[P] When the sun drops

Will you come to me
I'll await your return
I ignore the present
thus set my heart to burn.

Will my mind to make time stop
to ignore the seasons pass,
to live in the imagined moment
while my life just seems to crash.

Waiting the arrival
of that fabled day to come
when my fears, my tears, uncertainties
fade into the setting sun.

Left and locked in nightfall
my worries seem to be
though never will they be gone
but be a part of me.

Wow, that's really beautiful. The only part I didn't like was "to ignore to seasons pass" to and to was just two to's too many.

9/10

Thanks so much :D And actually thats was a typo =o *edits*

I figured you meant to put it the way it is now :). I had to give you a hard time about it though

nice, i liked it :)

That was lovely RikkuYuna89. ^^ I like the flow feel of it.