[RP] New Rp thread, probably stinks

The place is called Avarue.4 warring kingdoms have tried to posses s the land, the Dy'Wa, a nation built and able to use elements of fire . De'Chor, a nation built around water and uses it to their advantage., and the Di'Tig, a nation whose been able to find ways to use earth to there advantages.Lastly, there are the Mo'Alor, who have found ways to use hurricanes and wind to their advantage with magic. Each Kingdom has a different idol god.Dy'Wa:Zimbao....De'Chor:Hibbido....D i'Tig:Stadmal....
Mo'Alor:Fridunuh

If u would like to join, here is the sheet.

Name:
Age
Gender:
DoB
Kingdom:
Idol
Appearance:
Weapons: Abilities:(feel free to make them up but they have to tie into your kingdoms element.)

Bio:


(its my first rp, but plz critizice if u must.)

Name:Elzic Ash
Age:12
Gender:Male
DoB:Marca(march) 17th, 23
Kingdom:Di'Tig
Idol:Stadmal
Appearance: Light SKinned, hazel eyes.UNlike the other knights, he wears a white lightweight cloth, so he could manuever more easily, and he woudnt be heavy on his White steed
Weapons:ShibiduyaDragon: Dragoon Spear+Bow and Quiver
Abilities:Boulder Dash Lets me control nearby stones and rocks.,Dragonic Transmogrification Dragon Transformation,TUnnel Dungeon, lets me build tunnels under everybody s they get trapped.,Earthly Access sink into and travel in the earth.
Bio: Since he was young, Elzic trained to become a very skilled warrior, like his father before him.HIs father died battle, and evn at a young age, Elzic still vowed to avenge his death. NOw he fights valiantly with other members of the earth kingdom.

That's accually a very nice idea! you shouldn't criticize yourself, you need to be confident in your ability to create. more people will respect you, and when you pass on the streets, people will go, "hey look! it's that great creator!" I would be honored to join your RP.

Name: Mireille
Age: 15
Gender: Female
DoB: October 31
Kingdom: De'Chor
Idol: Hibbido
Appearance: brown hair, bright blue eyes, pale skin, wears a plain white robe OR a very nice looking pink kimono(only when she's at home)
Weapons: sword and shield
Abilities: Water Manipulation!- an attack that allows her to manipulate water to do whatever she wants
Geyser- she summons water from the ground(it's boiling hot of course) to help decimate the enemy forces
Silent Voice- Summons Siren(we are changing Siren to water elemental, only women are allowed to know how to summon Siren, men learn Leviathan)
Water- the basic water attack, wearker than Water Manipulation, summons water from nowhere(mainly used if there is no water for Water Manipulation)
Bio: When her parents was killed by neighboring countries when she was only 5, she swore revenge, and joined the army. She trained to much ridicule, being the only woman in the army. She later surpassed all the men and was promoted to captain of her group, where she currently stays. She lives in a small hut just on the outskirts of De'Chor with her boyfreind, Josh, who is 18.

What do you think? is that good enough?

I'll join! I'll join! XD *really likes the elemental stuff*

Name: Skye (oh so creative at the moment)
Age: 14
Gender: Female
DoB: May 25
Kingdom: Mo'Alor
Idol: Fridunuh
Appearance: Midnight black (with a bluish tint) hair that goes to her shoulders, deep purple eyes. Pale. Wears simple shirt and pants with many pockets to hold any odds or ends she finds interesting.
Weapons: Spear (Void has corrupted me! O_O ) and fists.
Abilities:
Flight of Lightning: Summons lightning to form wings with which to fly.
Call of Lightning: Brings forth a barrage of lightning to strike down enemy.
Call of Wind: Brings forth powerful gusts of wind to either aid flight, or cause a tornado to harm the enemy.
Wind Scythe: Razor sharp winds slash at the enemy.

Bio: When a large storm ravaged her village, many people were killed, most parents of young children. When the orphans were exiled from the village, she followed to keep them safe with a promise to come back to her family when she'd seen them to a safe place. Sadly, all were slowly killed off by beast or pure misfortune, until Skye was the only one left. Feeling she could never face her parents with so many deaths burdening her, she decided to live her own life. She travels from place to place, gathering small and easy bounties and treasures to pay for meals and lodging.

i think dying parents is becoming a trend.....

Didn't you know? Dead parents is awesome! :D

*Changes Bio*

thnak u for hte compliment Mirielle, and i got the elemental thing from avatar:the last airr, cause i had been thinknin bout avatar b4 makin this thread.

So who starts?

Name: Maria
Age: 15
Gender: Female
DoB: June 24
Kingdom: Mo'Alor
Idol: Fridunuh
Appearance: Lightly tanned, long purple hair, black eyes, light clothing
Weapons: Crossbow

Abilities:
Swift Zephyr: Allows you to move faster
Tornado: Summons a tornado against your foe.
Sigh of the Wind: Heals wounds with a soft breeze.
Squall Strike: Attack with a fury of lightning.

