[S] The City of Perpetual Rain (FF9 lemon.. PG-13)

I posted this before the old forum got shut down, so I decided to repost it here. I made a couple of changes to it, but it's still basically the same. One-shot fluff between Kuja and a certain beautiful young general (though I did leave a lot to the imagination...). Beatrix's POV. Enjoy! :love:

WOW!!!!!!!!! that end part was goood. *taking a cold shower :eek: * How embaressing :blush:


I hope you made more. I would like to read them. :D:D

Please don't double-post, use the edit/delete button to edit your posts. Thanks.:) ~ Big D

Well, I don't know how long it'll take, but I've been trying to write a "novelization" of FF1. I haven't had much time lately because of work and school, but if I ever get it finished, I'll be sure to post it here. :D

What do you think about me writing this from Kuja's point of view? I was thinking about it during work last night (I was bored :D )

Originally posted by Freya Coral
What do you think about me writing this from Kuja's point of view? I was thinking about it during work last night (I was bored :D )


That would be way awesome. I would love to read his point of view definatly. :D :D :D As you can tell Kuja is my favorite on FF9. :love: :love: Beatrix is totally awesome. A woman after my own heart. (girl power!!!) Thats probably why I like your story so much.
Cant wait to read "novelization" of FF1. When you get it done. :excited:

Due to Kuja's being a guy and his almost poetic way of speaking, it'll be a lot harder to write from his POV. But if I make it sound halfway like him, I'll let you read it. :D When I complete the game, I'll probably write something with Steinatrix in it--I LOVE that couple! They're so cute!!

Have you seen the Amano art of Steiner? drool.... :D

Originally posted by Freya Coral
Due to Kuja's being a guy and his almost poetic way of speaking, it'll be a lot harder to write from his POV. But if I make it sound halfway like him, I'll let you read it. :D When I complete the game, I'll probably write something with Steinatrix in it--I LOVE that couple! They're so cute!!

Have you seen the Amano art of Steiner? drool.... :D

WAY COOL!!! Love to read it. And I too think Steiner and Beatrix is such a CUTE couple. AWWWWW:love:
No I havent seen Amano art of Steiner but I am now once i get done here :D :D Hope to read anymore you got (mostly FF IX) Which I am on disc 3 now, getting close to the end. But I dont want to go after Kuja. He is my fav. :( Oh well I can play it again and he right back alive and deviouse as ever OHHH YEAHHH!! *drools* Me and bad boys :whoa: .

I think Steiner should have looked more like that in the game. (sniff...) Same for Amarant. :love:

Unfortunately, I haven't had much time lately to work on FF1 (due to real-life things such as school and work :( ) I've written parts here and there, but haven't completed a chapter yet. It should be pretty good--the Light Warriors actually have personalities! And romance too... :love:

I know what you mean. Steiner and Amarant would look good that way. :( Steiner mostly scince he and Beatrix falls for one another. She is way beautiful and he is well not handsome and that sucks, but beauty is only skin deep.

Real-life stuff to do, I know what you mean. XP But I still have time to be on here and other things as well. I guess I am not too busy like most people is now a days. :mog: No wonder I am soooooo bored............other than living in Misery...I mean Missouri. :tongue:

I hoping this works out I am tring out a sig I am putting on. If it work YAY!!! if not *grabs chainsaw*. Just kidding I wouldnt use it. :D

Work sucks, especially since I have Hitler as my boss (just kidding about that, but she's almost as bad :mad2: ) When I have the chance, I'll probably start looking for another job. OK, I'll stop complaining for now.

I want to edit my sig as well. I'd like to find a good picture of Steiner and Beatrix to put in my sig, but (at the risk of sounding like a complete idiot) I don't know how to put pictures in sigs.

If you've seen any good pics that I could use, please let me know! :D

Ok no problem. I do have a sceenshot that i got here of them holding eachother. its a cute sceenshot. i have that on my desktop. :D so adorable together awww. (ok snap out of it Angel.)

Hitler for a boss YIKES!!!! I have a question have you ever said to her HIE HITLER!!!!! When she is done telling you to do something or just being a witch. (if i spelled that right my German sucks :o ) But of couse you might get fired so dont do it. I dont want you to get fired. :( But it sounded good though :D

Originally posted by Angel_Reaper
Ok no problem. I do have a sceenshot that i got here of them holding eachother. its a cute sceenshot. i have that on my desktop. :D so adorable together awww. (ok snap out of it Angel.)

Hitler for a boss YIKES!!!! I have a question have you ever said to her HIE HITLER!!!!! When she is done telling you to do something or just being a witch. (if i spelled that right my German sucks :o ) But of couse you might get fired so dont do it. I dont want you to get fired. :( But it sounded good though :D

That would be funny. "Heil Hitler!" :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: Can't comment, too busy laughing my a$$ off (will continue to laugh for the next century...)

