[RP] The Wrath of Bahamut

For 100 years, Flyssa has been safe from the legendary Eidolon Bahamut, thanks to the MageKnight Legolas Perkin. But, now someone has summoned it, and you have been chosen by the King of Flyssa.

Name: Lucifer Morningstar
Race: Human
Job: Mageknight
Weapon: Ragnarok/ 2x Outsiders
Jewel: Ebon-grey
Appearence: Med. length, red hair, 6 ft 3 in, green eyes, avaerage build, black leather boots, black trousers, black shirt, black t-shirt, black leather coat, black scarf
Personality: Mysterious, cocky, has a sensitive side that he doesn't show very often.
Magic: Black magic

You wake up in your house, to find a note on the bedside table that says: You have been chosen to stop whoever is behind the summoning of the legendary Bahamut. Signed The King.

Confused, you look out of the window to see a huge dark cloud forming over a nearby town, suddenly, Bahamut descends from the cloud, blasting the town with his power.

Shocked you quickly get your clothes on, grab your weapons and jewel, and head towards to town to see if there are any survivors.

ill try i guess

name:lazerus kimory
race:bangaa
job:dragoon/red mage
wep:chain spear (lost)/power staff (emer)
jewl:summer sky
apperence:5.9,green trench coat, necklass with a symbole of the sun and moon,green eyes,missing the first two fingers on his left hand,wheres a steel helment,has leather arm and ankle bands,wheres green lether pants and a dark green cotten upper shurt with steel mail underneeth.

helps as much as he can however hes not wildly ecsepted by meny peaple,hes interested in studing the history of the earth and learned mutch from the meny syentists and worriors hes met, hes mostly a loner but if he needs to join a party he will,he alwas seems to show up at the times when somebodey really needs him but however when he gets there hill usally screw at least one thing up and ether help or make things worse.

where he comes to the story: one day lazerus was looking for sedements somewhere in the southern mountens when he seen a huge black storm cloud apear to the north of the mountens near a village. appon seeing this lazerus knew that this cloud was a sign of the retearn of bauhamet so he set off to have a closer look as well as see why hes back and if he can help in any way.
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Ok, now I know what u meant when u sent that message. Plz ignore the comment, SA. I messed up!

Name: Lyn Xian (shi-on)
Age: 15
Class:Summoner
Race:Human
Appearence:Black hair with bloodred eyes. Wears a black button-up shirt with barbwires on the sides and arms. Wears black pants with pocket chain, and black boots.
Magic: Some white and a few black spells.
Jewel:Opal
Weapon: Katana
Biography: Lyn lost her real parents at the age of 3, when soldiers raided her hometown village. She washed up on the shore of a village of an island. When she woke up, she could not remember anything except her parents and her own name. She stayed with the temple summoner at the age of 6, and became a summoner at 12.
Now she journies to find out the mystery of her past.

Lyn is quite the silent person. She likes to keep things to herself and doesn't like to open up to others.

you mixed up race and class

Oops...I fixed it!!!

Name: Christmas Evermore

Age: 20

Class: Paladin

Race: Human

Appearance: http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a155/Unknowns2/Christmas0.jpg

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a155/Unknowns2/Christmasfull.jpg

Jewels:: White

Weapon: Dual Blade. A double bladed sword that can be split apart into two swords.

http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a155/Unknowns2/Double1.jpg

Magic: White + Support Magic

Personality: Keeps a lot to herself although alway putting up a cheerful front.

Biography:Came from an order of Holy Knights, vowed to banish the darkness and restore the light.

How about adding limit breaks....

me to:D

Name:Kusanagi
Race:Human
Job:Necromancer
Weapon: Scythe of the Angel Grimm
Jewel:Yellow
appearence:white hair formed into a shag, jet-black eyes with bloodred pupils, wears a black leather trenchcoat, appears to be around 20 years old and is average height and build
personality: was a nice child but was constantly made fun of and beat for being differen't (hair and eyes) this turned him bitter and mean and is part of the reason he became a Necromancer and became pretty good at it. although he was good at what he did one day he tried to commit suicide and was stopped by his master who told him "simple minded people fear what they don't understand, but don't throw your life away because of this, there are people out there who will see past what people fear in you, and find something to appreciate." that event turned him around and he started being nicer and less bitter. although he still longs for a friend
Magic: Arcane magic

bored, he decided to go and talk to a spirit in the graveyard about what it was like to die when a dark cloud seemed to destroy a nearby village. shocked, he rides out to investigate

No limit breaks I'm afraid!

