[P] I Asked For Your Eyes; You Gave Me Your Words

I asked for your eyes
You gave me your words
I asked for your love
You gave me your pain
Nothing came my way
That I desired
Only the agony
Of those you fired
Sympathy and regret
Go hand in hand
Disregarded world
In your dreams of pain
I asked for your eyes
You gave me your words
I asked for joy
You gave me again
There is nothing left to take
Cause there’s nothing left to give
Yet still you push on
With nowhere to go
No one you know
Who will help you out
No one to lend a hand
Because you betrayed them all
You gave what they did not want
And took what you would
Choosing to deny them their will
I asked for your eyes
You gave me your words
I asked for your sorrow…
And you didn’t know what to do

That poem is really amazing. I love it. Good job :D

Y'know, I find it incredibly amazing when people create poems I can relate to. It's as if they know me and have gone through the same thing I have. All I'm going to say is this-you did a goddamn good job.:)

Thanks, guys.

And about relating to people... that's kind of what I do when I write. I haven't actually experienced what I wrote about, but I find that I can write about stuff like that just by imagining it. Really, I created a person in my mind, and then wrote about him/her. I'm just glad it works as more than just a cool poem. Glad you liked it!

That means you're a really good writer, imagining what you haven't experienced. :) I really did like that poem. *loves making poems as well*