[P]Poem, short

A land devoid of life
Consumed in fire
I wander this lonely desert
Alone

I really like that.
Because it's short, it hits home more. i also like it becasue I often feel that my world is like that, anmd I wonder how MUCH BETTER it would be if it I was alone, but I oftenb realise it's much cooler being with people, no matter how much I hayte them....

anyway, love the poem, and I'd like to see more of your poems in the future

"No matter where you are, i can still hear you when you drown" ~Smashing Pumpkins

I've posted 2 here before, just a few weeks ago. I might add some more, but it all comes down to time...

Also, most people don't review my stuff if I haven't reviewed theirs, and I don't have time to read a bunch of other poems. But if you want me to, I'll post some more. Just let me know.

I would like you to post some more, but i would also like you to check out my Romeo & Juliet story that I posted. I need opinions on it. Its here....

http://www.eyesonff.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=42087

Please check it out. LLove to see some poems here!