The jewels are what summon dwells inside you!
White- Alexander, Yellow- Titan, Tiger eye- Madeen, Rose- Carbuncle, Summer sky- Leviathan, Purple dusk- Ramuh, Opal- Phoenix, Green, Typhoon, Sapphire- Shiva, Red- Ifrit, Grey- Medusa, Ebon-grey- Diablos and Black(Which no-one is allowed at all!!!!)- Bahamut

So, can the story start or you still have something else in mind?

Yes it can start, unless anyone has anything else to ask?

For 100 years, Flyssa has been safe from the legendary Eidolon Bahamut, thanks to the MageKnight Legolas Perkin. But, now someone has summoned it, and you have been chosen by the King of Flyssa.

You wake up in your house, to find a note on the bedside table that says: You have been chosen to stop whoever is behind the summoning of the legendary Bahamut. Signed The King.

Confused, you look out of the window to see a huge dark cloud forming over a nearby town, suddenly, Bahamut descends from the cloud, blasting the town with his power.

Shocked you quickly get your clothes on, grab your weapons and jewel, and head towards to town to see if there are any survivors.

CHRISTMAS

I searched around for sights of life and found some lying on the floor crying for help.

I carried some of the survivors to safety while thinking of what to do next.

kimory had been running for close to 20 minutes and when he finaly got to the gate of the town he seen that what he had suspected had come true bauhamet was back,at the sight of this kimory imedetly ran in to see if he could get even closer and maby find someone who can help stop this beast.

I was running as fast as I could go to see any survivors. I was finally at the gate, when I saw that everything was decimated!

CHRISTMAS

After Bahamut decimated everything, it dissappeared into thin air. I signalled the survivors that the coast is clear for them to show themselves from their hiding place.

I scanned the surroundings to see if I am able to find anymore survivors. I saw a Bangaa. I walked towards him and said

"Me Christmas. Me looking survivors and Me love fluffy animals like you. Me happy meet you." I stretched out my hand for a handshake.

Kusanagi

he dismounts and runs into the decimated village and sees a woman shaking hands with a Bangaa

he runs up to them "heeeeeeyyyyy! are you guys alright?"

Myrmidon, ur gonna have to post ur character!!!
Lyn
I found a little girl hiding in the rubble of the village.
"Hey, there. R u ok? It's alright. Everything's fine now." I said to her calmly.
She scrambled out of the rubble and was holding a worn-out teddybear.
She looked no older than 6 years old. I picked her up.
"Can u tell me your name?" I asked her.
"Leanna..." She shyly replied. I nodded.
"OK, Leanna. Let's see if we can find your parents, all right?" I asked.
She nodded slightly.
I saw others ahead.

Lucifer

As I walked towards the rubble left by the awesome power od Bahamut, I remembered something that my Mother always said to me.
"Don't dig up the past, you'll only find grief"
I stood still for a moment thinking what should I do, when suddenly, I hear some of the rubble moving. I turn around quickly to find an old woman.
"Uh, what did you do?" she asked
"WHAT?!?!?!? You think I did this?" I replied
The old woman, badly injured, tried to lunge at me, but I swiftly moved to the left. As she fell, I had a deep feeling of guilt and let her fall to the ground.
"Are you ok?" I ask.
The old woman didnt say a word or move.
With the feeling of guilt, still in the back of my head, I left the town in search of counsel from my old master who lived in the Great Mountains of Elin.

Myrmidon, ur gonna have to post ur character!!!


He did post in the earlier posts.

CHRISTMAS

"Oh hello!!! Me name Christmas. Happy to meet you. Bangaa no talk to me. Me sad. Me happy to see you. What you name?" I asked.

Oops...srry...I forgot...

