[S] 3rd Potential Comic

Hi all. As some of you may (or may not) remember, a while back, I posted the first and second issues of a comic I'm writing. Well, now, after like... 8 or so months, the third issue is finally finished. Here I'll attach the script, but you can also view the comic here:

http://www.chaosent.com/potential/pot03issue01.htm
(if you want to read them, the 1st and 2nd issues can also be accessed from the 'issues' section to the navigation bar on the right)

*WARNING* There is 1 word of profanity in the comic (it's not in the script, though). It's the word s**t

Keep in mind that I didn't draw the comic. My friend did. He also takes the script I give him and puts a sort of spin on it. It's like how he views the script. Because of this, some parts of the script are missing in the actual comic and some parts that are in the comic are missing from the script. The highlighted portions are there so when I send him the script, he knows which parts are important and cannot be taken out. So, anyway, here's my script:

Oh, and if anyone is interested, here's the first version of the issue. It's basically the same except for the ending, which I changed because my friend suggested that it would become more interesting if the three were split up rather than always ending up together at the end.