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Leen-Leen · 04-27-2008, 08:08 PM

Ooh, yay, another chapter! Poor Hirle.

To me it seemed like there were a few run-on sentences, and a few grammar mistakes here and there, mehh. This chapter wasn't as interesting as the other ones, maybe 'cause it needs more Celia!! xD

Leen-Leen sometimes is tokidoki Location: What, you can't see me?	#61 Ooh, yay, another chapter! Poor Hirle. To me it seemed like there were a few run-on sentences, and a few grammar mistakes here and there, mehh. This chapter wasn't as interesting as the other ones, maybe 'cause it needs more Celia!! xD
04-27-2008, 08:08 PM