Lucifer

As I walked towards the rubble left by the awesome power od Bahamut, I remembered something that my Mother always said to me.
"Don't dig up the past, you'll only find grief"
I stood still for a moment thinking what should I do, when suddenly, I hear some of the rubble moving. I turn around quickly to find an old woman.
"Uh, what did you do?" she asked
"WHAT?!?!?!? You think I did this?" I replied
The old woman, badly injured, tried to lunge at me, but I swiftly moved to the left. As she fell, I had a deep feeling of guilt and let her fall to the ground.
"Are you ok?" I ask.
The old woman didnt say a word or move.
With the feeling of guilt, still in the back of my head, I left the town in search of counsel from my old master who lived in the Great Mountains of Elin.

Lucifer

Once I had reached the house of my master, I noticed that the town looked like it was being rebuilt. Shocked, I knocked on the door and waited for a response, none.
10 minutes later, I started to walk back.
"You never learnt to be patient did you?" Someone said
I turned round and found Master Dante on the roof of his house.
"Master, I seek your counsel!" I asked.
Master Dante jumped from the roof, and landed in cross legs slowly.
"Really, well come in my boy"
I walked into his small house, well, I say it was a house, more like a room.
The room was filled with ancient weapons and large bear skin rugs.

Master Dante levitated towards a large pile of cushions.
"So, what do want me for?" He asked
"Dellop has been destroyed by Bahamut"
Dante was shocked by the news I gave him.
"Really, well you must stop it"
"But I don't know how"
"Shut up, you do know how, you just dont know how to apply your power yet"
"How do I then?"

(i am sorry for not talking before i was not on yesterday please forgive me)

"hello" i said looking at the man
"and hello to you to sorry i egnored you before i was kinda absorbed in my thoughts"lokking at the woman
"oh and my name is lazerus kimory,pleaed to meet you two"

Kusanagi

Kusanagi looks puzzeled at the womans dialect "do you really talk like that or is it so he will understand?" and he points a thumb towards the bangaa "anyway, what the hell happened here anyway?"

CHRISTMAS

"What wrong me talk? Me talk like this when born!! You discriminate me. ME NO LIKE YOU!!" I went to a corner and sulk.

LAZERUS

"Come on Christmas he dident mean to make you feel bad we where just asking" lazerus said walking twords and kneeling next to christmas

"oh and yes apperently bahament has awoken from his slumber and destroied this town i came here to investigate further but i know nothing about christmas"kimory said looking at the man

"Also by the way"lazerus got up and walked in front of the man
"i can understand speech very easaly thank you very much"lazerus said this in a loosly angy tone

Kusanagi

kneels down beside Christmas "I'm sorry miss, its wrong of me to discriminate and stereotype like that, will you please forgive me?" he holds out his hand to pull her back up

LAZERUS

"your just the master of sarcasm arnt you"looking at kusanagi
"im just a goody goody you dont have to copy me or anything....oh forget it i just feel that your makeing fun of me even if you arnt"lazerus added

CHRISTMAS

"No quarrel.Quarrel no good. We all friends. Friend like each other. Friend, friend?" I said.

Xian
As little Leanna fell asleep, I went to look around for any other ppl that would tell me what was going on...

LAZERUS

"yes i sopose your right christmas"i said

CHRISTMAS

"Huh? Me see girl coming to us.HELLO!!!!! " I waved at the girl.

Kusanagi

"yeah, we all friends here" pulls the woman of the ground and yells at the oncoming woman "heeeelllloooooo!"

Lyn
I looked up and saw some other ppl.
"Ah!" I waved back.

CHRISTMAS

"Hi!Hi!Hi! Me name Christmas. Me happy joyful see you. What you name? Me you everyone friend" I said.

Lazerus

"yeah i would like to greet you as well my name i lazerus kimory"i said to the woman

Lyn
And I'm Lyn! Nice to meet u all! This is little Leanna...She's lost her parents...Have u seen them?" I asked.

CHRISTMAS

"OOOOHHHH!!! Poor Poor Leanna. Let go find Leanna's parents ok? We find them , Leanna happy, we happy." I suggested.

Lyn
"Ummmm...Does she always talk like that?" I whispered over to Lazerus.

LAZERUS

"strangly yes she alwas does i have apsolutly no idea why" kimory wispered back

CHRISTMAS

"What you two talking? Can share with me? me also want know. Please? Please?" I pleaded.

Is there still room for another char.?

Is there still room for another char.?

