[P] This is my contrbution to the arts..... hope you like it

He said: how lonely you are waiting
at the sunday park
I'll elude you
I will loose you
existing were no soul apart
you stand on a platform
your effigy dissolves in my hands
when I feel like someone to lie on
and I feel like someone to rely on
you can't wake up
illusions born of the air
something seems so precious there
I'll elude you
I will loose you
as rehersal of my despair
when I feel like someone to lie on
and I feel like someone to die on
you can't wake up
oh here me
I'm what you have left
here I am
in this necrologue of love
yes today life that I knew
so sick of all the people
a blind moon over to the window
where the night has become elizium
for the sleepless souls
and our days to come
you stand with dalila
may be I'll just pass-away
or may be I'll stay
but I feel alive with you
and I feel some kind of heaven
when I feel deep inside her
I feel some kind of heaven
hear me
give me some kind of heaven
come in from the cold
I'll owe you my heart
be my shelter and refuge for the night
love of my life
pour your light on the faith
I can feel
make it real
in her sleep

That was very, very beautiful and melancholy. I should visit Arts and Writing more often.*_*

nice!

You should, its no longer collecting dust in the corner of the forums >.<

I appreciate the compliments...... i have others too if they are valid

you should see my poem >.<