[P] On the Prowl - a song I wrote

*Laughs* I’m in a pretty bad mood today so I’m just going to try to salvage a song outta my frustration, k? =^_^= Maybe writing something will help release some of this tension. If it isn't any good then oh well. . . these are my feelings so they don't have to be perfect, right? ^_^


-= On the Prowl =-

Verse 1

The demon has been unleashed
Scratching its claws against my skin
There’s no taking back this release
Now it’s the beginning of the end

Chorus

Blood brewing under the heat
( Reality fading )
Agitation nurturing the pain
( Light and dark debating )
Rage seething calmly underneath
( Good and evil relating )
Irritation driving away all that’s sane
( Abandonment baying )

Verse 2

The gift of life is the most precious gave
And yet so easily withered and dried
The balance teeters over the grave
Paying no heed to your unstable cries

Repeat Chorus

Bridge

The soft growling stirs the evil within
Nestled deeply and festering in the heart
All innocence left is condemned
As the last shred of dignity is ripped apart

Repeat Chorus X2

Covered in mortal sin
Destruction is on the prowl again


*Blinks* Eh. Not to bad since it was a spur of the moment thing. *Shrugs* Oh well. ^_^ I feel better just writing. Thanks for reading, I appreciate it.

That's nice. All you need is the chords, notes and a genre to fit in.

Not bad, I guess you were quite upset about something.

<i>The gift of life is the most precious gave</i> is the only part that doesn't sound quite right because I don't think that <i>gave</i> can be used in a sentence that way. It would sound better as <i>given</i>, but then that wouldn't go with <i>grave</i>...so I guess it's Artistic License at work. :)

Channels your emotions pretty well, if you made a single with it, I'd buy it. :D
It's better than I could have written.
I'm a poet, and hopefully and author someday. . . soon. . . but I'm not a singer nor a songwritter.
I envy you. . .

Nicely done, i could hear linkin' park singing it. You really should write some chords for it or something, it's very good. It displays emotion well and putting it to music would probably enhance it very much.

*Smiles* Oh! Thanks for reading you guys. ^_^

LOL Leeza . . . I know. I was looking at that and I was really gettin' frustrated with it. o_0;
Bwuaha! Stupid tenses . . . grrr . . . I hate English. 1_^

*Grins at Indelacio and Wind Shear* I do have music to it. ^_^ My friend Ska' (his nickname) already wrote the bass line for it while I've got the vocals. ^_^ *Smiles brightly* And it does have a Linkin Park feel to it, doesn't it? I'm so flattered by that. I <3 Linkin Park!

*Nods at Rinoa* Thank you very much!! I'm neither a song writer nor a singer but I do get pissed off and throw words together . . . ^_^ I usually write. I'm hoping to become a novelist as well. Good luck to both of our endeavors!!

Love and PEACE! - LadySteph

I'm neither a song writer nor a singer but I do get pissed off and throw words together . . . ^_^ I usually write.

Bah! You wrote that song, didn't you? Hmmm? And wouldn't that be considered song writing? :p

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