Yeah sure, just fill out the character info

okie dokie, here we go:

Name: Reil Atama
Race: 1/2 Human / 1/2 Demon
Job: Dark Knight
Weapons: Magnus and Furio (2 long wakazashi's with dark power).
Jewel: Ebon-grey
Appearence: (see my sketch below)
Personality: Mysterious, quiet but very wise. Isn't really a bad guy, but has a very dark secret he tries so hard to keep, but it just haunts him every time in battle. He is quite friendly when he gets to know somebody.
Magic: Arcane Magic

( i don't know where to start, um, could someone "place" me, thanks..;) )

Lucifer

Once I had reached the house of my master, I noticed that the town looked like it was being rebuilt. Shocked, I knocked on the door and waited for a response, none.
10 minutes later, I started to walk back.
"You never learnt to be patient did you?" Someone said
I turned round and found Master Dante on the roof of his house.
"Master, I seek your counsel!" I asked.
Master Dante jumped from the roof, and landed in cross legs slowly.
"Really, well come in my boy"
I walked into his small house, well, I say it was a house, more like a room.
The room was filled with ancient weapons and large bear skin rugs.

Master Dante levitated towards a large pile of cushions.
"So, what do want me for?" He asked
"Dellop has been destroyed by Bahamut"
Dante was shocked by the news I gave him.
"Really, well you must stop it"
"But I don't know how"
"Shut up, you do know how, you just dont know how to apply your power yet"
"How do I then?"

Hey Reil, how about this?
Lucifer

Suddenly a figure appeared out of the shadows of the hut.
"Hello, my name is Reil Atama. I will be your training buddy" said the figure"

Hmm..i'll develop it a bit, how's this?

Reil
I overheard a conversation as i passed by a small hut in town.

"I'm sorry for intruding Master Dante, but i overheard your conversation. I to seek to stop Bahamut. May i train alongside you? I am already a highly skilled Knight.....Dark Knight...with Arcane magic, however, i need to improve. I haven't battled for a decade, i have simply wandered the earth." I explained, "Please, forgive my ignorance, I am Reil Atama, a free lance Dark Knight. And who might you be?"

Lucifer

"My name is Lucifer Morningstar! I am a Mageknight!"
"How do you know Master Dante?" I asked

Reil
"Lucifer? that's a name not to live to......." I flinched, "I have known Master Dante for my whole life, my father was trained by Master Dante, i was trained by my father and Master Dante. I just haven't seen Master for years..how long has it been?" i explained and asked,

"Oh, about 11 or 12 years, you certainly have changed, Reil." He answered.

"That long? how can i have stayed away for so long? how old am i then? i have kept no track of my own age...." I asked, totally amazed by how long i have been gone.

"Dear me, Reil. You are 38 this year. You have certainly grown since you left. You look more like a .......... man." Master Dante amswered.

I let out a sigh of relief when he said "man", i was expecting some other answer, i thought he might have found out, or at least sensed something.....

Lucifer

"Sorry to interrupt, but how do I defeat Bahamut master Dante?" I ask
"Concentrate on your ability!" he replied
"You two should join each other, you can learn a lot from him, Lucifer"

I turned to Reil and looked him in the eyes.

"Ok, lets do this" I said

Reil
"Thank you Master."

"Hm, you carry a very heavy sword..have you ever considered smaller swords like these?" i asked as i drew Magnus and Furio, my twin Wakazashi's, customised of course.

Reil
"Thank you Master."

"Hm, you carry a very heavy sword..have you ever considered smaller swords like these?" i asked as i drew Magnus and Furio, my twin Wakazashi's, customised of course.

Lucifer

I look at the two swords, then draw mine
"Its not that heavy really!" I said.

Reil

"Here, hold one of these, then compare....with your power that you use with the bigger sword, combined with a smaller, lighter sword, you could literally slice through trees with ease." I handed over Magnus, the slightly longer of the two.
"These were made by my father in the forges. They are supposed to hold certain legendary Arcane magic, but i haven't needed to release it yet. i don't think i could control it.." I explained.

Kusanagi

"hey, im Kusanagi the necromancer atyour service" suddenly his ears twitch

he looks behind him and draws his scythe "Chimera! everybody watch it!"

Reil

"Here, hold one of these, then compare....with your power that you use with the bigger sword, combined with a smaller, lighter sword, you could literally slice through trees with ease." I handed over Magnus, the slightly longer of the two.
"These were made by my father in the forges. They are supposed to hold certain legendary Arcane magic, but i haven't needed to release it yet. i don't think i could control it.." I explained.

