[P] Wherefore art thou, Love?

Fuzakeru
11-07-2003, 02:04 AM
Alright. Ima gonna write some more? Ready? *Laughs evilly as lightning strikes in background* Bwuahaha!
I'm in a demented mood tonight - can you tell? ^_^

Wherefore art thou, Love?

As Juliet beckoned Romeo, I beckon thee,
Wherefore art thou illusion of perfection?
Why doth thou remain blind to thy tears?
And deaf to tortured sighs that fall wearily from thy lips?

Love. . . wherefore art thou?
Nay! Away from thy clouded heart misconception!
Ne’er more repress thy caged passion!
Allow thy untamed cries to race with the echoes of abandonment the wind doth carry.

Aching throbs of bittersweet sorrow plunge deep in to thy soul,
Defiling innocence as the cynical voices grow increasingly restless,
Their soft caresses wash over thine mind as such impurities coax the pain of loneliness,
And insanity becomes a comfortable confident as desperation fuels blind desire.

^_^- End and stuff.

Edit - comfortable confidentail? Gah!! *Stabs typo with a spork* =^_^=

Divina
11-07-2003, 02:37 AM
How nice...=D Quite bittersweet. I like it.

Dignified Pauper
11-08-2003, 05:13 AM
Very well written. I like the comparison used, and the way you claim to find shelter in the insanity. Very good lady steph.

RinoaHeartilly777
11-08-2003, 07:06 AM
Very good. Awfully close to Shakespear though *shudders at the memory of trying to read Macbeth with a very useless book*. . . it tends to get to you after a while, but his writing are really good. . . Bah, getting off topic. Once again I say very good. I couldn't write like that if I tried, I'd end up confusing myself. . . again. . .:p

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