[P] ---Alone---

I decided to show my unknown sensative side. I hope you enjoy it,
Dark Paladin Cecil.

As I walked through the crowd they stared,
Wondering if they were safe from harm.
Alone, unwanted, with nary a souls care,
I wandered through the slums of filth,
Feeling the pain, anguish, and sorrow.
Even here, I feel secluded, forgotten,
With no one to care for and no love to give.
---Alone---

Is this based on you, or the game you are making? Its a good little poem, it even rhymes!

This is just something I decided to write, although I will be putting some of this stuff in my game (or something like it). If you want to know all current info on my game go to the website. If I get good reviews on this than maybe I'll post another.

I like your poem. Make more plezzzz.:) ;) :) ;) :) ;)

As the wind blew softly though the hills,
The ground trembled as if afraid of the impending battle.
The grass shook under the weight of coming feet,
and the earth itself seemed to wish to hide.
The armies are ready to clash in the blink of an eye,
And soon the earth would turn red and cry.

*putting my chin in my hands reading your poems and wondering its to bad i cant hear you say them to all of us :( * WOW!!! you good. I :love: your poems. Hope I will read more ;) . (but prefer you reading them to me it makes it sound better) :greenie:

I often wonder when you will return,
your gentle breath cooling itself on my cheek.
Your hair, free and untamed, yet lovely as a lily,
reminds me of all the things I once loved.
And so I patiently await the day my love will return,
And bring back the heart I gave as a gift so long ago.

*swoooos* OH MAN YOU ARE GOOD!!!!

Thanks for the praise, though I'm sure if anyone tried they could make a poem, if they had the heart and feel to do it.

True, but I am too shy to put mine on here for people to read :blush:

Originally posted by Angel_Reaper
True, but I am too shy to put mine on here for people to read :blush:
This may sound cliched but if it presses on your heart to write than do it. The worst that can happen is people, who most likely do not even know you as a person, do not like your way of expressing youself and that is their problem. I would like to hear you poems so if you won't post them than please PM me one.;)

Wow, it's been a while. Well, with school and all, I really haven't done much ;). Ah well, here are some poems I wrote in the last hour or so:).

Feeling Alone

So many people are in the world,
So how can sometimes feel alone.
With no one to talk to and no one to listen
To the problems that I have that are unknown.
There are many times I wish I was,
Able to let everyone know what I felt.
Than I would never feel alone,
And always have someone with me.

Friends

Friends are a thing that everyone needs.
For they help keep you up in cheer.
Without friends life is a bore,
And nothing seems to be enjoyable.
Friends help friends stay in good spirits,
And join them when they need a lift
Of hope to get them through tough times.
Friends are an essential piece of life

Always Hope Endures

When life throws you a curve,
And you don’t know what to do.
Just remember no matter what,
Always hope endures.
And when your life is bad,
And you can’t seem to find good.
Think of this and recall,
Always hope endures.

Family

Family is means a caring group,
That helps you through tough times.
Even when it seems no one cares,
Your family will always be there.
Even if they aren’t related,
Caring people can be family.
And if everyone cared enough,
Then everyone would have a family.



Leaving

Leaving people is always hard,
Whether by choice or by fate.
But the person will always be with you,
In your heart.
Leaving is a part of life,
That no one can seem to avoid.
Whether by death or by other,
Leaving is always a hard thing to do.

Oh yeah, sorry for the double post Mods. Didn't think this fit with previous post. ;)