[P] Angry poem! Me bad ...

I wrote this when I was 17 and in a pretty bad mood >.< My English profs were like *that's creepy* and they still publish it at Halloween in the St. Thomas University paper. bof here it is:

I Simply Hate You

I'd rip the flesh
Off your bones
And listen to your screams
Laughing while you begged

I'd tear out your eyes
Fron the sockets of your skull
Just to leave you in the darkness
You created with my hate.

I'd take your bones
Break them one by one
I'd pull out the nails from your flesh
Slowly without mercy

I'd rip out your hair
With flesh still hangning desperately,
Spread the crimson colour
That screams from the wounds.

AS I would hang your naked lifeless body
up in your room
I'd dismantle you
Piece by repulsive piece

I'd nail your hands
To a wall
Your feet
To the Floor

There you would rott
The insects would eat your soul
And you would never see the end
Of my gentle wrath
Its a shame you were out today

yup yup, that's what happens when you cheat on a devoted girlfriend >.< Luckily I am not that obsessed anymore heh

I have a nicer one to post I have to dig it out first >.<

How spectacularly disturbing. And well written too, avoiding that whole overdramatic and cliched "And the hope that springs from the well of eternity, clenching my heart in desparate sorrow" crap. Well done indeed.

Thanks Blanco Meow =)

*Mumbles: sounds like something I want to do to a certain someone I know. . .* huh? oh, right, a reply. . . Very well written, full of anger and hatred, didn't stray on emotion or anything of the sort. . . Very good, and morbid me loved it :D. :P

Yay for morbidity!

Yea, being morbid's awesome :p
There's no such thing as too morbid w/ anything, especially poetry or music :D


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