to fight the increasing threat of the Kung-Laa and due to his incredible streght and leadership qualities he became a commander of the Taiikan people.
Weapon of Choice: Giant Axe
Extra info: His red eyes can intimidate his enemies.

Name: Garyus Slick
Age: 27 (same as humans)
Sex: Male
Weight: 270 pounds
Height: 6foot 1 tall
:bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou::bou: 3rd commander
Country/Race:Taiika/Dermott (Berla)
Physical Characteristics: Garyus is relatevely small when compared to other Berla he looks like a small polar bear but still as a well built body.
Mental capacitie: What he lacks in size he compesates in brain, meaning he is very smart.
Religious beliefs: he does not believe in gods or any other type of mystifications.
Intereaction with others: He is friendly to the other Dermott and to the Rynne.
History: Garyus was mocked by the other Berla when he was younger for being small, but one day he participated in a fighting tournament which he won and gained a lot of respect. At the age of 20 he was appointed as a commander of the Taiikan force.
Weapon of choice: Two beam rifles and a electric staff.
Extra info: He likes to help the needed and is considered an elite sharpshooter.

That´s all for my main players:)

alright I've finished all 3 comanders my presiodent and my general, (my third commander is on page 3 with the other two sorry for the inconvience) I'm ready to begin, as long as a have your aproval, I know there is some things I might still have to fix but if I've forgotten anything just tell me and I'll get it fixed.

Seeing as we have 5 dedicated players still interested, I think we are ready to start. I just need to post my remaining profiles and we're ready to go.... I think.

EDIT: Kuroshima also needs to post his last 2 Commanders.

Here's an update.....

Uldra Plains
Uldra
Mercen-X
President: Dygrid Aziiuol (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1696740&postcount=46)
General: Fareth Erakm (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1710313&postcount=58)
Commander 1: Ma'katar Dein (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1715144&postcount=60)
Commander 2: Jagend Dein'rael (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1715144&postcount=60)
Commander 3: zJa'tal Uun'diel (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1715144&postcount=60)

Khalyp
Lidenn
Slim
President: Hewitt Xander >Description yet to be posted
General: Waarne Gharough (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1666019&postcount=25)
Commander 1: Gourd Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 2: Sheed Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 3: Cordienne Groulx (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1715492&postcount=62)

Kroni
Ghox
Kuroshima
President: Kent Orno (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1786052&postcount=92)
General: Kuroshima Yukoza (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1776535&postcount=74)
Commander 1: Amelia Langcaster (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1817637&postcount=99)
Commander 2: >description yet to be posted.
Commander 3: >description yet to be posted.

Taiika
Rynne & Dermott
Jimmy Dark Aeons Slayer
President: Platos Tundra (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1783186&postcount=80)
General: Marr Blezz (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1783186&postcount=80)
Commander 1: Rakk Grivos (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1790337&postcount=95)
Commander 2: Torax Gryso (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1832582&postcount=100)
Commander 3: Garyus Slick (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1832582&postcount=100)


Civilization XVIII (18)
Reij
Mr.Red
President: President Gold (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1726991&postcount=63) (Shun Epee)
General: General Red (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1676725&postcount=34) (-unknown-)
Commander 1: Commander White 1 (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1728671&postcount=65) (Stath Regora)
Commander 2: Commander White 2 (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1728671&postcount=65) (Mai Yari)
Commander 3: Commander White 3 (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1728671&postcount=65) (Marcus O'Chiden)

I´m ready as i´ll ever be to start this.:D

Seeing as we have 5 dedicated players still interested, I think we are ready to start.

Khalyp
Lidenn
Slim
President: Hewitt Xander >Description yet to be posted
General: Waarne Gharough (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1666019&postcount=25)
Commander 1: Gourd Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 2: Sheed Garde >Description yet to be posted
Commander 3: Cordienne Groulx (http://forums.eyesonff.com/showpost.php?p=1715492&postcount=62)Is that right? You haven't posted descriptions for three of your characters?