Bio: At a very young age, Maria’s mother had died from an unknown cause. Her and her two siblings were left with their abusive father. Two years after that, Maria’s brother had been murdered by thieves that passed through her town. Her sister left in search of a better life shortly after. With her the only target to her father’s aggression she had no choice but to run away. At age 15, Maria had been traveling all alone for 3 years. In these three years she had acquired skills with crossbows.

wow, i was right....dying parents beez a trend yoz

wow, i was right....dying parents beez a trend yoz

Orphans pwn and you know it :p

yup! they sure do!

okay, i'll start

Mireille walked through her beutiful city of De'Chor, carrying groceries in her arms. She looked around at the city lovingly, she loved the fresh environment. Something stirred behind her, she whipped her head around, nearly dropping her groceries. 'Must have been the wind' she thought and continued along her way.

"Um, hi?" Skye asked, appearing behind Mireille. "Um, I was wondering if I could ask you a question...?"

"yes?" Mireille wondered what this strange girl wanted with her.

"Yes, well.... erm..." She looked at the ground, a little embarassed. "Er... where am I?"

"You're in De'Chor dear." Mireille looked amazed that the girl didn't know where she was.

"De'Chor?" Her eyes widened in surprise. She glared at the ground, and muttered under her breath, "D*mn, how could this have happened? Was it....?" She shook her head, before smiling and looking at Mireille again. "Ah, thank you. Bye!" She said with a small wave, before starting off deeper into De'Chor.

I'll join, if I may.

Name: Hephaestus
Age: 21
Gender: Male
DoB: February 27
Kingdom: Dy'Wa
Idol: Zimbao
Appearance: Shoulder length scarlet hair, emerald green eyes. Tall, muscular, well-built but light on his feet. Silver suit of armour emblazoned with flames of gold on the breastplate and helmet. Dark tan.
Weapons: Two handed greatsword known as "Midnight Kiss", which can turn to flame on his command.

Abilities:
Midnight Rush- a powerful combo attack that bathes the opponent in devastating fires.
Fire of Hephaestus- attacks enemies with an enormous fireball.
Fire Wall- Creates a wall of flame to shield himself and his allies from attack.
The Chosen of Zimbao- Becomes a being of purest flame that scorches and destroys all in his path.

Hephaestus also possesses the three levels of fire spell (Fire, Fira, Firaga) plus Flare. (If this is too powerful, let me know.)

Bio: A warrior looking for his daughter, who he believes to have been kidnapped by the people of De'Chor and is now being held captive somewhere within the city. He now strongly distrusts those from De'Chor as a result. Hephaestus is strong both physically and menatally, and is enormously adept at battle.

your okay doom, but since its sorta early in the thread dont ar twith the high level spells.


I forgot to add something, there is 1 king for each nation:im this thread kings are CHensus.

Dy'Wa. Chensu Twenfu
De'Chor:Chensu Yufwol
Di'Tig:Chensu Diyret
Mo'Alor:Chensu Afokap




"Chensu Diyret, We have a a group of Mo'Alor rogues in DI'Tig.What are your orders?"
"Bring them to me, but do alert the public, there is no need to alert them."
"I shall"
After aprrehending these soldiers, Elzic gave them to the king.
"If you tell us why you are here, you will be free. FAlse information will result in my knight killing you"
After telling the Chensu and his knight, Elzic, they had come to bring people to mo'Lor they were set free to ride back to their kingdom.
"Chensu asked "Do you believe them?"
Elzic replied " No, they all had a dagger in one of their shoes, an observant eye couild have told by a little opening."
"Very well then" IF you meet them in battle, finish them."
"Fine by me."

"How could I have gotten out of Di'Tig?" She murmured, wandering De'Chor. "Could the man have been speaking the truth? It is possible to warp from one place to another with the powers of wind?" She said softly to herself. She thought it through, before saying finally, "Either way, it'd be horrible if any other kingdoms found out about this... I must study it!" She came to the conclusion. "Only one problem! How...?"

Hephaestus stood some distance outside the gates of De'Chor, several hundred troops gathered behind him.

"Captain, are you sure this is wise?" asked his second-in-command.

"Wise or not, I want my daughter back," was his reply. " I'll give them a chance to surrender her, otherwise we storm the city and take her back ourselves ."

He faced the city, emerald eyes aglow with rage and hatred.

"Chensu Yufwol!" he bellowed, directly addressing the head of De'Chor, his powerful voice carried by the wind. "Give me back my daughter Hana, and no harm shall befall you! Refuse, and you leave me no choice but to claim her by force!"

He calmly awaited the kingdom's reply.

"What was that?!" She said, hearing someone shout from the other side of the large wall. "Is another army here?" She murmured curiously. "Crap, I should get outta here!" She closed her eyes, concentrating. "Flight of the bird..." She murmured after a while. In a flash of lavender light, she disappeared.

"Whoa!" She reappeared not too far from the army. "...Crap." She said, freezing as she saw them.

(Craptastic post, but meh.)

Hephaestus' eyes settled on the girl. He smiled: a hostage was always handy.

