Erdrick Holmes
10-14-2003, 02:41 AM
Prolouge
2219, Humanity has forgotten there differences and began to work together for the good of the future. They began on a project known as "Neo Earth" A project that took many years to start successfully. The plan was to encase the earth in a large metal shell to replace that already withering Ozone layer also to give more of the human race some living quarters because the human population was booming.
2487, The Neo earth shell was near finished untill a race of Superintelligant extraterrestrial beings known as the "Qui" began to aide the humans in there plan for a Utopia in exchange to let the Qui share there minerals and resorces with the humans and vice versa.
2609: As the new beings inhabit earth a new breach in human evolution happened drematicly. The "Ki powers" were found in human abilities. Humans and Qui can now manipulate things that kept the univers in one with a total of 8 elementals
<b>Fire, Lightning, Earth, Psy, Dark, Water, Cosmic, and Holy.</b>
2896 War begins. The Qui have a mortal enemy in the univers known as "Jegans" a race of Zealots who believe that there God "Marquet" inherited the Universe to them. They will do all it takes to wipe any non-Jegan lifeform off the universe, the Qui are Mortal enemies with the Jegans. The Jegan and Human/qui war has begun.
3298: The planet Jegen was rotting away and the remaning Jegans figured that if they hurled the deteriorating tiny planet at the Neo Earth shell It can pierce a hole in it and make the earth withered up and barren. This did happen and while most of the Neo Earth inhabitants remain safe in the untouched sectors of the shell the earth was a dry and desolet place filled with radiation. Only one man remained on the earth when this happened, his name was Rufus Maddin, a master of the Kai arts. He got exposed to the radiation that the tiny planet. Now his mind is twisted and warped. His Kai Powers grew to godlike proportions. He is known as "Dark Maddin". He had the powers of a god. This influenced a following and caused many of the remaining inhabitants to follow his will. An empire was created after 300 years.
3607: A small resistance group known as "Blue Comet" is a group of Human and Qui men and women who train there bodies an there Kai powers to go against the Maddin empire they are being withered down to only a few thousand soldiers left.
Chapter I- The past
In the mountain ranges of a village located on what used to be the Rocky Mountains, this village called Kregore, a town that surrounds the castle of Maddin. Inside a reckless Blue Comet Sergeant wielding a sword is intruding the castle; his name is Joel Hiland. He dashes throughout the corridors of the castle as alarms go off and guards hunt him down. A pair of droids spots him running past a set of sensors.
"Stop the intruder," one of the robots speaks with a mechanical voice and wielding a beam blaster. "He must be killed" added another droid armed with a bladed tasor. Joel grips the hilt of his broadsword and with tremendous he swings it diagonally downward with enough force to slice the two death machines in half with sparks flying. He then reaches a large chamber door with pair of skulls mounted on the handle. Joel's Intercom radio headset goes off.
"Sergeant Hiland, what are you doing, your gonna be killed. Report back to the Arachnage base immediately before the enemy is alerted to your presence." Joel responds back after hitting the 'talk' button on his headset. "I can't just stop now, if I got on and kill Maddin then I can end this stupid war." "What," replied the mission commander, "Your gonna try and kill Maddin? That’s suicide, he's a god compared to you sergeant. I order you to return to base." Joel throws his headset on the floor and kicks down the door unaware of what lies inside that will change him forever.
Behind the door is a massive control room filed with panels with buttons and switches. Many monitors blanket the walls and one about 12X12 feet big. A large chair with its back facing the door of the room sits at the center. Joel takes a step inside the doorway.
"Maddin, you snide bastard," Joel yelled with his sword in his right hand. "You took all of humankind your slaves. Your robbed these people of there rights to live in comfort which is the way all humans deserve, now I've come to eliminate your grip on the world and set humanity free."
The figure of a dark, 7 foot tall, being covered from neck to toe in a black cloak and old bluish gray hair stands up out of the large chair and turns around with glowing red eyes that seem to see into the mind of there viewer. He speaks with a voice that pierced Joel’s heart with an icepic.
"Hmm, I don't understand it, back over 300 years ago the Jegans harmed us human beings for there own religious beliefs," Bellowed the evil Sorcerer, "They intend to kill us all, I am merely preparing humanity to fight back for what the Jegans have done to us."
"Don't give me that crap!" Yelled the disgruntled sergeant. "You had intentions to use humans for manual labour and kill them off when they are too weak to work. I’m here to make sure that your tyrannical grip on the system is gone, and for what you did to father years ago.”
Joel grips the handle of his sword and dashes at the lumbering sorcerer. He swings the blade at Maddins neck with a loud CLANG to be heard with no physical damage done to him. Joel lands on his feet looking at the wizard with surprised face. Maddin thrusts out the palm of his left hand, a burst of black energy waves launches from his palm and knocks Joel back about 12 yards and stops by slamming into a wall. Joel gets up staggering.
“Uhh… damn you.” Grunts the sergeant “Why are you so strong” Maddin walks towards Joel putting his hand on Joel’s bloodstained hair.
“Such a waste of good work labour, it’s a shame that you must die!” Said Maddin as his hand thrusts high voltage energy throughout Joel’s small body electrocuting him, his arms and legs flail around as he shrieks in pain that can shatter glass. Joel falls on the floor unconscious. Maddin then looks towards one of his castle windows. He thrusts out his hand and the window opens. Maddin picks up Joel’s unconscious body by the neck and heads towards the window, he stands on the balcony holding Joel up in the air with his feet dangling below the balcony floor, Maddin sneered as he let the comatose soldier loose as he falls. “Farewell little rodent!”
