[S] Self Control (Language may offend =P)

Scene: Nothing but pitch black darkness.

<i>"Um..."
"Yeah?"
"I wanna go out..."
"No."

"But.."
"NO."
"You know what happens when you get out."
"Shut up."
"You fu<i></i>ck up."
"Shut up! I do not! You wouldn't even KNOW!"
"Hey, don't you thi-"
"HEY! Both of you. God..."
"..."
"I don't even know why you bother."
"What did I just tell you?"
"You know he's not worth it. You can't keep him."
"BE QUIET! Shut the f<i></i>uck up right now and don't you ever-"
"Ever what? What you gonna do? You want this."
"It's not like that..."
"Isn't it? Heh."
"Shut up."
"..."
<font size=1>"asshole"</font>
"Right, that's it, you little fu<i></i>cker."
"Aaaargh! Leave me alone!"
"You wanna get out?! You'll KILL US ALL! You fu<i></i>cking piece of -"
*thud*
*crying*
"uuggghhh..."
"..."
"..."
"Daddy..."
"Shut. Up."
"I need to get out, Daddy, I can't be like this..."
"I told you."
"I told you..."
"Why are you here?"
"You need me. To get rid of him."
"I don't want to ge-"
"YES YOU DO."
"I DO NOT."
"..."
"So what are you gonna do? Starve the fu<i></i>cker?"
"J- ... just leave me alone."
"You know what? I'll do it. Fu<i></i>ck you."
"YOU WILL NOT."
"Haha!"
"You little fuc<i></i>ker! Stay put!"
"You </i>can't,<i> you idiot. Haven't I told you?"
"Haha!"
"Grrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaargh!"
"Ah!"
"..."
"..."
"..."
"...what the fu<i></i>ck?"
"I told you."
"Fu<i></i>ck... fuc<i></i>king... f<i></i>uck..."
"Yeah. But I need him."
*shakes head*
"I know. But you have to understand."
"I hate him."
"I know. Just leave him to me."
"You've been to way too many Tupperware parties lately."
"I haven't been to a -"
"Yeah, but you know what I mean."
"We'll see."
*sigh*
"..."
"..."
"...Daddy..."
"Just leave him alone, fu<i></i>ckass."
"Shut up! Fu<i></i>ck you!"
"Heh."
"Fu<i></i>cking asshole."
"..."
"..."
"...Daddy..."
</i>"No."<i>
"..."
"..."
"..."
*crying*
"Hey..."
"I'm sorry... I'm so sorry..."
"I want to go out. I want -"
"WE ALL FUC<i></i>KING WANT HER, OKAY? SHE'S NOT COMING BACK!"
"I WANT MY MUMMY!"
*crying*
"I want her too. I want her too."
"..."
"I want her too..."
"Let's go."
"Yeah."
"Okay."

And they were gone.</i>

Yeesh. What did I do? :cry:

What happened to the cuss filter?? I'm curious.

I overrided it since this is the Writer's Corner. The thread title giives warning, but without the cussing, the story wouldn't be what it is.

Paul: You're watering the plants in the room nextdoor.

Ok, I see.

Hey I read that all, but I cant understand what was going on. Only scene I can picture is there in a car, or in a house or whatever. An the little's girl mother died? An then they all say lets' go... Yea. Nice story by the way.

It's up to your own imagination. :) I have my own view of it, but I chose to tell only two people what it is.

I see transgression from childhood to adulthood in those three 'people' or consciences. There was a lot of anger in it too, probably because the loss of her, it seems this her is mommy. *shrugs* I can't make much else of it except that it's a darn good emotional piece.