"Bring her to me," he commanded his soldiers.

The troops advanced on the girl quickly.

"Sire, ouur spies tell us that a Dy'Wa army has moved to De'Chor."
"Ah, the water nation verse the fire nation.If we were to form a alliance between us and De'Chor, a powerful army would rise from the decision. GO help them, but dont bring soldiers, our plan must be secret until we know we can trust De'Chor.
"Yes Chensu."

As he finshed he rode off toward the gates of De'CHor.

"Yah!" She yelped, backing off a bit. "Uh, um... flight of the bird!" She shouted, eyes shut tight. Again, there was a lavander flash, and she disappeared.... and reappeared just on the other side of the army.

"A shout, I must go help whoever may be in need!" Elzic thought to himself. Elzic and his white steed Sapahiro charged full gallop towards the yelp. As he came closer, he could see the kingdom of De'Chor, and an army of Dy'Wa. "Boulder Dash" Elzic said softly hiding him and his horse behind a large boulder. After peeking arod the shield he saw a girl appear in front of the army. "What the hell is she doing ?"Elzic thought. "Tunnel Dungeon" Elzic whispered softly as he started taking away some troops and burying them in individual pits. Everyone started looking around in confusion. After dismounting his horse Elzic also whispered Earthly Access and traveled to the front the army to defend the gates of De'Chor as his Chensu commanded him.



Last thing, Doom reminded me of spells. If you want these spells are at your disposal

DI'Tig; Earta, Earto, Eartama, Natures Wrath

De'Chor; Liqua, Liquo, Liquida, Neptunes Fury

Dy'Wa; Fire ,Fira ,Firaga ,Flare

Mo'Alor; Aero, Aerora, Aeroga, Tornado Top

"Oh god.... I hope that's someone helping me and not someone else out to get me..." She murmured, not frantically swiping at some of the soldiers with her spear.

While in front of the Dy'Wa army, Elzic made a series of whistles and his horse Sapahiro appeared right next to the girl. Silently, Sapahiro nudged the girl, and kneeling as if to tell her to get on.

"What the.....?" Hephaestus said, confused, as he saw several of his soldiers disappearing. "That is an Earth technique! But this is the Water Kingdom.....?"
He looked around, and saw a man seated upon a white horse.

"Damn.....! He'd dare interfere with my mission? FIRE OF HEPHAESTUS!" he bellowed, hurling a ball of flame towards the man's position.


"I want my daughter back!"

"Daughter...?" Skye turned to Hephaestus questioningly while climbing onto the horse's back.

"My daughter.....she is somewhere within this Kingdom. All I want is for the Chensu to give her back to me. There would have been no need for violence had he complied. But now......now, I've been left with no choice but to use force."

"YOU think trying to take a girl HOSTAGE isn't VIOLENT!Whatever, I'll take your whole army on, but first,BOulder DAsh.After making a ramp into the water nation, EWlzic made his horse and the girl go inside. Then he waited with only his spear.

"Stubborn bastard. Fine, have it your way! Fire Wall!" he cried, erecting a defensive barrier around his troops that moved as they did.

"I'll make you regret taking my daughter!"

Havent you noticed anything yet? Im not a freakin Aqua Knight.I come from the lands of Di'Tig, and if you knew anything, you would know dirt weakens fire.Earthly Access! With saying this, after a quick glance, he saw only 4 sides were covered. side covered, and moved to the back of the army.Boulder Dash and Tunnel Dungeon! After this, Elzic made pits for several troops, and sealed their fate by using BOulder Dash to sharpen rocks and SEnding a bombardment of sharpened stones.

"Oi... trust my luck to get me into something like this..." She muttered, leaning against a wall wearily. "I doubt I could fight though, so might as well stay here. "Flight of Bird" is certainly taxing, even if you have no clue what the hell you're doing." She murmured, eyes half closed.

"If you are not a resident of this city, this has nothing to do with you! You have no right getting invlved! Get out of my way!"

This is a time of war, every thing has to do with somethin else.RResidents to Residents, Kingdoms to Kingdom, Me to You

"Listen to me! All I want is my daughter! If I get her back, there'll be no need for me to keep fighting here! I demand to speak to the Chensu!"

Then whats the army for? Heres an idea. You go in to talk to the Chensu, and if he does not know the whereabouts of your daughter you go.Your army stays here at the gates though.If you try anything violent, I will attack you. Then youll leave and go home.

"I know for a fact that my daughter is here, it's justa case of finding her. But, as you wish, I shall go alone."

He turned to his troops. "Wait here, and don't try anything stupid."

"Is it ok for me to go back?" Skye said softly, watching the other two. "Heck, do I even know the way back??"

"Sapahiro will stay here and watch your army, and a the slightest threatening move or stance will let out a very loud neigh" Elzic firmly said.

"Might I request a guide to show me the way to the palace?"

Fine, but I will get the guide.Sapahiro, come here please. I will be back soon. After going inside the gates, Elzic saw a lady walking (HINT HINT Mireille) and asked her if she knew where the palace was.