I would love to see the Steinatrix picture that you have. :love: If I can, I'd like to put text in it in a cool font that says "When the sky wears the moon as its pendant... I shall await you at the dock." (Or whatever that letter said.) PM me and send it as an attachment if you can. :D

did ya get the pics i sent ya? O_O If not .........now wheres that chainsaw at. :D
I thought you like that hiel hitler comment. I am such a :radred: :evilking: . and a smarty. :bgl:

Originally posted by Angel_Reaper
did ya get the pics i sent ya? O_O If not .........now wheres that chainsaw at. :D
I thought you like that hiel hitler comment. I am such a :radred: :evilking: . and a smarty. :bgl:

Yeah, I got those pics, they were so cute!! :love: I just haven't checked my mail in several days because this guy named Adrian (that I'm not interested in) keeps e-mailing me and it's getting on my nerves!
Adrian :shoot:
Can I borrow your chainsaw too?? :radred:

I am glad you like those pics. They are cute. I try and find more for ya if ya want. :)



lol Yeah sure. Clean it up when done though. ;) :radred:
But seriousely havent you told him you dont like him to leave ya alone? or he dont listen. :(

Sorry this took so long, but I finally e-mailed Adrian and (nicely) told him to leave me alone. If he persists, then I will have to use your chainsaw. :D But yeah, I would love to see some more Steinatrix pictures... they're so hard to find! :cry:

Thats alright. :) Hope he listens, if not the chainsaw will be ready for ya. :D I have it filled with gas and oil. lol :radred: :chuckle:
I try to find more of Steiner and Beatrix for ya. Hopefully I get lucky. :mog:

This really wasn't all that bad. It just seemed like you were taking that urge to write a lemon too far, by not going far enough. Do you see what I mean? There was a lot of implications towards sex, but it didn't really just COME FORWARD (except the last paragraph..lol)! I think from now on, you should really not fight the urge to write a lemon...and do write one. Just a suggestion! :)

Originally posted by Angel_Reaper
Thats alright. :) Hope he listens, if not the chainsaw will be ready for ya. :D I have it filled with gas and oil. lol :radred: :chuckle:
I try to find more of Steiner and Beatrix for ya. Hopefully I get lucky. :mog:

In case you were wondering, I'm still alive. I've just been in Dallas for the weekend. :D :D Adrian still won't leave me alone! :mad2: I saw him at my work a few days ago, but luckily I was able to get away before he started talking to me for two hours. Then he went so far as to send me a letter by snail mail (I guess he got my address from the phone book). I don't know what to do, short of getting a restraining order.

Send me your chainsaw!!! :radred: :radred: :radred:

So hows Big Dallas? :D

Jeeze what is that guy a stalker-like :eek: . SCARY THOUGHT! Restraning order might help ya. But here *grabs chainsaw and hands it to Freya Coral* use it well. ;) :radred: :radred: :radred: :radred: If the blade gets dull just tell me, I put on a new one. :radred:

(I swear people like that needs to get a life and listen for a change when a person says for them to leave them alone :mad2: *grabs Adrian and slaps him with a trout* :D

Originally posted by Angel_Reaper
So hows Big Dallas? :D

Jeeze what is that guy a stalker-like :eek: . SCARY THOUGHT! Restraning order might help ya. But here *grabs chainsaw and hands it to Freya Coral* use it well. ;) :radred: :radred: :radred: :radred: If the blade gets dull just tell me, I put on a new one. :radred:

(I swear people like that needs to get a life and listen for a change when a person says for them to leave them alone :mad2: *grabs Adrian and slaps him with a trout* :D

:lolz:

Dallas was fun, but my visit wasn't long enough. :cry: Adrian called me this morning, but I didn't answer since I have caller ID. Thank god for caller ID!!! :rock: I can't believe he still hasn't gotten the hint! :mad2: If you want, I could give you his e-mail address and you could tell him to leave me alone. :evilking: :evilking::radred: :radred:

Glad to hear Dallas was fun. :)

Caller ID definatly ROCKS! HECK YEAH!! :rock:
Well if you want you can. I dont know if he will listen, but I will try to help ya. ;) I see what I can do for ya. :D :radred: :radred:

OH forgot @_@ tell me your real name so he will not think its a prank or something else k. (stupid people dont know how to take hints :mad: :mad2: )

Check my profile for my real name. :D

He hasn't called today (watch out, he'll probably call as soon as I get offline now that I said it), but I expect he will in a couple of days. :rolleyes2 I doubt that he'll listen (he's persistent that way :mad2: ) but here it is: skycom2010@hotmail.com. Have at him!!!

Adrian---->:freak: :shoot:

Freya Coral and Angel_Reaper, please keep your conversations to PM or IM...not posts.