[p] THE WENCH!

To them I listened.
To them I heeded.
Realizing i knew
Something they didn't.

Her, I heard
And paid attention,
In the end
Learning a lesson.

I knew why
Choices were so
Yet where they are
I will not go.

I did what you said,
Are you happy now?
Look what happened!
This angered brow!

The wench came
The wench went
Because of them
She won this fight.

Tho' at you
Anger's not such.
It's directed towards
The wench in lust.

The whore of attention.
The looker of "appeal"
That sickened face
And her lackened seal.

I did what you said.
Look at me now,
Lying down here
Against the ground.

A tear of anger
Merged with pain
At who I listened,
Who left me sane.

So now I sit
Friendless in anger.
Immersed in pity
Of those I listened...

So go ahead,
Take the wench's side.
I don't care
I'll no longer hide.

I think some of your rhymes seem forced, and it might've been better had you not bothered with rhyming at all. But you get your point across.