Lucifer

I sheathed my sword, and grabbed the Magnus blade.
"Jesus, it's so light, I feel like I'm going to break it! What is it made of?" I ask.

CHRISTMAS

"WHERE!!??? WHERE!!!!???" I drew my sword and got to an offensive stance.

LAZERUS

lazerus looked around hopeing to see the beast but like christmas he was unable to see it. but he trusted kusanagi enough that he did draw his spear and prepare to fight even is he dident see anything .

Lyn
"Ah! Look! Up there!!!" I yelled, pointing up.

Kusanagi

the chimera jumps down from a ruined building and lets out a deafining roar

"alright! challenge time!" Kusanagi yells out "last one to land a cut buys the beer!"

he lashes out at the chimera with his scythe and cuts it on the forearm

Lyn
I quickly put Leanna down. I unsheathed my dagger and screamed; "Not it!"
I landed a cut on its upper body.

CHRISTMAS

I focused on one of the heads and sliced it off with one swipe of my sword.

"BAD BAD ANIMAL. ME NO FRIEND YOU." I commented.

KIMORY

kimory took a few fast jumps backward then threw himself at the beast impaling it right in the chest, although the strick missed the heart it still caused major damage and the beast began to weaken considerably, kimory then jumped back and sat at the ready in case anouther attack was needed.

could I possibly create my own jewel, pleeeeeease?
Kusanagi

"ha! drinks on Kimory!" suddenly the chimera lashes out with its tail sending Kusanagi into the air "GAH!" he screams out as he is struck

he manages to land on his feet with a small gash in his stomach "oh ho ho, your gonna pay for that!"

Kusanagi brings his hand up to his face and it begins to glow a ghostly green, he then slams it up against a ruined building beside him, the building collapses in a mighty crash

the pieces of the building start to come together to form a large humanoid figure

"stone golem! go!"

Lucifer

I sheathed my sword, and grabbed the Magnus blade.
"Jesus, it's so light, I feel like I'm going to break it! What is it made of?" I ask.

Reil
"It's made of light alloys, with heavy reinforcements. Don't worry, you can't break it, it is bound together with Arcana magic, so that it never breaks, even when it's old and rusted." i explained. "Go on, give it a try, but be careful." i warned Lucifer.

Reil
"It's made of light alloys, with heavy reinforcements. Don't worry, you can't break it, it is bound together with Arcana magic, so that it never breaks, even when it's old and rusted." i explained. "Go on, give it a try, but be careful." i warned Lucifer.

Not believing Reil, I slammed the sword down into the floorboards of Master Dantes shack, knowing that the were made out of the strongest wood from an enchanted forest. As he said, it didnt break. Quite annoyed at the fact I was wrong, I handed Reil his sword.

I unsheathed Ragnarok and slammed it down into the floor to show how strong my sword was. Naturally, it pierced the floorboards, but it got stuck.

"Lucifer, you fool, get your sword out of my floorboards" Dante shouted angrily

Kusanagi

the stone golem takes a mighty swing at the chimera and sends it sraight into a wall

"thats the way ta do it!" Kusanagi yells as he runs at the beast with scythe raised

Reil
"Master, do not be angered. He is merely learning control." I said as i watched Lucifer struggling to remove his sword. I walked up to his sword, grabbed the handle with one hand and pulled it out. I handed the sword to Lucifer.
"Learn to use your strangth wisely." I suggested,
"Listen to him, Lucifer, he speaks wisely." Master Dante said.

"Come on, follow me to my traning grounds. I can see we both need some practice." I suggested, "See you again some time, Master Dante!" i called as we walked out, into the town.
"Come on, it's not far from here." I said, we walked to the end of the street and turned right.
"Straight down here to the end. My humble home, Father will be pleased to see me." I thought to myself.

We both stepped into my house.
"Father! I'm home!" i called. I saw this weary old man jump up from his chair and run to me.
"Son!! Reil!! you've come back!!" He cried, "11 years since i last saw you...." he said, as he continued to hug me.
"Lucifer? what are you doing here?" My father asked, he seemed to know him.
"Lucifer? you know Solitare?" i asked, my Father was called Solitare because he trained solo, and only solo, with no one else. Then he trained me, once he was fully trained.