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I started writing my novels so this is the 1st chapter of my first one.
2219, Humanity has forgotten there differences and began to work together for the good of the future. They began on a project known as "Neo Earth" A project that took many years to start successfully. The plan was to encase the earth in a large metal shell to replace that already withering Ozone layer also to give more of the human race some living quarters because the human population was booming.
2487, The Neo earth shell was near finished untill a race of Superintelligant extraterrestrial beings known as the "Qui" began to aide the humans in there plan for a Utopia in exchange to let the Qui share there minerals and resorces with the humans and vice versa.
2609: As the new beings inhabit earth a new breach in human evolution happened drematicly. The "Ki powers" were found in human abilities. Humans and Qui can now manipulate things that kept the univers in one with a total of 8 elementals
<b>Fire, Lightning, Earth, Psy, Dark, Water, Cosmic, and Holy.</b>
2896 War begins. The Qui have a mortal enemy in the univers known as "Jegans" a race of Zealots who believe that there God "Marquet" inherited the Universe to them. They will do all it takes to wipe any non-Jegan lifeform off the universe, the Qui are Mortal enemies with the Jegans. The Jegan and Human/qui war has begun.
3298: The planet Jegen was rotting away and the remaning Jegans figured that if they hurled the deteriorating tiny planet at the Neo Earth shell It can pierce a hole in it and make the earth withered up and barren. This did happen and while most of the Neo Earth inhabitants remain safe in the untouched sectors of the shell the earth was a dry and desolet place filled with radiation. Only one man remained on the earth when this happened, his name was Rufus Maddin, a master of the Kai arts. He got exposed to the radiation that the tiny planet. Now his mind is twisted and warped. His Kai Powers grew to godlike proportions. He is known as "Dark Maddin". He had the powers of a god. This influenced a following and caused many of the remaining inhabitants to follow his will. An empire was created after 300 years.
3607: A small resistance group known as "Blue Comet" is a group of Human and Qui men and women who train there bodies an there Kai powers to go against the Maddin empire they are being withered down to only a few thousand soldiers left.
Chapter I- The past
In the mountain ranges of a village located on what used to be the Rocky Mountains, this village called Kregore, a town that surrounds the castle of Maddin. Inside a reckless Blue Comet Sergeant wielding a sword is intruding the castle; his name is Joel Hiland. He dashes throughout the corridors of the castle as alarms go off and guards hunt him down. A pair of droids spots him running past a set of sensors.
"Stop the intruder," one of the robots speaks with a mechanical voice and wielding a beam blaster. "He must be killed" added another droid armed with a bladed tasor. Joel grips the hilt of his broadsword and with tremendous he swings it diagonally downward with enough force to slice the two death machines in half with sparks flying. He then reaches a large chamber door with pair of skulls mounted on the handle. Joel's Intercom radio headset goes off.
"Sergeant Hiland, what are you doing, your gonna be killed. Report back to the Arachnage base immediately before the enemy is alerted to your presence." Joel responds back after hitting the 'talk' button on his headset. "I can't just stop now, if I got on and kill Maddin then I can end this stupid war." "What," replied the mission commander, "Your gonna try and kill Maddin? That’s suicide, he's a god compared to you sergeant. I order you to return to base." Joel throws his headset on the floor and kicks down the door unaware of what lies inside that will change him forever.
Behind the door is a massive control room filed with panels with buttons and switches. Many monitors blanket the walls and one about 12X12 feet big. A large chair with its back facing the door of the room sits at the center. Joel takes a step inside the doorway.
"Maddin, you snide bastard," Joel yelled with his sword in his right hand. "You took all of humankind your slaves. Your robbed these people of there rights to live in comfort which is the way all humans deserve, now I've come to eliminate your grip on the world and set humanity free."
The figure of a dark, 7 foot tall, being covered from neck to toe in a black cloak and old bluish gray hair stands up out of the large chair and turns around with glowing red eyes that seem to see into the mind of there viewer. He speaks with a voice that pierced Joel’s heart with an icepic.
"Hmm, I don't understand it, back over 300 years ago the Jegans harmed us human beings for there own religious beliefs," Bellowed the evil Sorcerer, "They intend to kill us all, I am merely preparing humanity to fight back for what the Jegans have done to us."
"Don't give me that crap!" Yelled the disgruntled sergeant. "You had intentions to use humans for manual labour and kill them off when they are too weak to work. I’m here to make sure that your tyrannical grip on the system is gone, and for what you did to father years ago.”
Joel grips the handle of his sword and dashes at the lumbering sorcerer. He swings the blade at Maddins neck with a loud CLANG to be heard with no physical damage done to him. Joel lands on his feet looking at the wizard with surprised face. Maddin thrusts out the palm of his left hand, a burst of black energy waves launches from his palm and knocks Joel back about 12 yards and stops by slamming into a wall. Joel gets up staggering.
“Uhh… damn you.” Grunts the sergeant “Why are you so strong” Maddin walks towards Joel putting his hand on Joel’s bloodstained hair.
“Such a waste of good work labour, it’s a shame that you must die!” Said Maddin as his hand thrusts high voltage energy throughout Joel’s small body electrocuting him, his arms and legs flail around as he shrieks in pain that can shatter glass. Joel falls on the floor unconscious. Maddin then looks towards one of his castle windows. He thrusts out his hand and the window opens. Maddin picks up Joel’s unconscious body by the neck and heads towards the window, he stands on the balcony holding Joel up in the air with his feet dangling below the balcony floor, Maddin sneered as he let the comatose soldier loose as he falls. “Farewell little rodent!”
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I started writing my novels so this is the 1st chapter of my first one.