CHRISTMAS

"Cute Stoney Thingy you made. Me love Cutie Thingy" I commented.

Reil

"Lucifer? what are you doing here?" My father asked, he seemed to know him.
"Lucifer? you know Solitare?" i asked, my Father was called Solitare because he trained solo, and only solo, with no one else. Then he trained me, once he was fully trained.

"Hmmm, Solitare! How are you?" I said. I knew Solitare from a few years back, we had to protect the King from assasination.

Reil glared at me, so I explained how I knew his father

Kusanagi

he brings his scythe down hard into the chimera and slashes with a L type motion, he quickly jumps back as the golem takes another swing

"alright, lets finish this!"

Reil
"Oh, right. I have missed too much..." i said, rubbing my head.
"Father, are your still able to train?" i asked,
"Hmm...i suppose so...it's been a while...." Solitare replied,
"You too huh? I haven't had a proper fight since i left here years ago..." i explained.

Reil
"Oh, right. I have missed too much..." i said, rubbing my head.
"Father, are your still able to train?" i asked,
"Hmm...i suppose so...it's been a while...." Solitare replied,
"You too huh? I haven't had a proper fight since i left here years ago..." i explained.

"Why did you leave?" I asked.
There was an awkward silence after I had asked

hey Bella, Empu-dragon, where u guys at?
Kusanagi

Kusanagi runs straight at the chimera and slams his palm into the beasts chest

"bone spear!" he yells

his hand flashes quickly and suddenly a large white, pointy bone breaks through the beasts back

the beast struggles briefly then fades away as the pyre flies leave its body

the large bone retreats back into Kusanagi's palm and he turns to the others

"well, shall we get some drinks" and he begins to walk towards the group "oh ya, almost forgot" he turns to the golem "thanks for the help bud" and with a wave of his hand the golem falls apart back into the inanimate pieces of brick and stone it was made out of

I'm right here...Computer is being retarded...I'm gonna kill it soon enough...The computer, I mean.
Xian
"Wait, what about the gash on your abdomen, Kusinagi?" I asked, picking up Leanna.

Reil
"I..i left because of a war in the far west of the continent. I was the only Knight that was young and skilled enough, may father here didn't want to leave because it meant leaving me, so i went instead. To be honest, i needed a good fight. When the war had finished, i lost where i was, and couldn't get back, i only fell upon the town with information from an outsider." I explained.

Kusanagi

"oh...ya...don't worry about, I can't really feel it, when we get back ill get a potion or somethin"

Reil
"I..i left because of a war in the far west of the continent. I was the only Knight that was young and skilled enough, may father here didn't want to leave because it meant leaving me, so i went instead. To be honest, i needed a good fight. When the war had finished, i lost where i was, and couldn't get back, i only fell upon the town with information from an outsider." I explained.

Lucifer

"Ah right... So, what are we doing here?" I asked impatiently

Lucifer

"Ah right... So, what are we doing here?" I asked impatiently
Reil
"We came here to train and get to know each other a little better." Come on, follow me into our arena.." I walked down into a cellar below the house. Lucifer followed behind.

"Ok, this is it, although it looks a little dusty. There's punch bags, weights, blades, sickles....everything you'll need..." I explained. "Lets see what you got, kid."

so is this story just sorta...dead now?

No idea...:eep:

guess so.

Reil
"We came here to train and get to know each other a little better." Come on, follow me into our arena.." I walked down into a cellar below the house. Lucifer followed behind.

"Ok, this is it, although it looks a little dusty. There's punch bags, weights, blades, sickles....everything you'll need..." I explained. "Lets see what you got, kid."

Sorry I took so long!

Lucifer

I took a blade from the rack and taunted Reil.

"Ok, bring it on kid!"

Reil
"ahaha...what sort of stance is that?" i asked. I drew my sword, spun 360 degrees and landed the blade right on Lucifer's shoulder, before he even knew what was going on.
"You've got no defensive stance, you can't protect whilst in your offence stance." i explained.
"Don't try to fight, just fight. Don't go against your natural rythm, work with it." i continued. Lucifer came at me with a good run..

Kusanagi

they arrive shortly there after at the bar

they grab a table and immediatly Kusanagi trys to make conversation "so what were all you guys doin there anyway?"

Reil
"ahaha...what sort of stance is that?" i asked. I drew my sword, spun 360 degrees and landed the blade right on Lucifer's shoulder, before he even knew what was going on.
"You've got no defensive stance, you can't protect whilst in your offence stance." i explained.
"Don't try to fight, just fight. Don't go against your natural rythm, work with it." i continued. Lucifer came at me with a good run..

Lucifer

As I ran towards Reil, I spun round in a circle as if I was casting a tornado.
"Ha, try defending this then" I shouted

Reil
I could see Lucifer spinning. He could only be going in for an all out power atack. I simply side-stepped and held my sword firm in my hands.
"No need to defend when i can evade..." i said sarcastically. Lucifer stopped spinning, turned and glared at me.
"how the...?!" he exclaimed.
"you're technique is too wide and powerful, you need to tighten your attack range and keep a balance between power and speed." i explained.
Solitare walked into the room and watched the two of us sparring.
"Listen to him, Lucifer. He's no knight for nothing.." Solitare said.

Reil
I could see Lucifer spinning. He could only be going in for an all out power atack. I simply side-stepped and held my sword firm in my hands.
"No need to defend when i can evade..." i said sarcastically. Lucifer stopped spinning, turned and glared at me.
"how the...?!" he exclaimed.
"you're technique is too wide and powerful, you need to tighten your attack range and keep a balance between power and speed." i explained.
Solitare walked into the room and watched the two of us sparring.
"Listen to him, Lucifer. He's no knight for nothing.." Solitare said.

Lucifer

"There's nothing wrong with my technique... Is there?"

Reil

"Reil is correct. Your technique is a little too wide ranged and wild. If you try to keep a tighter range, you power would increase, however, you must build speed into it. With Reil simply side-stepping your attack, that should show you that you are too slow. With a tighter attack range and a little less power, then your techinique would be practically perfect for your body shape and size." Solitare explained. I watched him pick up a long pole-arm from the dusty rack. He flung it around and shook all the dust off.
He then began flicking it around, just like he explained, keeping a tight range, and i could see his speed increasing with each and every twist and turn.
"Just like the old days, eh, pops? i asked sarcastically.
"It's like riding a bike, you can't forget." He replied, "Lucifer, train with us, watch what we do and copy it. Follow our moves and think through what you are doing. You will soon become an excellent fighter." Solitare said.

Reil

"Reil is correct. Your technique is a little too wide ranged and wild. If you try to keep a tighter range, you power would increase, however, you must build speed into it. With Reil simply side-stepping your attack, that should show you that you are too slow. With a tighter attack range and a little less power, then your techinique would be practically perfect for your body shape and size." Solitare explained. I watched him pick up a long pole-arm from the dusty rack. He flung it around and shook all the dust off.
He then began flicking it around, just like he explained, keeping a tight range, and i could see his speed increasing with each and every twist and turn.
"Just like the old days, eh, pops? i asked sarcastically.
"It's like riding a bike, you can't forget." He replied, "Lucifer, train with us, watch what we do and copy it. Follow our moves and think through what you are doing. You will soon become an excellent fighter." Solitare said.

Lucifer

"I don't need to train! I'm one of the best fighters in the world!" I arrogantly said while walking away.
Reil stopped me just as I grabbed the door handle

Reil
"You leave and you lose us. You say you'er the best fighter in the world, even the best train. The best watch, listen, train and learn new techniques. So, you go on ahead, leave, but just be warned, you will get beaten down in that open world." i said firmly as Lucifer was just about to leave.

Solitare stood, listening and watching.

Reil
"You leave and you lose us. You say you'er the best fighter in the world, even the best train. The best watch, listen, train and learn new techniques. So, you go on ahead, leave, but just be warned, you will get beaten down in that open world." i said firmly as Lucifer was just about to leave.

Solitare stood, listening and watching.

Lucifer

I stared at Reil for a second, thinking about the training that I would be given.

"Ugh, dammit! I hate these things!" I said as I picked up a Polearm

Reil
"Good, you shall soon see you made the right choice." i said, "Show me what you can do with that."

Reil
"Good, you shall soon see you made the right choice." i said, "Show me what you can do with that."

Sirius

I ran towards Reil, trying to keep my defence up, and struck the tip into the handle of his!

sry, but i think this ones a goner